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Amin21Khpulwak

@Amin21Khpulwak

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#51

wow

interesting👏

Waiting to further😊

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nilusoni

@nilusoni

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#52

wonderful start

karan and zoya with different background wow

thanx for pm

plz pm me for next part

continue soon

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sasir

@sasir

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#53

Awesome di...
Very interesting...
Love to read it...

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Mayur Chan

@MayurChan

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: Saima-Syed

The story is my own, but it may seem like it's a mixture of different things that have already been out out there.

I hope it comes out as original as I intended😳

No worries Aapii..
Its just that it reminded me of Something else..
Neva mind...
Update was very interesting and gripping Aapii..
Karan is a Body Guard..
And he has to be around Zoya...for the time she stays in the country.
Seems to be very unique and promising..
Continue as you feel like Aapii..

Edited by MayurChan - 10 years ago

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Alone111

@Alone111

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#55

Hp Hamid k koi haat nahi !!!!

Yyyaaayyeee new story... Dat too on kaya...
Wowwwoowww.. Here he z zoya's bodyguard !!!!
Haha sallu k yaad aagay...
Loved 1st chappy Saima...
Very intrstng and awesome start it was...

Continue soon..

Happy Ramadan :-)

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MOnkEy_rAngEr

@MOnkEy_rAngEr

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#56

Interesting concept
Loved it
Continue soon

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Gulaabo

@Gulaabo

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#57

terrific start
seems a different storyline
after tpm i am so eager to embark on a journey with Karan-Zoya
continue soon

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Ashii

@AkaiBara

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#58

first of all i m sorry bcox i didnt read TPM

actually i came to know about your story when it was near end

and life is so busy yaar

well coming to this story

its amazing saima

loveddd it

karan a personal bodyguard

zoya is just 18

can u mention karan's age plz

thnxx a lot for pm dear

update soon...

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-Prinky-

@-Prinky-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#59

Wow...a new story with Karan & Zoya...

amazing start...

So Karan is Zoya's bodyguard...interesting...

waiting for the next...

Thanks for pm 😊

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ChocoBerry

@ChocoBerry

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: Rarepearl
Ours

Nims, love you for the Res and I loouuvvvee the way you write 'OURS' ❤️

Sis, Mwah!!!! For the new story. Gave ma a new reason to keep coming here 😊

You know I loved the entry Karan made n the airport scene could imagine him standing at arrivals, his arms folded across his chest, back straight and his muscles... Ohhh!!! ☺️. How can you always make him sound sooo yummy 😛 ☺️. I really need to learn this art from you.

Aww Zoya sounded so shaken by the blast. Poor girl just 18 n so much she's already seen.

Sis, can't wait to read further 😳

Love you Sis inna saara 🤗

Oh! And thank you for mentioning me 🤗