11th September 2015-Written Update-Qubool Hai

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 1

In the garden, Sanam-2 is standing near the dead body of a girl. Mahira is walking towards the same location. She trips and falls and her specs fall as well. Sanam-2 is shocked as she finds Mahira lying next to the dead body, trying to search for the specs. Mahira gets up and sees a hazy image but is unable to see anything clearly, and grabs blindly for her specs, and finally finds them. She finds her bracelet as well, and then her specs too. She wipes them clear, and then wears them back. As she turns, she doesnt find anyone there. She wonders if there's anyone and calls out loud if anyone is there but no one responds. She wonders how her bracelet reached there. Sanam-2 watches her from behind the trees. She is standing near the dead body. She rues that one more chance is wasted. Wonder where is the girl with that special mark. Meanwhile Mahira wonders who was it who came home in wet clothes, and then disappeared. She makes her way back to the house.

The next day morning, Mahira is in the hall cleaning dishes while she overhears Amad and his dad discuss about the disappearance of the girl who was at the party with Amad. Sanam-2 comes with Gazala and Latif and asks what they are discussing. Amad shares about the disappearance of Nisha (the girl from previous night). He shows the pic to Sanam-2 and she is tensed, shocked as she remembers the murder. Amad says that he didnt know her that well. She says even i din see her. She says was tired so was in my room but when i came back, part was over. She asks him not to be tensed saying that she must have left with friends. Amad's father says not to worry, as she must have had a hangover.

Mahira remembers seeing someone in the woods and so asks if she can see this photo. She notices the girl wearing the same bracelet as hers. Even Sanam-2 notices the bracelet around Mahiras hand. She asks Mahira where she got the bracelet from. She responds that she got it in the garden, and there was someone there, a girl but couldnt see clearly, and says it could be the same girl. Sanam-2 says Amad not to worry and says that she must have reached home by now. Mahira is worried, while she is asked to resume back to her chores. Sanam-2 thinks that she might have killed the wrong girl, but she is sure that she saw the right girl at the party last night, and thinks that she would have to check all the invitees yesterday to get to that girl. She resolves that she would go to any length and pay any price for it.

Razia asks Sanam-2 asks if she realises what she is about to do. She eyes her falling hair, and says death is coming near me and i can do anything to defeat death, and am ready to pay any price to be alive. Razia warns but she is too sure. Razia hands her a wooden box, and says that the evil spirits shall help her. Sanam-2 says that now no one can save the special girl. She smiles evilly.

In her room, Kaynat asks Mahira if she is sure, and Mahira says that she is absolutely sure. Kaynat says that she is still tensed, as its Amad's birthday, and even mom doesnt know. Mahira says that Sanam-2 wont deny her even when she gets to know. She manages to convince Kaynat to do what she wants her to do saying her dad used to say to do as ones heart wishes since heart is always right. Mahira reassures Kaynat that Sanam-2 will agree with Kaynat no matter what.

Sanam-2 enters her room, hastily, assured that no one saw her coming inside, and switches off the lights to ensure that no one knows she is inside. She lights a candle, and thinks that the evil spirit that she has today can lead her to do things unimaginable to everyone. She opens the box, to reveal a shining dagger. She takes it out and then stabs herself in the chest with it, as she remembers Razia showing her the dagger, and telling her that once it touches her body, she would die, and for 15 minutes, her soul can go anywhere for the next 15 minutes, in which she can go anywhere where she normally cant, and when 15 minutes are over, she shall return back in her body as the dagger comes out, and also warns that if she delays taking out the dagger more than 15 minutes, then she wont be able to reenter her body, and shall forever wander around as a lonely soul.



Part 2

Sanam-2 stands stunned and then falls on the ground, with the dagger in her chest. Her soul gets up from the body. Her soul says that she didnt just place a bet, but placed her entire life on a bet, and that after 15 minutes, she needs to return back to her body, and in this time, she would either get her special girl, or else she shall become a lone, wandering soul forever. She goes past the door, and walks down the stairs. Amad comes up and moves past her, as he isnt able to see her. She is amused, and then goes down. She finds Latif, Gazala and Kaynat, all are unable to see her, and is confident of the success of her plan. She walks past them. Kaynat thinks that she felt someone just passed by and asks if anyone felt it. but they deny. She then finds a crowd of ladies, with Mahira, and wonders whats happening and who are they. She says that she doesnt have time to waste, and moves out. But then she comes back shocked yet again, as she finds the special figure on the back, while Mahira stands. She is amused thinking that destiny is overly favourable for her, as the girl she is searching for, has herself walked in the lap of death. she starts progressing, trying to make her way through the crowd, to get to the girl. But stops shocked, as she finds that a lady comes with the Holy Quran, and wonders who got this prayer sermon arranged. All sit down for the prayer service to start, while she gets tensed and uncomfortable, as she hears the holy chant, feels the hole smoke, that makes the entire environment pious. Kaynat sits to pray too. Sanam-2's soul is thrown away, due to the impact of the holy spirits, outside the house, and the doors shut.



Part 3

Sanam-2 is unable to open the doors, as she is thrown away yet again. Sanam-2 is extremely tensed and worried, that her body lies inside, which she needs to get to, and she stands outside, as the doors are shut, extremely sure that she saw that special girl. She wonders what to do.

In his room, Azad laments at the life that he has been given, which is extremely disgusting, and that he lives in constant fear that if he tries to get too near to anyone, and they know the real truth, then it shall create huge problems. He thinks that all he wanted was to cure Kaynat's hand with that flower, but he failed in that too. He feels defeated and depressed about his condition. He is tensed that he always has to live in solitude. Azad goes out of the room, and walks in the corridor.

Outside, Sanam-2 finds Saira and Bano coming towards the house, from the outhouse, to go inside the mansion. She thinks that this is the right time, as she can go inside with the both of them. But they start pondering that inside its going to be boring due to the sermon and wonder whether to go in or not. They decide that they dont want to work, and go back. They leave. Sanam-2 is frustrated. She stands irritated and furious at the delay, that if she doesnt enter the house, she would lose everything forever. The screen freezes on her frustrated, Mahira's pious and Azad's worried face.



Precap: Azad comes inside Sanam-2's room, and is shocked to find her dead body, and is horrified and distraught, that she cant do this, and how could she leave him alone.Meanwhile, Sanam-2 comes inside the house, and then finds Mahira with her back exposed. She moves forward to find out who's the girl. Just then, Azad places his hand on the dagger to pull it out.
Edited by Armu4eva - 9 years ago


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks for the Written Update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks. But has the creative panel of Sasural Simar Ka taken over the writing department of QH too? 😆 When nothing works (in mind), take a leap else bring in supernatural elements must be the trending formulae for writers these days.
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