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Posted: 9 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: enhance
You're welcome Bhai.

Great writer toh aap ho kyunke tasawar aur khiyaal ko lafzon mein uttarna har kisi ko nahin ata! ⭐️

Agay ki kahaani bohut dilchasp hai. 😎

😃

Wow... so nice words for me... 😳 feeling flattered. LOL!...Its one of the best comment I received till now... Thanks infinity sis! you made my day. 😊

hmm my rule is...

"Kahani buno to aisi ke padhne wala kho jaye kahani ki khubsoorti mein,
Hasaye woh, rulaye woh, pareshaan kare aur sukoon bhi diye...

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Padhaye kam, dikhaye zaida, mehsoos karaye har ehsaas wa jazbaat ko,

Woh Dil chasp ho itni ke aage padhne ke liye intezaar na ho..."

hmm... Aage ki kahani dilchasp to hai hi but emotional hone wali hai till 4th chapter... Dark past going to come out soon.

But its interesting to see how Zoya gets married even after not ready for marriage. Kahani mein twist hai! 😆

Edited by MNsTrous - 9 years ago

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1056084

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Posted: 9 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: muskaan17rocks
Beautiful update dear
Loved reading it
Especially asya conversation and the way asad described himself
Looking forward to know what happens next and what will be zoya's decision
Please continue soon 😊

Thank you so much sis! 😳 Glad you loved it. 😃

haha, as expected... Everybody came here for AsYa scenes.. 😆 sorry but abhi shaadi nahi hui isiliye scenes kam hein...Once they get married it will be AsYalicious cute updates.

Asad knows very well how to conquer his lady's heart. 😉

Update probably this weekend, I got busy with life problems, not getting right mood to write nicely.

Zoya will eventually get married after so many hurdles, but first she needs to get over her past and stop being emotional and turn strong.

Lets see where the story goes next...

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1056084

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Posted: 9 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: Lagori
I loved the update'. Especially what asad said about those keys

Thank you so much! 😳 Glad you loved it.

Hmm.. Asad's character is dreamy one, he is a mystery box with so many shades to come out one after the other.

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1056084

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Posted: 9 years ago

#104

SILENT MEMBERS PLEASE COMMENT ITS NOT FAIR OK!

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1056084

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Posted: 9 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: ayat20
Nice part

Thank you so much sis! 😊

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1056084

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Posted: 9 years ago

#106

ENGLISH ONLY VERSION IS UP!

CHECK IT ON PAGE 13!

https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4494780&PID=128347031&#p128347031

Edited by MNsTrous - 9 years ago

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rhythmsangh

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Posted: 9 years ago

#107

Amazing story

totally lovedit

will be waiting for the update

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1056084

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Posted: 9 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: rhythmsangh
Amazing story
totally lovedit
will be waiting for the update

Thank you so much sis! 😳 Glad you loved it.😛

Next update probably this weekend. 😊

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enhance

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Posted: 9 years ago

#109

Glad i made your day!😃

bohut deep baat likhi apne bhai, wow!👏

so emotional stuff is coming up, i'm prepared now!

Will we learn more about Maria from Zoya's past?

Looking forward to Zoya marriage.

Aur twist bhi kaafi interesting hai!!

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1056084

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Posted: 9 years ago

#110

Originally posted by: enhance
Glad i made your day!😃
bohut deep baat likhi apne bhai, wow!👏
so emotional stuff is coming up, i'm prepared now!
Will we learn more about Maria from Zoya's past?
Looking forward to Zoya marriage.
Aur twist bhi kaafi interesting hai!!

😃😃😃 hmm.. wo kya hai na.. No body replied in poetry till now.. you were the first one sis, isiliye felt good.

Hmm.. yup.. 😳

haha... Emotional stuff ... Advance mein tissue paper boxes karidlo! 😉 Kidding... Its like pyaar viyaar dhoka and atyachar with Zoya story track.

hmm.. may be but I want to dedicate a whole chapter for Maria... She meant something more than Maaz, and was more closer to Zoya than Maaz bhaijaan, btw Zoya is still in a trauma of losing her she is still disturbed.

Zoya's marriage track will not be that lengthy, one or two chapter thats it. Because her marriage was done with saadgi despite her Abbu's desires and Zoya's dreams!

Haha... Twiston ki paltan is waiting to fall dheere dheere.. 😆

Actually I'm little bit rushing till chapter 7, because the main story will begin after Afreen enter in Zoya's life making her insecure about Asad. And then the real story begins.

I want to construct a nice foundation for the story. Because later emotions will be based on the story before marriage.

It will be something like... faasle faaslon ko panah dedi, rishton ke saat saat zehniyat mein bhi...

At the end The Queen will be alone fighting the battle to save her kingdom.