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Forgiveness, if I have to find a word about this chapter and the last update. The miracle of forgiveness.
One of the hardest and the most beautiful feeling that human can face, forgiving someone for hurting you, forgiving painful words and hard act, forgiving in the name of love. A powerful feeling like forgiveness can only serve love.
Not every story has a good ending but every story should finish by a forgiveness. And moving on should not always finish in bad note, but it should finish by looking back without feeling anymore any pain or regret about it.
I am happy that you decided to finish in a good note, even if in life, it barely finish in this way. Mine didn't finish happily, but I am happy with my end, at least, both of us found our own roads.
Once, I was reading your update, I had a doubt about Zoya's feeling, if she was still in love with him. Actually, I wouldn't have been shocked if she realised that after all this years, all her feeling flew away. She was now free from this cage that she put herself in it. She should not feel anymore guilty about her past, about what she did to punish herself. It only taught her the meaning of living her life, with good feeling and with the right person.
I couldn't stop myself from thinking that this Asad didn't deserve her, but in the same time, she forgave him for love, for herself and this is so beautiful and respectful. We are only heal once we realized that we have no more anger, or guilt or pain for what he did and this feeling of freedom is the best feel after love ( for me). We only keep what was beautiful and we smile at this. She chose to write a new page with him, and this is a true love and hope of her heart.
The most important thing about your story it's friendship, you always highlight in such a way that I wished to have such friends in my life that could understand me. Even if at the end, you are the only one who faced your own soul and its insecurities. I really love every single characters around her, it adds more power and depth to your story. We are never alone, we just sometimes used to forget when we are covered with misery. Good friends always made your day brighter. So thumbs up to this part.
I wished you would have extanded more their fight, I wished you would have made her talk and yell even more on him, but again I thought what was the need? She waited for so long to have him and he went through tought time too. She was only ready for him now, that she became a strong woman. From his side, he wasn't ready for her, he was supposed to grow up, to be enough prepare to love a woman like her. He needed to learn how to lose her and never had her back to understand her feeling and his for her. In your story, the meaning of love took all his sense, we only met the one once we are ready to welcome it. Love is consumming, we should be well prepared before or you will screw it. Because meeting the right person in the wrong time will always lead to bad ending.
I hate you...you've ruined my life like a moth does to clothes. Why the hell did you come back I'd learned to live without you but no you had to come again in my life like a cyclone.You've got to Break everything that I construct
this sentence said everything, she caged her feeling and deal with her pain, until he came back and cracked everything around her. She just lied to herself, lied about everything, her hope didn't die to have him and he came once, she was strong enough forgive him and to trust him.
No I Hate you very very much !. But I love you. ..more than you can to me and I'm not going to waste another eight years of my life to accept the fact that I'm incomplete without you
This was so beautiful, indeed, this feeling of being incomplete, this whole that our heart feel when we missed love. Both of them went in seperate road to meet again but this time to trace their life together . Even if I wouldn't mind another end, I prefered this one, at least, you reconcile me with the reality, that all feeling of love was not always meant to be, but only true love is meant to reunite two lost souls. Love was easy to get but hard to keep, even between two who were madly in love. Both will have to step toward each other to make it work, confession without proof is like incomplete promise. Your story has no end with many hope.
I am happy that you finished your story and indeed this one trapped a lot of hope in it. Hope to have a lost love back, a lesson of forgiveness and a lesson of friendship throught hard time. This story is beautiful in the love that we can find and as you said, it's really close to your heart and I can feel it, that why maybe I felt myself connected. When a heart speak, I can feel it.
Thank you for such a beautiful story and if I can give a advice, don't stop to write, someone who can write with his heart, can teach us a lot from his life. take a time, take a break to learn and to live and come back with another story, maybe here maybe somewhere else, but don't stop to write. I discovered how to write and I must confess it's one of the last place of freedom that we can have here on this earth. Imagination has no limits, so let's dream.
Edited by radadolcevida - 9 years ago
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