AsYa SS: Aabhi Ja Tu Kahi Se updated part 12 on page 58

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A gush of cold, chilly winter wind blew her hair softly as she made her way out of her office. Zoya clutched her coat more protectively around her and rubbed her glove-clad palms to provide more warmth to her body. She hugged herself tightly to fight the freezing wind which bit the exposed parts of face and neck. She was crossing the children's park when something caught her eyes, stopping her in her tracks. Though the scene which was unfolding in front of her was heart-warming but it paralyzed her wounded heart with such an unexplainable, cold pain that it made her shudder.

There was a little three or four year old cute, chubby girl who was trying to reach her ball which was stuck in the brunches of a tree, much taller than her. On not getting any success even after several tries, she was at the verge of crying when her dad came there. He picked her and placed her on his shoulders, resulting the little girl to get her ball easily. As he put her down, she threw her arms around him and pecked him on his cheek. She had the widest smile on her face and utmost admiration in her eyes for her superhero while her father had that most pure love etched on his every feature which a parent can have for his child.

The sharp claws of some deep, cruel truths wounded her shattered her once more as silent tears rolled down her cheeks. All her life she had seek truth but if she had even the slightest idea about the destruction which was bound with her biggest reality , she would have never dared to quest for the truth. She was shaking uncontrollably as ghost of her past started to could her mid, just like the black clouds in the sky which was slowly darkening it, covering the sun but suddenly she felt warm as an arm wrapped around her shoulders. She looked towards her side to find Him standing there, with a small smile tugging at the corner of his lips. He looked into her eyes with so much love, care and assurance that it made her heart flutter. It evoked a sense of security in her scared heart, a feeling which no one else could make her feel. He shook his head a little to indicate her to stop crying and she smiled a little. She didn't know how but he was always there whenever she broke down, consoling her, caring for her and making her feel that nothing can go wrong with him by her side. She closed her eyes and leaned on his warm palm as she felt him gently cupping her face , wiping her tears with his thumb-pad. A soft sigh escaped her lips as she saw inching towards her face, their breaths mingling.

Zoya came out of her revere by the loud ringing of ice-cream van's bell and realty slapped her hard on her face. He could never be here. Because she herself had closed all his ways to her. She knew what she had done to him was wrong but it wasn't her fault also. She didn't have any other choice but to run away. She couldn't bear to see hate for her in his eyes. Though she was pretty sure that even after this also, he must be living somewhere hating her with all his heart for her escapade. A bitter chuckle escaped her lips as her heart reminded her that he didn't love her. She was always a misfit for him and he might be happily living now with his perfect fit. Her heart cried painfully but still a little part of it objected saying it wasn't the truth as it had witnessed immense love for her in his eyes.

She brushed her thoughts as she spotted a church on the other side of the road. She didn't know what compelled her to do so but it looked like her feet had a mind of their own as they took her inside the church, amidst the roaring thunders which indicated the ensuing storm. She knelt in front of the Christ. The candles casted a soft glow on her angelic face as she prayed for her only family, her world whose happiness means the most to her.

- Please always keep them safe and happy. Fulfill all his dreams and shower him with all the happiness of this world.'

She came out of the church, somewhat at peace after praying. But her peace was short-lived as her gaze collided with the man standing in front of her, eyes glistening with thousand questions, relief and an emotion which she didn't dare to name. the sky started to pour down all the emotions which were running in their hearts in the form of pearly rain-drops, soaking them as she stood in front of her past, her love, her Asad after two years.


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Hey guys I am back with my nonsense and crap. My TS will end this week as it has only one chapter left. So I thought to start something new in its place and wrote this. This will have 7-8 chapters I guess. Let me know if you guys want me to continue it. Leave your likes and comments behind. Thank you😊



part 1- page 5

part 2- page 8

part 3- page 13

part 4 - page 18

part 5-page 24

part 6-page 29

part 7- page 35

part 8- page 40

part 9- page 44

part 10-page 50

part 11- page 54


part 12- page 58
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Omg! Yayy
titir i love u 🤗
ths is the bst diwali gift ever
mysteriously written abt the past
bt love remains still
and it all came out as if m watchng a film
well written the beginning where zoya watches a dad helping hs daughter and love nd affection makes her ponder over her life
very well written the part asad comes close
jst an illusion . BEAUTIFULLY written the scene out of church under a pouring sky
i wanna read more pls try updating ths soon pls
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Res fr rada ,arpita, neha and all those who's gonna read ths
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Jas meri cuckoo dekh mai sudhar gai
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Sb readers ke liye res kiya
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Jas tere liye to special res kiya
ab naraaz na hona pls
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Aur aj to pg b ni khaya
oops pg to mai kha gai 🤣
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res
Unres

Beautiful
Marvelous
Hope asad stops her n gives her company

Would love to read more
I sincere request writing style
Z:ghhhjjjk
A:dog hike

I m actually friendly with this style of writing

It is just a suggestion
Do take it that serious
All the best di

Hope I didn't hurt u

Cnt soon
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Interesting start dear
Already in love with the prologue
Looking forward to the story
Please continue soon😊

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