ASAD AND ZOYA STORY: A THOUSAND YEARS PART 4 ON PAGE 38 - Page 20

Thanks for PM,Dear.😊

Brilliant update...superb writing. Finally asya met & now I can't wait to see how this unfolds. Thanx much for the PM. ...eagerly waiting for the next update

Originally posted by: suearmaniac

Its review time!
Titir i read ur long comment on my ff
will reply to that shortly ;-D
tu WOLR ka first chap. Likh ke pm karna jaldi fir me uspe bhi review dena chalu karungi
lol readers idhar bhej ri hu mai par mene hi abhi tak comment ni kiye 😆

ok. I will wait 😊
I know readers will get trouble to understand and read other chapters as the last part of first chap including index got deleted. But i am really lacking time to retype it.I am planning to retype it durung the puja vacations. You ask me about any question you have in your mind regarding the story and till i retype it you can give your reviews on the other eight chapters 😃
He he 😆 dont worry. Give comment when you are free. 😃

Originally posted by: suearmaniac

U knw kabhi kabhi esa hota hai ki bina dialouges ke maja ni ata
bt teri special quality he that even if u add less dialouges
and para's are more
u rock the update
and i loved the way u described asad's past
struggle. Z marked on his palm...makes me curious.
Uff teri exam kb khatam hogi?

😆 😳 seriously your comments never fail to make me smile a huge smile. I also love dialouges and in WOLR dialouges are more than here. Here are right now the emtions are doing the talking and soon the characters will also converse. I am really glad and relieved to know that you are liking it 😃
😆 😆 my exams are never ending. Before one can end i get the schedule of other. But dont worry. That wont stop me from giving updates 😉

Originally posted by: suearmaniac

M happy asad has dadi and arnav. Arnav seems gud
dadi's intution of asad finding his way has that positivity and that i love so much
both zoya and khushi got a brother in arnav and asad respectivel! Thats much more perfect

thanks. Arnav is a huge support system in asads life and they share a bond more than brothers. Their bond is just like khushi and zoya. Arshi is going to play a hugely important role in asya's love story. And about dadi, she is an old wise lady who has her motherly instincts.I hope you will love how the story progresses in future too 😃

Sowiee kal sham ni kar pai unres
net pack ud gaya tha 😆
hv unresed

Originally posted by: suearmaniac

I really like reading sad and intense stuffs
and the way u wrote zoya's dream i mean i shud be bowing down to u 😆
broken moon mene kal parso hi padha tha
socha comment baad me kar dungi
its gud wo story tune yaha continue kardi aur acha modify karke

i also love to read intense stories but never thought that i can write intense stuff. I hope i am and will be able to do justice to the emotional intensity this story demands 😊
He he 😆 it is not that special 😳 you yourself is an amazing writer and inspiration to many 😃
Oh! You have read that one too! Actually this concept is very very special to me. So when in first attempt i didnt got a good response , thought to modify and start it afresh giving my 200% 😃

Originally posted by: asya7

i also love to read intense stories but never thought that i can write intense stuff. I hope i am and will be able to do justice to the emotional intensity this story demands 😊
He he 😆 it is not that special 😳 you yourself is an amazing writer and inspiration to many 😃
Oh! You have read that one too! Actually this concept is very very special to me. So when in first attempt i didnt got a good response , thought to modify and start it afresh giving my 200% 😃

i have full faith in u and m already so proud of u with each update u give
and i knw tu bohat mehnat kar rahi he and wo dikhta he
and m sure u'll do justice just be confident and don't thnk abt response
just write coz ur born to be a writer
as for me itna acha bhi ni likhti me zada na chada 😆
yes ths concept is too gud and also worl ka bhi unique he
i can't wait to comment thr
i think tomorrow i'll do that
and update soon! How r exams going?
Well typical question isn't it? 🤣

Originally posted by: suearmaniac

jo wise launguage use ki tune bohat acchi lagi👍🏼
and why the hell she wll not go to party???
fir wo asad se kese milegi???
bhej use party me
and fatafat exam deke wapas aaja titir
mwuaaah🤗
love u for writing this beautifully❤️

he he 😆 thank you thank you thank you( giving a dramatic bow like the actors give after play)
Your wish has been granted your majesty 😃
Today morning i had physics exams. Thanks a lot for your best wishes🤗
Love you too ❤️