New Asya SS: Heart to the test, Chap7, 28-8-16 - Page 6

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: MayurChan

Hey Rada..
What shall I say now...
I am just at loss of words for this part...this clearly explain to a certain extend about Asad & Zoya's strange relationship..
And I feel Emotionally & even Physically...this story is going to be hard hitting to write than the previous others you wrote..this is my POV.
You know i don't remember much..but i have seen cases like this on TV...and what Asad is going through is so hard on any person who actually wanted to make it big...now is restricted to a wheelchair..
That whole starting part btw ASYA before the flashback..where U revealed that AsYa are married and Asad is Physically handicapped...was brilliantly written..
And sincerely...this is going to be a tough road for them & even me...because i don't like reading such stuff ( The pain & Anguish ones )...but I will..
Kudos to you for the Plot..
Continue soon.



hello Mayur,
I feel that you read this one before the other story, it's better this way 😃.
This chapter reveal a lot about them and how, in comparison with the past, they got seperated emotionally. At least, why Asad pushed her away.
It's going to be hard to write I agree, because being able to write about disability, it's always delicate, but I will focus more on their journey of love.
I wanted to talk about life and how it can be impredictable. Sometimes, you can lose someone so suddenly in the worst case or lose a part of you. life can be strangely beautiful and cruel.
Next chapter will be tough between them, but they will be closer, at least they will talk about. And thank you so much to still be here to read stuff, I know you don't like to read, it means a lot to me.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ayat20

Felt bad for asya

Both love each other but fate has played a very dirty game with them



I know it's hard for them
It is their test in love and they will have to fight their own demon to be together again.
Thank you so much for your comment dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: LoveSonu2408

A very emotnal & heart touching stry.
I thnk asad hs his own insecurity,he jst using d professnal issue.
Feeling bad 4 both of thm.thr happily marraid life jst ruined by a accidnt.
Waiting 4 nxt updt.very intriguing.lv it.
Thnks 4 pm.cnt soon



yes, it is 😭
you said it perfeclty and understand Asad's feeling, how he was on the top and now, he was feeling bad, being with a successful woman while he was stuck to his chair.
Life is impredictable and it was their test.
thank you so much for your comment Dear 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely story
A bit sad
But I love it
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Originally posted by: SanKsgian

Lovely story
A bit sad
But I love it



Thanks a lot for following this story, even if it's sad as you mention
🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nothing more to say but I hope asad recover soon. And he really needs to understand his love and his wife
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Originally posted by: Tunailuvsahil

Nothing more to say but I hope asad recover soon. And he really needs to understand his love and his wife



he will but later and he will understand in hard way.
thanks for your comment dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome update...
heart touching...
loved it very much..
painful time in AsYas life...
continue soon

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