SS - Worlds Apart: Ch 10 - Pg 109

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fatima30

@fatima30

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#41

As always...gripping as ever! 😉
Totally overwhelmed by the dedication...thank yu so much sis!

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Kabhibloom

@Kabhibloom

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#42

Wow. A new story.
Very interesting.
Just love it.
Beginning was nice.
Karan is zoya's bodyguard.
Can't wait for them to fall in love.
Hamid is a corrupt n bad politician.
Hope he remains good towards zoya.
So sad for aisha bibi, she got injured in the blast.
Continue soon

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asyaarshilover

@asyaarshilover

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: Saima-Syed

I know

It's so bad

Alhamdulillah, the fasts are very long here and with the heat it makes it a little hard for many

How is your family

I missed you😭

Same here badi api... it's so hot this year...but it's much better then starting now

Everyone are good...how is zainab?

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laks_vish

@laks_vish

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#44

Wow action packed thriller from you Saima...rocking chapter...
Ramadan mubarak aapko

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asyaarshilover

@asyaarshilover

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: Saima-Syed

Your little princess is 4 years old now Mash'Allah

She is doing well...keeps me on my toes...a little too much lol

Thank you so much for liking the first part...will update by Friday. I have actually completed writing this one so all I need to do is post it lol

Wow Masha Allah...she is a big girl now😊

Hehe...good job my princess😳

Your most welcome badi api..that's sounds great api..

No stress of writing next👏

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Avie

@Avie

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#46

Res for me..

All I am gonna say... EXCITEDD!!!!

A Pm from you always makes my day Di.. A good start for me..

YAYYY You are back again.. *dhinkachika dhinkachika*

I hope the holy month of Ramadan is going well for you..😳

Karan Zoya are back again.. 😃 Aww I missed them! 😳

And I hoped it to be a romantic one.. Or a sad yet romantic one..😆

But yeh tho nikla action movie types..😎

Saima Di, you are a rockstar! 😃 I never expected itna suspense wala thriller.. 😳

I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT! I LOVE IT!

Karan the Indian version of FBI.. 😎

And Zoya tehri hamari seedhi saadhi bholi bhaali heroine.. 😳

Karan is assigned to protect Zoya.. Bodyguard movie, I remembered.. 😆

Zoya and her family are attacked so badly.. If not for Karan, I don't know what would have happened to her..

Poor Zoya.. Lost her Dad and she was faced with the same.. But Karan hain na.. He will never let anything happen to her..😊

Both of them off to a farmhouse.. Why aren't the others going? Achcha hain.. They can have some time alone with each other..😳😳

I know I keep saying but still I LOVE IT! 😳

But Di, mera ek complaint hain.. I didn't like this part..

It's not as long as TPM but I sincerely hope that you like it as much.

Not as long?? 😕 SS hain.. Par theek hai.. Maybe we can force to you reconsider.. 😉

Write soon Di.. 😊

Love you loads.. ❤️

Edited by Avie - 10 years ago

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Gourav

@Shubh007

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#47

Awesome Update & Concept...👏

Just Love It...😊

Every Scene Is Mind-Blowing...👍🏼

Every Scene Was Portrait Beautifully...⭐️

Update Next Part Soon...😃

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Kanwal4salman

@Kanwal4salman

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#48

Wow! Superb Sis..
What a terrafic start..
Totaly loved the concept something new!
Karan an intelligence officer and zoya his assignment..
Its reminding me bodygaurd movie but ur story is different..
Waiting for more continue soon..