ASYA SS:I Forget You Not#2, chp 24 up (05/03/2016),pg 114 (Complete) - Page 40

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Posted: 9 years ago


Hey Gowtu, update coming soon 😃. But mere 85 likes nahi hue abhi tak 😒
Edited by ChocoBerry - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Chandnii.



Firstly the chapter doesn't go out to me! - Thank you so much haa!😒

😵


Chapter 15:


She knew this was as bare as he could have put his heart, soul and his feelings in front of her.

Wanting to embrace him and all his love with open arms Zoya turned around wanting to go back to him but stood still watching him standing right behind her. Their eye locked, they stood there neither saying a word but their eyes in a conversation of their own.

as she felt his arms wrap around her waist, she pressed her cheek against his chest listening to the drum like beat of his heart that was as fast and loud as she knew her heart was beating.

Sniffing against his chest she tightened her hold on him and felt him do the same.

A smile that she hadn't seen earlier, a smile she hadn't seen during their seminar days either.

^ Pulled at heart strings.

Choco darling, you're magical. Absolutely in love with how you framed these above paragraphs extremely articulate and expressive... of finally having to win the love one has been waiting for for years and years... how they poured their feelings of oneness... all the sorrow, the happiness of finally coming together in that one hug

Aww, Rashid is so cute... How he tells Zoya to relax and be happy and how she has found a father in him, how he teases her and most of all how he says that love is such a sacred thing and one shouldn't be embarrassed... Love how Rashid is such a cool father-in-law. I can't wait to see Dilshad meet with Zoya... Oh, the love that lady will emanate.😃

"OK now you two, off you go to catch up on all your lost time... But yes! No getting carried away!"

😆😆

Asad sucked in a breath and Zoya felt him tighten his hold onto her, slowly he pulled her flush against himself.

☺️

- The entire scene. Wow!

Babe, you're so good at writing these intimate scenes with such purity... Uff... I totally loved it! And why did you stop there.. Unhh.. thoda aur continue karte na! 😆

Bas, aisa thanda I love you! 😒
But otherwise love the intensity with which Asad has been speaking and looking at her ☺️ Zoya combust kaise nahi hui?😆

holding onto her hand Asad ignited the engine and put the car into motion. Zoya let him hold her hand in his while he drove onto the street.

"I Love you Zoya Farooqui. I love you more than I've loved anyone ever" and with that Asad claimed her lips into a soft kiss.

Yaay! This I was asking for.. finally mil gaya! ☺️

You're so good at writing these romantic scenes.. please fill the next chapters with more of these. They anyway need to make up for the lost time, like Rashid also mentioned! 😆

I could feel flutters through my body while reading it.

☺️

Arey, poor thing, Asad does not get a reply! 😒

Please, Choco jaldi se write the next chapter... waitinggg...
Loved these chapters!

Mwah! 🤗



Oie!!! Yeh kya hua 😲. Uff. Am so so sorry yaar I copy pasted the names of everyone who hit like on that chapter and since you hadn't read it tab tak, your name got missed. Am sorry. No, am really really sorry yaar

I really danced reading your comment Chandini, am so so happy that you loved it all. And the best part is ki after all the illness and the almost break from if, I come back to such a beautiful comment. Thank you so much dear. Love you tons

As you said, meine likhna start kar diya hai and will update either Sunday night or Monday latest 😃. Free rehna to come and read 😳


And once again
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ChocoBerry




Hey Gowtu, update coming soon😃. But mere 85 likes nahi hue abhi tak😒




But I m waiting fr it..
I think it z also one of my cravings these days 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: gowtu




But I m waiting fr it..
I think it z also one of my cravings these days 😆



😲 ONE of your cravings Matlab???? Good news coming our way??

Jaldi batao 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
AWESOME...BEAUTIFUL... AMAZING UPDATE...
LOVE THE BALCONY SCENE... RASHID'S RECTION...
ASAD'S CONFESSION... THEIR LOVE...AND THEIR FIRST KISS...
EVERYTHING WAS PERFECT... ZOYA HAVN'T SAID IT ALOUD...
LETS SEE...UPDATE SOON...
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Posted: 9 years ago


Kal tak mil jayega, pakka 😃
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Originally posted by: kabhi_asya

AWESOME...BEAUTIFUL... AMAZING UPDATE...

LOVE THE BALCONY SCENE... RASHID'S RECTION...
ASAD'S CONFESSION... THEIR LOVE...AND THEIR FIRST KISS...
EVERYTHING WAS PERFECT... ZOYA HAVN'T SAID IT ALOUD...
LETS SEE...UPDATE SOON...


Hey, hope you're well 😊

Thank you so much for all the appreciation 😳. Am glad you liked it. Will do soon 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ChocoBerry




😲ONE of your cravings Matlab???? Good news coming our way??

Jaldi batao😃



Sorry for interruption

Choco don't u know about it???

Well I know 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ashiii333



Sorry for interruption

Choco don't u know about it???

Well I know 😳



😭 mujhe koi kuch nahi batata 😭

But koi baat nahi, Abhi maloom laga naa, that's sufficient 😃. Congratulations Gowtu look after yourself well. N read loads of ASYA stories so baby will be addicted already 😛😆. No no jokes apart, really look after yourself and the lil one too. May God bless you with good health always 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ChocoBerry




😭mujhe koi kuch nahi batata😭

But koi baat nahi, Abhi maloom laga naa, that's sufficient😃. Congratulations Gowtu look after yourself well. N read loads of ASYA stories so baby will be addicted already😛😆. No no jokes apart, really look after yourself and the lil one too. May God bless you with good health always🤗



U ddnt knw choco !! I thought I told u 😕
Sry... Thnk u so much fr d wishes :-)

Isi baat pe ek updt bannta hai,, nai !!!! 😆

Isse kehte hai ''muaka pe chuaka marna'' lolll

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