New Asya SS: Heart to the test, Chap7, 28-8-16

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

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Posted: 9 years ago

#61

Very intense update & u write it beautifully. He has an accident & lost his lower body power. He hurt Zoya with his words & hurt himself as well as he was hurting her. It was difficult for anyone to accept it. Feel sad for Zoya as she wanted to be his strength but he didn't let her. I must appreciate u to choose that type of plot. Looking forward for next update soon. Wanted to see how Zoya fight & make him realise. Hope she will be successful soon. Thanks for pm

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MOnkEy_rAngEr

@MOnkEy_rAngEr

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Posted: 9 years ago

#62

Veryyy beautiful chapter

Asya fall into the cruel n dark trap of destiny

Hope everything get well between asya soon

Plz continue it sooonnner:-))

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aleena

@aleenaansari

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Posted: 9 years ago

#63

Such a heart touchng chptr...
Sooo emotional...
Luvd ur writng...

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--Sumi--

@--Sumi--

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Posted: 9 years ago

#64

Hey rada

What can I say

I loved it

Beautifully written

It's new concept to me

It's true

Their life is mismatched with offscreen life

Maximum marriage broken with out any trust

In this field they have to manage physical relationships also.

It's the main reason

Both of them have trust with each other

I felt bad for Asya

Asad understood her needs and requirements

Mostly manly ego came in between relationship

Means if wife got success than husband then he felt low or loser I front of family and arround the world

It's unfortunately happens with asya

Very very well written

Update ASAP

Sorry elove get deleted by mistake

Started to write again pout

Lots of love muah

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Shaila Banu

@Shailu..

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Posted: 9 years ago

#65

So sad one yaar 😭
Asad has changed so much poor zoya
Continue soon

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radadolcevida

@radadolcevida

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Posted: 9 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: --Arpita--
awesome update...
heart touching...
loved it very much..
painful time in AsYas life...
continue soon

thank u so much
it is a painful time for both of them indeed, but in the next chapter they will talk about
both are going to cross many test, especially Zoya for Asad.
Thanks a lot for your support

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radadolcevida

@radadolcevida

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Posted: 9 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh
Very intense update & u write it beautifully. He has an accident & lost his lower body power. He hurt Zoya with his words & hurt himself as well as he was hurting her. It was difficult for anyone to accept it. Feel sad for Zoya as she wanted to be his strength but he didn't let her. I must appreciate u to choose that type of plot. Looking forward for next update soon. Wanted to see how Zoya fight & make him realise. Hope she will be successful soon. Thanks for pm

Yes it is intense and I wanted to be just this way, and glad that you like it dear
Asad felt disgust of himself and forget about the love that he had for her, he needs to be himself again before. Zoya will fight hard and it will most of the time her journey of love.
thank u for your support and hope to update soon

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radadolcevida

@radadolcevida

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Posted: 9 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: ajanshul
Veryyy beautiful chapter
Asya fall into the cruel n dark trap of destiny
Hope everything get well between asya soon
Plz continue it sooonnner:-))

Asad was just affected deeply by this accident and he doesn't feel himself worth to be with her.
Love and ego were fighting here.
It will be fine but not soon, before Zoya will go through hard challenges
Thanks a lot for your comment