AsYa OS : What If I Lose Her? (updated part 3)

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muskaan17rocks

@muskaan17rocks

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Amazing dear

Loved reading it

The way u have managed to describe everyone's emotions is so beautiful👏

Please continue soon😊

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Arpita_Mirage

@Arpita_Mirage

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Beautiful...

Hope Zoya is fine..She has to be for her family..most importantly her Mr.Khan..

Continue this..

Looking forward to read more

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nilusoni

@nilusoni

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

awesome start loved it

asad's feelings for zoya wow

omg zoya's accident i hope she will get well soon

excited for next part

thanx for pm

plz pm me for next

continue soon

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Gulaabo

@Gulaabo

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Unresed on 2

Waiting for next part

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Ashii

@AkaiBara

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: asyaarshilover
Apni puri gang ka res

mera bhi

unres

amazing TS

loved it yaar

asad k emotions were superb 👏

dilshad noticed

ohh Zoya is hospi

jaldi hosh mai laya jaye

update plzzz

Edited by ashiii333 - 10 years ago

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Mayur Chan

@MayurChan

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Wonderful Update H.e.n.a..
But it has a sad end to this chapt...I want the nest one to be a happy part..and also some Happiness in both Asad & Zoya's life...
Well written and a Very good part.
Continue soonish.

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--Sumi--

@--Sumi--

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Hey Hena

Very nice OS

But make it as a SS

I love to read more

Well written

Thanks for PM

You call me sum

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jogicad

@Asyafl

Explorer

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

a mindblowing update...

please continue soon

make it ss or ff

cant wait for more

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ChocoBerry

@ChocoBerry

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#19

Beautifully written Hena 👏

Very emotional but a very good read.

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#20

Nice with full of emotions
Zoya put her life in danger for saving the child life. Asad dream was became true. He breakdown in his mothers arms. Consoled his sister that nothing will happen to her. All 3 pray for her long life. Waiting for Zoya recovery & their confession soon. Thanks for pm