ASYA SS:I Forget You Not#2, chp 24 up (05/03/2016),pg 114 (Complete) - Page 39

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: MayurChan


I am fine Choco...
You know I just felt that when I read your comment...i get a glimpse of Aapi's words...like how Aapi's responds to us...not at all in same way...very different..but the warmth is always their..
And about the feeling called LOVE...hahaha..then i think i have to wait for it...i have few prior committments..before being in Love with someone...but yes how much little i know...it is a Bliss..
And thank you for the wishes at last...I wish You the same..as we can get ,many more beautiful updates and stories from U..
Take care.



Thank you dear. See warmth tabhi reciprocate hogi jab both ways hogi. You're an awesome person yourself 🤗. Glad to see that you know your priorities and are well aware of your responsibilities. Koi baat nahi, everything in life happens when the time is right.

Hopefully you will keep getting something out of me 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: muskaan17rocks

Well then i can definitely not wait for the next chapter
Please continue soon
U have actually made me more excited by confirming about her confession 😊


Lol! I know I must have. But abhi toh I haven't started writing the next part but hopefully tomorrow I will 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ChocoBerry




Thank you dear. See warmth tabhi reciprocate hogi jab both ways hogi. You're an awesome person yourself🤗. Glad to see that you know your priorities and are well aware of your responsibilities. Koi baat nahi, everything in life happens when the time is right.

Hopefully you will keep getting something out of me🤗


Thank You...So soo much..Choco...for everything U said...and meant. 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
amazing story.read it from start.really amazing love asya.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Aww finally an update
And finally asya together
So love the update
So Zoya let it out accepted her love no more fighting it
But so sad she never got to actually say the words
Everytime she was interrupted somehow
Asad said it so many times and can say it so many more
Aww the feelings were bottled up so long the passion and desire explode
Love the kisses hole Zoya say I love u before she leaves him tonite
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago


HIII!!!!!

❤️

Finally here.

😃

Most awaited chapters!



Chapter 14:


Mr. Kapoor and Shipra are so cute, trying to make them spend every other minute together. Make them Asya ke bacho ka God parents! 😆

Zoya could feel her resolve weakening with every passing day. All she noticed was how focused and professional Asad was while working on the project and how his attention would solely be on her when they were on their breaks.

So happy that finally things are working in the right direction!

And the cute conversations ... where Asad is teasing Zoya, and she can hardly suppress her giggle.

A party! - What a wonderful idea to get them moving onto the next step! 😃

The wink exchange between Asad and Mr. Kapoor! 😆

Benazeer and Zoya's dialogue 😳😆. Mother-daughter bond is so cute and meaningful here. Love how Benazeer uses these phrases with an underlined meaning to them and plays coy at being caught by Zoya 😆

And hoe can I not mention your perfect writing skills- the way you describe Asad being blown away by Zoya's entry - bro, You're so good that I can picture each and every scene while reading it! SubanAllah to you! 👏

"You look beautiful Zoya. Nothing like I've ever seen you as before... Not even in my dreams". Trying to control the blush that she knew he could see burning her cheeks, Zoya smiled and lowering her lashes breathed a thank you to him.

😳😳

Love the interaction between Asad and Zoya without even having to speak to they understand and communicate so well with each other. how they know these little things about each other without having actually know it from anyone.

LOVE the song!
And, what a perfect song, fits their scene totally... like its just made for them.

LOVED THE CHAPTER.

Love you Choco.
Thank you so much for the patience.
🤗❤️

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Posted: 9 years ago


Firstly the chapter doesn't go out to me! - Thank you so much haa!😒

😵


Chapter 15:


She knew this was as bare as he could have put his heart, soul and his feelings in front of her.

Wanting to embrace him and all his love with open arms Zoya turned around wanting to go back to him but stood still watching him standing right behind her. Their eye locked, they stood there neither saying a word but their eyes in a conversation of their own.

as she felt his arms wrap around her waist, she pressed her cheek against his chest listening to the drum like beat of his heart that was as fast and loud as she knew her heart was beating.

Sniffing against his chest she tightened her hold on him and felt him do the same.

A smile that she hadn't seen earlier, a smile she hadn't seen during their seminar days either.

^ Pulled at heart strings.

