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Sumi Roy

@LoveSonu2408

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

wonderful start rashmi dear...

awsm banner..thnks rie tht ur banner inspire rashmi so much thts why we r going to read ths story😆

bt tell me sanam isme hai ya nehi..bcz u gv only ahil's name in the title..

&bar bar main tujhe pm vejne k lia thnks nhi bol sakti balki u better send me pm or else...jo hoga dekh lena.😆

nw cnt soon

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NanduVijay

@NanduVijay

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Prologue us interesting. To be honest, I can't imagine Aahil without Sanam. For me, Aahil is incomplete without Sanam.

Second thing, I can't see Aahil in pain anymore . We have had enough in the show itself. Since, Sanam is not a part of the story, except dream sequences, I don't know how much I will enjoy reading this.

But definitely will read your story.

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sahil333

@sahil333

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Aawww! Red-Dil-E mentioned me, how sweet of you! ☺️🤗

What a wonderful, but emotional start Rashmi. Reading just the prologue I already teared up 😭.

OMG, 5 lonely long years huh! And Sanam only in his dreams 😭

I feel...I feel...emptiness...like my Aahil

Update soon please, looking forward to it.

Thx for the pm!

PS! It would be nice if you can use the pic as the banner if it fits this story. Credit the maker...😉

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Rashmi

@Intuitive

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
interesting start...

Thank you so much!

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Rashmi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: muskaan17rocks
Very interesting start
Have always wanted to read a story like this and thanks to you the wish is being fulfilled
But just clarify that as sanam is not a part of the story, this then means that she is actually dead and how is aahil's life after losing his life. Just clarify please
Really looking forward to read the story and really excited for it
Please continue soon
Will be waiting impatiently
Thanks for the pm😊

Thank you so much rey! Glad you wanted to read it. :)

Yes, Sanam is not the part of the story. Cause like I said it's purely Aahil although there is Rehan and Lateef(without which the story cannot go further, because single character won't work😆) and Sanam's dream sequences here and there. Because in Aahil, Sanam is there she should be depicted.

Thank you So Much!

Will continue soon! :)

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Rashmi

@Intuitive

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: kimty1230
nice prologue dear

Thank you so much dear! :)

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Rashmi

@Intuitive

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: Junoon-e-SaHil
Rashmi! This is so amazing! A story solely based on Aahil. Always wanted to read such a story, I even tried writing it, but never was able to pen it down.
Now I can read here, yayy for me! 😛

Wonderful start, so eager to know how this turns out! Thank you for writing such a story! Update soon!

Prags!🤗

Being an awesome writer yourself, it would be yayy for me to be reviewed. 😃

IKR, Aahil! Love Him So Much! And the way it went all on he made a stand for himself, Aahil Raza Ibrahim had a really deep meaning that could stand alone. So, yes I myself am loving to pen it down. 😛😆

Thank You So Much! Will cont. soon! :)

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Rashmi

@Intuitive

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: mahwash22
Looks promising.. Lots of angst in the first phase.. 👍🏼 Do update soon..

Thank you so much Mahu!

Will cont. soon! :)

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Rashmi

@Intuitive

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Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: Humnava
I dnt knw what prblm is occurring...bt I'm unable to like the post... 😔 That's why I'm rplying to say that the prologue was vry nyc...😊 plzzz cont soon...nd plzz send me pm when u update ur nxt part...😃

That's no problem re.

Thank You So Much!

Will cont. soon and def send you PM! :)

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Rashmi

@Intuitive

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Posted: 9 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: tazzz
omg is sanam dead in this? awww... are there any chances of her being alive in this? or will she appear only in dream sequences 😭
but the prologue was intense. it seems interesting. 👍🏼

I broke my heart too. But, somewhere along the line Aahil was a stand-alone chara. So I wanted to pen this down. Sanam will be alive, not physically, in his thoughts, abstract form and some dream sequences. Really Sorry!😭

Thank You So Much Rey! :)

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