New Asya SS:Crossing time, chap 14 (LAST); 08-11-15

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#501

Awesome & emotional update
Asad didn't want to be Leo again as he thought he was powerful physically but mentally not. Club scene was eye opening scene for him. He thought he will forget zoya but he can't. Like the way he realised what he was doing & abt to do. Her face was in front of him. Zoya felt restless at the same time. Akram told a lie to asad abt destroyed his parents room but I was confused abt hugging scene. Hope it will clear soon as I knew zoya never hurt him. Asad & akram met & know I think everything will be clear & asad will become Leo again. Update soon plz. Thanks for pm

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Mayur Chan

@MayurChan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#502

Very Well written , Intense I mean really emotionally shattering and Fabulously scripted part..

I don't know if the words above make any sense but I have my own justification for the words.

WELL WRITTEN :

It was a very well written part Rada...like somehow I noticed ki in every update the events of past are contradicting with presents...like in someway or the other whatever happened and occurred in past somehow repeats itself in future also...like from kissing to the fight..

INTENSITY :

It was emotionally shattering and intense , because what Asad did in the pub if Zoya would have done anything as such I would have felt worse...but what he did was also worse and bad also...we can say it was in a way a knock on his Asad form which is so rigid and arrogant that he don't want to move out of this hard rock image of his and somewhere he is suppressing the innocent LEO...inside him...and somewhere I felt Zoya was ready to fight for her Love and was determined to bring the LEO back from this Asad...she wanted Asad to move on...and accept his present but then he being emotionally rigid didn't budged down and she left him like that...well both are wrong in this matter where Asad mistake was a little bigger...

SCRIPTED :

Well like all of this wasn't enough Asad came back to revisit his past moments in school and met the main reason or can say source of his destroyed being , AKRAM...but he actually felt like helpless...so now Asad is getting face to face his BRUISED PAST I guess its time for him to clear out everything and free himself out of this rigidness..

Interesting chapt...

Continue soonish

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aseela sha

@aseelashah

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Posted: 10 years ago

#503

Radha u rocked it dear

Brilliant update dear

Everything was well written

Asad & zoya their pain, agony everything

Its so emotional. dear

Now Akram also came to the picture

Pls don't torture Asya more

Pls make them unite soon

Pls update soon

Thanks for pm

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sanarujub

@SanKsgian

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Posted: 10 years ago

#504

Amazing story
But it is becoming too sad
Man I really cried reading this

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jas91

@jas91

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Posted: 10 years ago

#505

unresd on pg 68😊

Rada r u not reading these days I didn't saw ur comnt on Humnawa got bored wid my writing already😆😆

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radadolcevida

@radadolcevida

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Posted: 10 years ago

#506

Originally posted by: jas91
unresd on pg 68😊

Rada r u not reading these days I didn't saw ur comnt on Humnawa got bored wid my writing already😆😆

absolutely not, I was stalking your update, I wanted to be the first as you did for the story, but I didn't see that you reserved the part and I came late 😆
I cliked on like and I said I will come later to comment. I was preparing my travel for 2 days in England so I was a bit busy to stay and to write something.
Don't worry, I am coming 😉

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jas91

@jas91

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Posted: 10 years ago

#507

Originally posted by: radadolcevida

absolutely not, I was stalking your update, I wanted to be the first as you did for the story, but I didn't see that you reserved the part and I came late 😆
I cliked on like and I said I will come later to comment. I was preparing my travel for 2 days in England so I was a bit busy to stay and to write something.
Don't worry, I am coming 😉

Oh ok no1 was giving me opportunity 2 res so maine chupke se aake res kar diya😆😆

Oh U going 2 England vacation pe? Cool enjoy urself. 😃🤗

But few days ago also u were holidaying

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radadolcevida

@radadolcevida

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Posted: 10 years ago

#508

Originally posted by: jas91

Oh ok no1 was giving me opportunity 2 res so maine chupke se aake res kar diya😆😆

Oh U going 2 England vacation pe? Cool enjoy urself. 😃🤗

But few days ago also u were holidaying

this is not holiday, this is for new job application, and I am excited to go to englad for the first time and stressed for the interview 😆
I am going mad with so much feelings inside of me, I want to jump in joy and cry in stress, am I pregnant ??? 😆

I comment on your OS but you didn't like my comment 😕 anyway, I am on my way for MH

Edited by radadolcevida - 10 years ago

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jas91

@jas91

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Posted: 10 years ago

#509

Originally posted by: radadolcevida

this is not holiday, this is for new job application, and I am excited to go to englad for the first time and stressed for the interview 😆
I am going mad with so much feelings inside of me, I want to jump in joy and cry in stress, am I pregnant ??? 😆

I comment on your OS but you didn't like my comment 😕 anyway, I am on my way for MH

Oh really Jon ke din aa gaye study over acha hai picha chuta😆

but new Musibat is ready in d name of Job. So will u move 2 England now if u r selected😊

Haw I toh didn't saw comnts till now why will I not like it I always love reading ur comnts 😃

So do din main flight going kitne din ke liye?