Aahil FF- Without You! Important Note 1 and 2 page 15!

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Hope...hurts the most. When you know something is not gonna happen, when you know the impossible is certainly impossible, when it's too late for miracles to happen, when you know hope is dead and yet...hope. 5 years all alone, suffering, shattered dreams, unable to reach my destination, helpless, pain, despair, devastated, hopelessly hopeful, lost...

Time doesn't heal everything, sometimes they just turn scars.

The ocean bore numerous ripples, each wave with a story of their own. As they splashed to the shore, reality hit hard. I was existing, breathing...without her, but not alive. The sun was setting, but my heart's disturbance never went to slept.

A thousand thoughts ran in my mind as I saw the numerous waves flowing blissfully, endlessly, beautifully.

Standing in front of the infinite bearing ocean, I questioned. What for I was in this life? The wave lived to stay in the ocean, what when I was taken away from my destination? Why was I still here?

Who Am I? Why Am I here?

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey People! 🤗Back with a new story! I'll be updating the desires by next Saturday most probably. Meanwhile when our Red Rie @Sahil333 was posting pics I got inspired by one of the pic and wrote this. 😆 Rie🤗

It is basically an Aahil FF after he lost Sanam, at the core a love story. Sanam will come up in a few dream sequences, otherwise it is how after 5 years Aahil is still in pain and will ask himself a few important questions of life after he loses his Sanam, the only thing he lived for, where his life resides. Rehan will be retained along with Lateef. And in a part I would like to put up ASR and Khushi. Rest will be new characters here and there, playing some important and some small roles...

Not bringing Sanam I know I'm breaking so many hearts. I broke mine too😭 But for me Aahil was also a stand-alone chara, so it's on him. Love him.❤️

The Chapter 1 will be up soon based on the response. Please tell me if I should continue. 😃


To all the Aahilians and Sahilans and all who are reading this🤗Thank you so much! Do tell me if I should continue! Appreciations and Criticisms are welcome anytime! 🤗

Edited by Dil-E-Pagalpan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very interesting start
Have always wanted to read a story like this and thanks to you the wish is being fulfilled
But just clarify that as sanam is not a part of the story, this then means that she is actually dead and how is aahil's life after losing his life. Just clarify please
Really looking forward to read the story and really excited for it
Please continue soon
Will be waiting impatiently
Thanks for the pm😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Rashmi! This is so amazing! A story solely based on Aahil. Always wanted to read such a story, I even tried writing it, but never was able to pen it down.
Now I can read here, yayy for me! 😛

Wonderful start, so eager to know how this turns out! Thank you for writing such a story! Update soon!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Looks promising.. Lots of angst in the first phase.. 👍🏼 Do update soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I dnt knw what prblm is occurring...bt I'm unable to like the post... 😔 That's why I'm rplying to say that the prologue was vry nyc...😊 plzzz cont soon...nd plzz send me pm when u update ur nxt part...😃
Edited by Humnava - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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omg is sanam dead in this? awww... are there any chances of her being alive in this? or will she appear only in dream sequences 😭
but the prologue was intense. it seems interesting. 👍🏼
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice prologue
Interesting to read how Aahil spend 5 yrs without Sanam & still living
Continue soon plz
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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very interesting
continue soon
thanx for pm

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