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Aheli

@iam_aheli_98

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Posted: 9 years ago

#41

Awesome update 👏 Eagerly waiting for the nxt update...😃

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chicksoup

@chicksoup

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+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#42

I loved this piece, actually..because it is all about Ahil...and Sanam living on in his thoughts. After one point. that is how Sanam existed for me- as a part of Ahill's mind. Weird! I don't know how Gul let that happen...one of her MLs actually refused to be an extension of the FL...grew out of the poster that was to confine him strictly...He jumped out and lived a life of his own..Tanveer Begum was largely responsible for liberating that Ahil too...unlike every other hero, Ahil was a son, as well as a lover...and that glimpse of the brother you elaborated on..👏

Wonderfully Ahil- centric chapter.😉

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chicksoup

@chicksoup

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Posted: 9 years ago

#43

😉

Wonderfully Ahil- centric! 👏

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Sush

@coffeebuff

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#44

Hey CA3 😆 🤗

I finally came to comment. How surprising?! 😲😆 Well, I guess it won't be so much from now on as I would always be late for this. 😛

Anyway to your update...

Dude you caught my attention with the prologue itself.. 😃 A totally different perspective to SaHil, or I should say Aahil alone.. You set the stage perfectly for a strong plot.. 👍🏼

And your first part has turned out to be for a great start.. Aahil's success in his professional life, the contrast in his personal life, everything adds upon the interest.. Good to see Rehaan here in the story, at least we get to see bromance if not our actual pair... 😛

Hopefully the London trip turns out to be in their favor with Sanam's luck for her husband...

You have clearly portrayed Aahil's feelings emphasizing his significance without literally displaying it... Love it.. 😃

A complete Aahilicious story and I am looking forward to how it all unfolds...

Great Job CA3! Keep it going... <3 🤗

-- CA2 aka Teddy 😉

Edited by SushK16 - 9 years ago

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Rashmi

@Intuitive

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
interesting!

Thank you! :)

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Rashmi

@Intuitive

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: muskaan17rocks
Beautiful chapter dear
Loved reading it
Clearly depicting the pain aahil is going through with the repetition of the line 'why am i here?'
Please continue soon
Will be waiting impatiently 😊

Thank You So Much Dear!

Glad you liked it!

Will Continue soon! :)

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Rashmi

@Intuitive

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: nilusoni
Very nice
Thanx for pm

Thank you so much dear! :)

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Rashmi

@Intuitive

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#48

edits😆

Edited by Dil-E-Pagalpan - 9 years ago

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Rashmi

@Intuitive

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: suni_104
Well written
Looking forward to read more

Thank you so much dear! :)

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Rashmi

@Intuitive

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Posted: 9 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: Junoon-e-SaHil
That was amazing Rashmi! Don't worry about being boring, yeah it was a little though..eh. Hey, come on! What they say about being honest huh? 😆 But its bound to, its the start only. This is only the beginning..
Best part of this story is the Aahil-Rehan bond! Damn how much I love these two, sigh! They were never properly explored, I mean their bond 😉😆 Most beautiful bond ever! And I am already loving it!

So they are going to London! The place I dream of going to one day! Can't wait how the story progresses!

Favorite part? You already know I guess - his little lone moment with himself, sitting on the windows talking to moon, and finding Sanam in the stars, saying her good night! Oh god! 😭

Continue soon! 😛

Prags thank you so much and I love it when my readers are honest, cause that actually gives me the right feedback on how to get the next part well!😛

Yeah! I so loved them on the show rey! They were my favorite after Sahil and Aahil aur uske ammi!😆 So glad you liked it!😃

Well, if they are going to london or no will be told in the next part! That's the twist there!😉😆

Actually I love the way he leans on the wall and looks up, keeping that in mind I wrote it! And that's my favorite in the whole part too!😆

Yup, will be with the next part in a few minutes! And Hope You Had A great blast on the awesome Diwali today!🤗