AsYa OS : What If I Lose Her? (updated part 3)

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Ashii

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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

well written part

loved it

end pe kya tha???

update soon

i know happy end hoga

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A.S.K

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Posted: 10 years ago

#42

Superb TS Trish... ab meri maaa jaldi update karnaaa

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H.e.n.a

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Posted: 9 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: muskaan17rocks
Awesome chapter
Loved reading it
Especially how dilshad was trying to make asad realise his love for zoya
Please continue soon 😊

thank u dr! will updt 😊

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H.e.n.a

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Posted: 9 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: ankiecool
you!!!! how can u give us such a cliffy end please don't let anything happen to zoya

Oh 😲

Lets see what happens...

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H.e.n.a

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Posted: 9 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: --Arpita--
Beautiful..
Asad confessing to his Allah that he is in love..
Too emotional..
Hoping Zoya is fine..
Continue soon

thank u 😊

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H.e.n.a

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Posted: 9 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: MayurChan
Very Good , Emotional and a Well written part H.E.N.A..
Asad & Dilshaad part...i enjoyed reading more...very smart of her...to question THE AAK.
Asad's confession was very touching...
Continue soon...

thank u

m glad that u liked 😊

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H.e.n.a

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Posted: 9 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: LoveSonu2408
awsm chap..
koi to humare asad ko samjhaya..puri dunia ko dikhti ha he is in lv par use nehi..
love asad's confesson...so pure n beautiful..
hope zoya is fine.cnt soon

yep he is so blind na?

anyways thanks dr😊

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H.e.n.a

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Posted: 9 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: Gulaabo
Beating khane wala toh tune kaam hi kiya hai Trish!
My poor zoya...and I felt so bad for asad!
But in all this one positive thing that he admitted his feelings
Hope everything will be fine
Continue soon

aww sholly Sras! but it was needed.

thank u 😊

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H.e.n.a

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Posted: 9 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: sasir
Cliffy...
Y..y...u stop it there...
Loved asad's confession...
Hope nothing happens to zoya
Plz update soon

😆 m evil 😈

thanks a lot dr

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H.e.n.a

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Posted: 9 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: nilusoni
awesome part
asad is really emotionally challenged
dilshaad's attempt to make him realise wow
omg asad's prayer for zoya soo lovely
again cliffy end
excite for next part
thanx for pm
plz pm me for next part
continue soon

thank u so much.

will pm soon.