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Saima Syed

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Posted: 10 years ago

#131

A beautiful story with a beautiful ending

Please write more, would love to read

Lots of love

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Posted: 10 years ago

#132

Originally posted by: jas91
beautiful ending 2 d story
I loved how Asad proposed her on same cafe
it was a wonderful story dear
do write another 1 when possible😊

Thanks a lot dear 😊

I m glad you like the story

Thankew so much for your support

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Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#133

Originally posted by: ajanshul
It's really beautiful

Thanks a lot 😊

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Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#134

Originally posted by: --Arpita--
Awesome...ending...

Thankew Arpita 😊

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Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#135

Hey skavya

Well written

All read in one ago

Pm me your other stories when you will write

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Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#136

Originally posted by: sasir
Awesome

Thankew 😊

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Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#137

Originally posted by: -simmi-
omg that was so good
Loved It
Its end already.. Pls write something soon u did it really well i love ur writing muahh

Thankew so much Simmi😊

I m glad you like it

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Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#138

Originally posted by: MayurChan
Wonderfully Written part Deepti..
Thanx for the PM...
AsYa's talk at the strting was emotional...but at the end..they manage to clear all the past glitches so as to look forward for a healthy future TOGETHER.
The date setup was also wonderful...and Award ceremony part also..
All and all a great start for a first timer on this forum...Do write more...
Continue soonishh...with other works soon.

Hey Mayur

Thanks a lot for this sweet & encouraging comment 😊

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Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#139

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs
Beautifully written..
It was so emotional too...
The start was sad as well as intriguing how easily Asad forgave her for his love.

Loved the way Assad took her to the same cafe n the way he proposed.
Happy ending...

Thanks a lot dear 😊

I m glad you like it