Choco darling, you're magical. Absolutely in love with how you framed these above paragraphs extremely articulate and expressive... of finally having to win the love one has been waiting for for years and years... how they poured their feelings of oneness... all the sorrow, the happiness of finally coming together in that one hug

Aww, Rashid is so cute... How he tells Zoya to relax and be happy and how she has found a father in him, how he teases her and most of all how he says that love is such a sacred thing and one shouldn't be embarrassed... Love how Rashid is such a cool father-in-law. I can't wait to see Dilshad meet with Zoya... Oh, the love that lady will emanate.😃

"OK now you two, off you go to catch up on all your lost time... But yes! No getting carried away!"

😆😆

Asad sucked in a breath and Zoya felt him tighten his hold onto her, slowly he pulled her flush against himself.

☺️

- The entire scene. Wow!

Babe, you're so good at writing these intimate scenes with such purity... Uff... I totally loved it! And why did you stop there.. Unhh.. thoda aur continue karte na! 😆

Bas, aisa thanda I love you! 😒
But otherwise love the intensity with which Asad has been speaking and looking at her ☺️ Zoya combust kaise nahi hui?😆

holding onto her hand Asad ignited the engine and put the car into motion. Zoya let him hold her hand in his while he drove onto the street.

"I Love you Zoya Farooqui. I love you more than I've loved anyone ever" and with that Asad claimed her lips into a soft kiss.

Yaay! This I was asking for.. finally mil gaya! ☺️

You're so good at writing these romantic scenes.. please fill the next chapters with more of these. They anyway need to make up for the lost time, like Rashid also mentioned! 😆

I could feel flutters through my body while reading it.

☺️

Arey, poor thing, Asad does not get a reply! 😒

Please, Choco jaldi se write the next chapter... waitinggg...
Loved these chapters!

Mwah! 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: aachal20

amazing story.read it from start.really amazing love asya.


Thank you for reading Aachal. Am glad you enjoyed reading it till now. Hope you like the rest of it too, though I don't know what it's all going to be like 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: anopama

Aww finally an update

And finally asya together
So love the update
So Zoya let it out accepted her love no more fighting it
But so sad she never got to actually say the words
Everytime she was interrupted somehow
Asad said it so many times and can say it so many more
Aww the feelings were bottled up so long the passion and desire explode
Love the kisses hole Zoya say I love u before she leaves him tonite
Continue soon


Hey Anopama, hope you're well dear.

Am glad you loved the update and everything that came along with it 😉

Yes Zoya didn't get ronsay it, but doesn't mean she won't. She will in the next update. Hope you will like that too 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Chandnii.



HIII!!!!!

❤️

Finally here.

😃

Most awaited chapters!



Chapter 14:


Mr. Kapoor and Shipra are so cute, trying to make them spend every other minute together. Make them Asya ke bacho ka God parents! 😆

Zoya could feel her resolve weakening with every passing day. All she noticed was how focused and professional Asad was while working on the project and how his attention would solely be on her when they were on their breaks.

So happy that finally things are working in the right direction!

And the cute conversations ... where Asad is teasing Zoya, and she can hardly suppress her giggle.

A party! - What a wonderful idea to get them moving onto the next step! 😃

The wink exchange between Asad and Mr. Kapoor! 😆

Benazeer and Zoya's dialogue 😳😆. Mother-daughter bond is so cute and meaningful here. Love how Benazeer uses these phrases with an underlined meaning to them and plays coy at being caught by Zoya 😆

And hoe can I not mention your perfect writing skills- the way you describe Asad being blown away by Zoya's entry - bro, You're so good that I can picture each and every scene while reading it! SubanAllah to you! 👏

"You look beautiful Zoya. Nothing like I've ever seen you as before... Not even in my dreams". Trying to control the blush that she knew he could see burning her cheeks, Zoya smiled and lowering her lashes breathed a thank you to him.

😳😳

Love the interaction between Asad and Zoya without even having to speak to they understand and communicate so well with each other. how they know these little things about each other without having actually know it from anyone.

LOVE the song!
And, what a perfect song, fits their scene totally... like its just made for them.

LOVED THE CHAPTER.

Love you Choco.
Thank you so much for the patience.
🤗❤️



Hey meri jaan 🤗. So good to read your comments, par toh meine pehle hi liye the but you know I wasn't well n then my sons exams started. But abhi am free and so thought reply toh kar deti hoon 😃


Love how you reply in detail Chandini, it brings a bid big smile on my face always. It's so geed to see how all these little details that I add are remembered. I really can't write without covering every little detail in a scene and a characters expression. Am happy you enjoy reading it all.


Koi baat nahi if you're late, I know uni is keeping you busy. Cause bhi better late than never 😉


I love you too sweetheart, dher saara 🤗

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