ASYA (KaBhi) Four Shot: Rising (FINAL PART/13)

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MrMrsAsyaKhan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#111

Originally posted by: Amina...
This was WONDERFUL

BEAUTIFUL

👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 AMAZING 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

👏 👏 👏 SUPERB👏 👏 👏

VERY VERY VERY BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN ⭐️ 👏 ⭐️

LOVED IT TO THE CORE ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

Thank you beautiful! I am glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for reading and leaving your comments behind. Thanks for your constant support and sticking through this one.

Much love

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MrMrsAsyaKhan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: Persiko
So emotional but ahhh happy ending :*

Thank you for reading!

Yes, always a happily ever after with my Asya!

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MrMrsAsyaKhan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#113

Originally posted by: MayurChan
Very Good Part Dear..

Thank you Mayur, for reading and leaving your comment behind.

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MrMrsAsyaKhan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#114

Originally posted by: rajsmi
Just read all this whole story all together. Really well written! loved it. Thank you for this :-)

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MrMrsAsyaKhan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#115

Originally posted by: Infatuation.
This was damn Beautiful!!!

Like everything was so lovely... and perfectly penned!

Wonderful Story!!!! Glad Asad was always there for her beside her!

Sad Zoya had to go through so much..

Fantastic!

Keep Writing.. Thanks for pm.

Hey there lovely!

Thank you for your kind words, I am glad you enjoyed it. Really appreciate your support.

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-Prinky-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#116

It was Amazing !!!!

so beautifully penned !!!

Thanks for pm 😊

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jas91

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Posted: 9 years ago

#117

res

unres

I felt good after reading part 3

Asad & Zoya spend a lovely time & they have grown more comfortable wid each other

I loved that jib when Dillu teased Asad on not going 2 office

Asad heard Zoe talking 2 her ammi & got confused about it

when he tried to ask her she refused 2 bulge

& than Asad's words triggered Zoya's wounds & she reacted violently reliving those bitter taunts of ppl

It was nice when Asad asked Dillu that he will himself take care of her

Zoya's monologues was very painful I felt angered at those officials & Zoya's family who instead of bringing justice shut Zoya's mouth instead & ruined her 4 life stamping her as tainted

Finally Asad's peals reached her heart these lines infact this whole parah was my fvrt Asad earned so much of respect from me.

"As far as I see Zoya, there is no line barring you from me"

"You have already come into someone else's world Zoya, but I'll wait till you allow yourself to let that someone into your life."

I just wish there would b more such pure souled ppl than d devils

At last Asad realised what had happened & at that same moment Zoya got nightmares but this time Asad was there 2 console her...this was really a heart touching moment

The morning scene was really serene so soothing where Asya had an heart 2 heart & Asad finally convinced Zoya 2 leave her past behind

Than came d happy parts Asad keeps sending loving encouragement notes 4 Zoe who couldn't stop smiling reading those

Movie watching scene was also funny 😆

& Asad asked her out on a date 😳

Zoe got decked up in a Saree😛 mesmerizing Asad & when she couldn't walk in heels lifted her in his arms so romantic

& than came d most horrifying part which shook me 2 d core

She was forced & d whole incident was very painful & terrifying & what left a permanent dent was no1's willingness 2 bring justice 4 d poor soul

But thank god she has a sweetheart of a life partner now who will forever b by her side

Asad finally confessed his love

Edited by jas91 - 9 years ago

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jas91

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Posted: 9 years ago

#118

1 more

unres of last part

I can't believe it ended

d starting was spectacular

I loved Asad's declaration of love & how he encouraged Zoe 2 accept him & her own feelings

which she did after a lot of effort from her side which is understood as its not easy 2 let go of past & taking risk 2 depend on some1 once again

Loved How Asad gave her confidence & tried 2 make her accept there closeness it was really necessary 2 bring her out of that horrible incident & remove those fears making her accept their new love

that small scene of Dillu was also loveable she shares a amazing relation wid Asad different from other mothers

Morning scene Zoya woke up like a new girl who was dreaming again smiling again & was hopeful

