ASYA (KaBhi) Four Shot: Rising (FINAL PART/13) - Page 11

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Posted: 9 years ago
So emotional but ahhh happy ending :*
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Posted: 9 years ago
Just read all this whole story all together. Really well written! loved it. Thank you for this :-)
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Posted: 9 years ago
This was damn Beautiful!!!


Like everything was so lovely... and perfectly penned!


Wonderful Story!!!! Glad Asad was always there for her beside her!


Sad Zoya had to go through so much..


Fantastic!

Keep Writing.. Thanks for pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: anopama

Wow the end

With a happily ever after
Asad heartfelt confession feeling promises all were absolutely beautiful
He stood by her no matter what And will always stand by her
So love this loving teasing way to bring her out and give her beautiful memories
So he has Saleem investigating the matter so is was being covered up as a harassment case
Aww Saleem knows how Asad feels
So ayaan was the culprit knew it ...her just running away leaving Asad
So Asad always had to bail out his brother even his mother give up
Aww she was leaving but he reached in time and then just seeing her reaction to his brother just give him the answer he wanted
Omg she ran and she is hit by a car
Coma but waking up weeks later to the man who loves her by her side
Aww he did what he had to do to get her her justice
Not because he was his brother he was her culprit
He was by her side through it all and still there to marry her later
So what she couldn't walk she was in a wheelchair
Love it at least she got a happy life after
Thanks for all the support from u and mayur too
Always glad to have someone to talk to


I'm glad you enjoyed it, my love!
Thank you so much for reading and leaving your detailed comments outlining the bits you liked. It makes me smile reading over it again. This story has given me a new direction and yours has touched my heart. Will forever cherish this story, remembering you, praying for you.
And yes, I'm always here if you want to talk. Drop me a PM, wherever in the world I am, will definitely reply to you. I may not be active via comments on posts, forever active for a conversation.

Thank you for always reading and showing your appreciation. Forever grateful.

Lots of love and hope to see you on my next story.

XOXO

P.S. Zoya can walk, she is still recovering. Didn't make that clear sorry.
Edited by MrMrsAsyaKhan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ajanshul

it was breathtakingly beautiful

love's the whole update
asad crossed every limit every boundary that ZoYa had build up around hErself
aayaan was the culprit
asya both rise together
looked it
hats off to u :-))


Thank you so much for your kinds words lovely! I don't know your name but you have been supportive throughout. Really appreciate it!

Thank you for reading!

Much love

XOXO
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: muskaan17rocks

This was seriously so beautiful

Loved how asad accepted zoya despite of her past and how he supported her trying to get her justice
Hate ayaan for what he did but at the same time loved how asad did not become partial with his brother
Basically in love with the character of asad in your story and also zoya who overcome her past and finally they started a beautiful life together
Love the end
Was definitely a story worth reading and was extremely flawless😊


Muskaan right? What a guess.

Thank you for your comment lovely and for reading. Honestly appreciate it! Even I am in love with this Asad, forever will remain like this in my heart.

I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Much love

XOXO
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Posted: 9 years ago

Thank you love!

XOXO
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Awesome updates
Loved it
Asad proposal was nice. She told him abt her past. Asad requested her to let him be with her. Teasing was nice. He hired PI to get know abt Zoya culprits as he took an oath to bring justice for Zoya. She was shocked to see that Ayaan was asad brother. Asad did what he promised. Finally a confession from Zoya side as well. Thanks for wonderful story & pm


Asif right? Sorry never had the chance to interact with you but have always appreciated your comments on all my work. Thank you for reading and leaving your feedback.

Much love!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Thank you lovely for reading and leaving your comment!

Much love
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: fatima30

You are an amazing writer...this story touched my heart
I felt every single emotion whilst reading the final update
Beautiful ending...Asya's bond was beyond beautiful...perfect



Thank you beautiful for reading and leaving your kind words. Really appreciate it. Thanks for your support, made me smile.

Much love.

XOXO

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