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simmi

@-simmi-

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#121

omg that was so good
Loved It
Its end already.. Pls write something soon u did it really well i love ur writing muahh

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Mayur Chan

@MayurChan

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#122

Wonderfully Written part Deepti..
Thanx for the PM...
AsYa's talk at the strting was emotional...but at the end..they manage to clear all the past glitches so as to look forward for a healthy future TOGETHER.
The date setup was also wonderful...and Award ceremony part also..
All and all a great start for a first timer on this forum...Do write more...
Continue soonishh...with other works soon.

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sweet_tehs

@sweet_tehs

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#123

Beautifully written..

It was so emotional too...

The start was sad as well as intriguing how easily Asad forgave her for his love.

Loved the way Assad took her to the same cafe n the way he proposed.

Happy ending...

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Ankita

@AisiDeewangi

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#124

beautiful ending
thanks for pm

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Aishwarya

@--Aishwarya--

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#125

Hey Kavya!!!

Its so sweet of you in letting know your thanks to me!! I would be willing to give you suggestions any time dear!! 🤗

And it was a beautiful story and I really loved it!! 👏

Thanks for the pm and do keep writing!! 😊

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Lasya Adiraj

@KSGmaniac_24579

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#126

Aww... this was so cute!

Loved it!!

Beautiful!

Write more and do pm me!

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anopama

@anopama

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#127

Aww such a beautiful ending

His anxiousness he couldn't wait till he came back to talk to her

So now all r good they r together

Love how he proposed to her where they met

And he finally got his complete dream to hold his love in one hand and the trophy in the other

Love it

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Sanjhari

@Sanjhari

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#128

That's so nice
Finally they found their happiness
Loved it

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nilusoni

@nilusoni

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#129

Superb loved it

Thanks for pm

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Sadia Sharmeen Swapno

@swapno

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#130

Look who is here 😎

Hello writer Sahiba ...(Someone said that she can't write and all)

I was out of town so could not comment here..

The chapters were undoubtedly wonderful and beautifully written

It was clear that both love each other immensely !

I loved the enraged Asad...

at the same time a naive and broken Zoya.

Who can tell looking at them that they met after 10 years..

I guess love does this magic to anyone.

Ah it ended with good note...!

They get solace in each others arms...!

More of that they are together...

I want to read some more from you...

Hope you will continue with your writing..

Trust me you write beautifully with perfect emotions and meaning..

Last but not the least..Thanks a ton for mentioning my name again and again..though I have done nothing for your favors...Still I count on you when I need mine...

Love you.

Swapno