New Asya SS: Heart to the test, Chap7, 28-8-16 - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
#41
Really very heart touching dear
It was so intense
Feeling really bad for zoya but i guess asad now has his own set of insecurities after the accident and zoya's professional career is just adding to it
Hoping for the things to be normal soon
I guess now i am understanding the meaning of the title
Please continue soon😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42
Aww
Its so sad
I hope they become one again
😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43
That was written brilliantly. .
very emotional and heaet touching..!
Life sometimes puts us into difficult situations. . The attitude we have towards these says it all and help us deal with them..
asad is so shattered with his situation and is on self pity mode instead of looking around and appreciating his wife to be still there for him..
Zoya on the other took the situation strongly and is fighting it to let it not affect their relationship..
Hope asad understands zoya and doesn't ruin their relation..
awesome update rada. :) you are so gifted..! :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44
Hey Rada..
What shall I say now...
I am just at loss of words for this part...this clearly explain to a certain extend about Asad & Zoya's strange relationship..
And I feel Emotionally & even Physically...this story is going to be hard hitting to write than the previous others you wrote..this is my POV.
You know i don't remember much..but i have seen cases like this on TV...and what Asad is going through is so hard on any person who actually wanted to make it big...now is restricted to a wheelchair..
That whole starting part btw ASYA before the flashback..where U revealed that AsYa are married and Asad is Physically handicapped...was brilliantly written..
And sincerely...this is going to be a tough road for them & even me...because i don't like reading such stuff ( The pain & Anguish ones )...but I will..
Kudos to you for the Plot..
Continue soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
Felt bad for asya
Both love each other but fate has played a very dirty game with them
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47
A very emotnal & heart touching stry.
I thnk asad hs his own insecurity,he jst using d professnal issue.
Feeling bad 4 both of thm.thr happily marraid life jst ruined by a accidnt.
Waiting 4 nxt updt.very intriguing.lv it.
Thnks 4 pm.cnt soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: muskaan17rocks

Really very heart touching dear

It was so intense
Feeling really bad for zoya but i guess asad now has his own set of insecurities after the accident and zoya's professional career is just adding to it
Hoping for the things to be normal soon
I guess now i am understanding the meaning of the title
Please continue soon😊



thank you so much,
it was indeed intense between them, and let's say that the next chapter will be more
You explain perfectly Asad's pov as you say, she became famous and desirable while he was no more the same man for her.
Still the story will go through many twist and I hope reader will appreciate them.
Thanks you so much for your comment dear 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: KeyaHira2

Aww

Its so sad
I hope they become one again
😭



I know and they will but after sometimes and some chapter.
Asad and Zoya will have to stand by each other side, and Asad will have to understand that he was wrong.
Thanks a lot for your comment 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: cutie15

That was written brilliantly. .
very emotional and heaet touching..!
Life sometimes puts us into difficult situations. . The attitude we have towards these says it all and help us deal with them..
asad is so shattered with his situation and is on self pity mode instead of looking around and appreciating his wife to be still there for him..
Zoya on the other took the situation strongly and is fighting it to let it not affect their relationship..
Hope asad understands zoya and doesn't ruin their relation..
awesome update rada. :) you are so gifted..! :)



thanks you so much for this compliment 😳
it is intense, I mingled a past and present to show the contrast between the time, which help to increase the intense emotion that they are both going through.
Life is so impredictable and I wanted to mention about this fact.
You said it perfectly, he was more focus on his lose than what he have for the moment, and he will learn with her and because of her how to accept his fate. She will be his only support in this story.
He will understand her, but not right now
thank you so much for your sweet comment 🤗

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