Firstly the chapter doesn't go out to me! - Thank you so much haa!😒
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Chapter 15:
She knew this was as bare as he could have put his heart, soul and his feelings in front of her.
Wanting to embrace him and all his love with open arms Zoya turned around wanting to go back to him but stood still watching him standing right behind her. Their eye locked, they stood there neither saying a word but their eyes in a conversation of their own.
as she felt his arms wrap around her waist, she pressed her cheek against his chest listening to the drum like beat of his heart that was as fast and loud as she knew her heart was beating.
Sniffing against his chest she tightened her hold on him and felt him do the same.
A smile that she hadn't seen earlier, a smile she hadn't seen during their seminar days either.
^ Pulled at heart strings.
Choco darling, you're magical. Absolutely in love with how you framed these above paragraphs extremely articulate and expressive... of finally having to win the love one has been waiting for for years and years... how they poured their feelings of oneness... all the sorrow, the happiness of finally coming together in that one hug
Aww, Rashid is so cute... How he tells Zoya to relax and be happy and how she has found a father in him, how he teases her and most of all how he says that love is such a sacred thing and one shouldn't be embarrassed... Love how Rashid is such a cool father-in-law. I can't wait to see Dilshad meet with Zoya... Oh, the love that lady will emanate.😃
"OK now you two, off you go to catch up on all your lost time... But yes! No getting carried away!"
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Asad sucked in a breath and Zoya felt him tighten his hold onto her, slowly he pulled her flush against himself.
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- The entire scene. Wow!
Babe, you're so good at writing these intimate scenes with such purity... Uff... I totally loved it! And why did you stop there.. Unhh.. thoda aur continue karte na! 😆
Bas, aisa thanda I love you! 😒
But otherwise love the intensity with which Asad has been speaking and looking at her ☺️ Zoya combust kaise nahi hui?😆
holding onto her hand Asad ignited the engine and put the car into motion. Zoya let him hold her hand in his while he drove onto the street.
"I Love you Zoya Farooqui. I love you more than I've loved anyone ever" and with that Asad claimed her lips into a soft kiss.
Yaay! This I was asking for.. finally mil gaya! ☺️
You're so good at writing these romantic scenes.. please fill the next chapters with more of these. They anyway need to make up for the lost time, like Rashid also mentioned! 😆
I could feel flutters through my body while reading it.
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Arey, poor thing, Asad does not get a reply! 😒
Please, Choco jaldi se write the next chapter... waitinggg...
Loved these chapters!
Mwah! 🤗
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