She nomore got nightmares cuz her eyes was filled wid dreams of future only

Zoe got dressed in her Chaha's dress it bring those emotions how he wished 2 see her wear them 4 2 long yrs but he was not there when Zoya finally decided 2 give herself a 2nd chance

Dinnig table scene was like a blow of fresh air Asad opening Zoya's tied up hair, Najma's cuteness, Dillu's teasing & Zoya's nervousness on the new found love

Asad's uncontrolled teasing & Zoya's jittering feelings was real treat 2 read

on the other side Asad wid d help of his frnd Saleem was trying 2 find out Zoya's culprit

Asad gifted Zoe a phone lol use bhi accept karne main kitni mehnat krayi Zoe ne

Than d rascal Bloody pest Ayaan came back🤬 & got into trouble & called Asad 4 help

Asad who was wid Zoe came there & there Zoe saw them 2gather thus knowing how they r related & Zoe decided 2 go away from his life

Zoya's heart break from here on was heart wrenching 😭

& in d end Asad realised his brothers evil deeds but Zoe got badly injured after getting hit by d van

But thank god U didn't let us wait much Mojo & gave epilogue

Thankfully Zoya got saved & Ayaan was punished bas***d

& Asad brings her back home proposing her 4 marriage

Asad who came in her life like a shining star who brightened her life eliminating all d darkness filling it wid only lifelong happiness 😳

Edited by jas91 - 9 years ago

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MrMrsAsyaKhan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#119

Originally posted by: -Prinky-
It was Amazing !!!!
so beautifully penned !!!
Thanks for pm 😊

Thank you lovely. I am glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for reading and commenting.

Much love.

XOXO

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MrMrsAsyaKhan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#120

Originally posted by: jas91
res

unres

I felt good after reading part 3

Asad & Zoya spend a lovely time & they have grown more comfortable wid each other

I loved that jib when Dillu teased Asad on not going 2 office

Asad heard Zoe talking 2 her ammi & got confused about it

when he tried to ask her she refused 2 bulge

& than Asad's words triggered Zoya's wounds & she reacted violently reliving those bitter taunts of ppl

It was nice when Asad asked Dillu that he will himself take care of her

Zoya's monologues was very painful I felt angered at those officials & Zoya's family who instead of bringing justice shut Zoya's mouth instead & ruined her 4 life stamping her as tainted

Finally Asad's peals reached her heart these lines infact this whole parah was my fvrt Asad earned so much of respect from me.

"As far as I see Zoya, there is no line barring you from me"

"You have already come into someone else's world Zoya, but I'll wait till you allow yourself to let that someone into your life."

I just wish there would b more such pure souled ppl than d devils

At last Asad realised what had happened & at that same moment Zoya got nightmares but this time Asad was there 2 console her...this was really a heart touching moment

The morning scene was really serene so soothing where Asya had an heart 2 heart & Asad finally convinced Zoya 2 leave her past behind

Than came d happy parts Asad keeps sending loving encouragement notes 4 Zoe who couldn't stop smiling reading those

Movie watching scene was also funny 😆

& Asad asked her out on a date 😳

Zoe got decked up in a Saree😛 mesmerizing Asad & when she couldn't walk in heels lifted her in his arms so romantic

& than came d most horrifying part which shook me 2 d core

She was forced & d whole incident was very painful & terrifying & what left a permanent dent was no1's willingness 2 bring justice 4 d poor soul

But thank god she has a sweetheart of a life partner now who will forever b by her side

Asad finally confessed his love

Jas. Beautiful, I have missed you and your loving comments.

You always leave me short for words. I love your comments and the way you talk through the updates. It really does make me happy. So thank you so much my love.

About those, even I was surprised how I wrote it but I dunno I felt so strongly at that moment and they came out. I do quite like this Asad too, I wanted a break from EC Asad and judgmental. Even I wish such men existed in real life. Did everything seem rushed? It was meant to be an OS but I have no idea how I managed to extend it to four parts. LOL!

Much much love. I hope you have been well.

Thank you for reading and leaving your kind words. Very much appreciated.

XOXOXOXOXO

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