|| FF | ASYA | MRS. FANGURL* | Reviews Thread - I

First Previous

Page

111

Next Last

Frequent Posters

anopama

@anopama

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Wow this will be an interesting read

Pm me plz

Edited by anopama - 9 years ago

Quote

Basanti 🦄

@KaBhiKiBasanti

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Beautiful

Beautiful prologue

Amazing start

Awesome

Amazing concept

N perfect prologue

superb and lovely

in love with the prologue

Seems so promising

The dentist thing and particularly from both the POV

Amazing

He he secrets with both of them

One faking check up n other finding reasons to stay

He he lovely

ContinuE soon

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

1056084

Hibernated

Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: soumya.g
Nice prologue.
Asad came to clinic just to see her that is so cute...and she too find his eyes beautiful ...
and I m already waiting for the chapter 1
Update soon...

Thank you so much for the appreciation sis. 😳

Asad is a big secret box, he has so many things up his sleeves. A passionate lover lives inside him.

Zoya ko kuch kuch hota hai... but bechari ko pata nahi wo kya hai.. 😆

Sorry, I was busy with problems in life, but will write this story kaise bhi...

stay tuned this weekend. 😊

Quote

1056084

Hibernated

Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: soumya.g
Update soon pls...waiting for first chapter
would love to read this ff...

Update probably by this weekend... Due to some problem I had totally stopped everything in life.

I'm beginning this again...

Quote

1056084

Hibernated

Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: anopama
Wow this will be an interesting read
Pm me plz

Hmm... I hope so... It will be a different story. Realistic... because its inspired from someone!

sure! PM will be send. 😳

Thanks!

Quote

1056084

Hibernated

Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: riddhi1206
Beautiful
Beautiful prologue
Amazing start
Awesome
Amazing concept
N perfect prologue
superb and lovely
in love with the prologue
Seems so promising
The dentist thing and particularly from both the POV
Amazing
He he secrets with both of them
One faking check up n other finding reasons to stay
He he lovely
ContinuE soon

A BIG THANK YOU FOR YOUR APPRECIATION SIS! 😳

BTW Thanks for pulling me back here.. 😆

I hope I can keep it up to your expectations.

hmm Zoya will be dentist only for the first part of the story. She will go from may changes in life.

Whole story will be POV based. I want emotional touch to it. Thats why.. 😊

These two fools have so many things in heart. 😉 all secrets.

Update this weekend.

Quote

Basanti 🦄

@KaBhiKiBasanti

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: MNsTrous

A BIG THANK YOU FOR YOUR APPRECIATION SIS! 😳

BTW Thanks for pulling me back here.. 😆

I hope I can keep it up to your expectations.

hmm Zoya will be dentist only for the first part of the story. She will go from may changes in life.

Whole story will be POV based. I want emotional touch to it. Thats why.. 😊

These two fools have so many things in heart. 😉 all secrets.

Update this weekend.

U don't need to...

U completely deserve that

Oh is it?? Nice!!

Hey one question it will be ROM com and social drama only na?

I m not comfortable reading other stuff

N I m excited regarding this one that's why cleating

Abhi me chotu si pyaari so nanhi si bacchu huna

By the way I m Riddhi

Wat is ur name Di??

Quote

1056084

Hibernated

Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: riddhi1206
U don't need to...
U completely deserve that
Oh is it?? Nice!!
Hey one question it will be ROM com and social drama only na?
I m not comfortable reading other stuff
N I m excited regarding this one that's why cleating
Abhi me chotu si pyaari so nanhi si bacchu huna
By the way I m Riddhi
Wat is ur name Di??

Hmm, actually I thank all my readers because they deserve it. 😆

It will be romcom + social drama filled with feelings and emotions but nothing illogical and mature.

Haha! sis you are so sweet! 😆

Hmm.. I'm MN (emen), and btw i'm not your Di, you can call me bro. 😃

(I'm my mummy's little cute monster 😆)

Edited by MNsTrous - 9 years ago

Quote

Basanti 🦄

@KaBhiKiBasanti

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: MNsTrous

Hmm, actually I thank all my readers because they deserve it. 😆
It will be romcom + social drama filled with feelings and emotions but nothing illogical and mature.
Haha! sis you are so sweet! 😆
Hmm.. I'm MN (emen), and btw i'm not your Di, you can call me bro. 😃

(I'm my mummy's little cute monster 😆)

Hehe

Really me sweet??

He he bacchi hu mei abhi na chotu si pyaari si😆

Omg! I never expected a boy to write so well

U r amazing

Yes emen bhai...

He he cute

Emen means??

Quote

1056084

Hibernated

Posted: 9 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: riddhi1206
Hehe
Really me sweet??
He he bacchi hu mei abhi na chotu si pyaari si😆
Omg! I never expected a boy to write so well
U r amazing
Yes emen bhai...
He he cute
Emen means??

Hmm.. Sis your chotu si pyaari si bacchi line bought a big smile in my face after a long time. 😃 that's why you are sweet. Because sweet things brings a smile on my face. 😆

Hmm.. God gifted talent. I guess...

Thanks a lot sis. 😳

Emen means lucky. 😊

God bless you! 😃

---
Off-topic : sis if you want you can read my other stories too.. See in my signature.

Edited by MNsTrous - 9 years ago