ASYA (KaBhi) Four Shot: Rising (FINAL PART/13)

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KeyaHira2

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Posted: 9 years ago

#91

And they lived happily ever after

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MrMrsAsyaKhan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#92

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
well written..

Thank you lovely!

Much love

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MrMrsAsyaKhan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#93

Originally posted by: binuuu
loved everything about this story..
wonderful job dear..
ayaan's truth is out..great..
that chapter fully closed..
asya is going to make new memories together...good..
thank you very much for giving us this wonderful story..
write more..

Thank you so much for reading and leaving your feedback! Much appreciated. I am glad you enjoyed it! As for more stories, so many more coming, just dont want to bombard you with them all at once. LOL

Much love XOXO

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MrMrsAsyaKhan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: KeyaHira2
And they lived happily ever after
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That was a last minute touch HAHAHAHA! I actually had no idea what to finish it with!

Hope you liked it lovely!

Much love

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anopama

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Posted: 9 years ago

#95

Wow the end

With a happily ever after

Asad heartfelt confession feeling promises all were absolutely beautiful

He stood by her no matter what And will always stand by her

So love this loving teasing way to bring her out and give her beautiful memories

So he has Saleem investigating the matter so is was being covered up as a harassment case

Aww Saleem knows how Asad feels

So ayaan was the culprit knew it ...her just running away leaving Asad

So Asad always had to bail out his brother even his mother give up

Aww she was leaving but he reached in time and then just seeing her reaction to his brother just give him the answer he wanted

Omg she ran and she is hit by a car

Coma but waking up weeks later to the man who loves her by her side

Aww he did what he had to do to get her her justice

Not because he was his brother he was her culprit

He was by her side through it all and still there to marry her later

So what she couldn't walk she was in a wheelchair

Love it at least she got a happy life after

Thanks for all the support from u and mayur too

Always glad to have someone to talk to

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MOnkEy_rAngEr

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Posted: 9 years ago

#96

it was breathtakingly beautiful

love's the whole update

asad crossed every limit every boundary that ZoYa had build up around hErself

aayaan was the culprit

asya both rise together

looked it

hats off to u :-))

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muskaan17rocks

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Posted: 9 years ago

#97

This was seriously so beautiful

Loved how asad accepted zoya despite of her past and how he supported her trying to get her justice

Hate ayaan for what he did but at the same time loved how asad did not become partial with his brother

Basically in love with the character of asad in your story and also zoya who overcome her past and finally they started a beautiful life together

Love the end

Was definitely a story worth reading and was extremely flawless😊

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Asif

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Posted: 9 years ago

#98

Awesome updates
Loved it
Asad proposal was nice. She told him abt her past. Asad requested her to let him be with her. Teasing was nice. He hired PI to get know abt Zoya culprits as he took an oath to bring justice for Zoya. She was shocked to see that Ayaan was asad brother. Asad did what he promised. Finally a confession from Zoya side as well. Thanks for wonderful story & pm

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fatima30

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Posted: 9 years ago

#99

You are an amazing writer...this story touched my heart
I felt every single emotion whilst reading the final update
Beautiful ending...Asya's bond was beyond beautiful...perfect