New Asya SS:Crossing time, chap 14 (LAST); 08-11-15

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surbhi

@suearmaniac

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Posted: 10 years ago

#491

update was so fantastically written that the thrill was awesome👏
loved it😃

Edited by suearmaniac - 10 years ago

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muskaan17rocks

@muskaan17rocks

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Posted: 10 years ago

#492

Thankfully you updated

It was very intense

The end was really unexpected

I am actually speechless after reading the update as firstly i did not expect a update today and secondly i never expected such an intense update

I would be honest that i hated the club scene but i know that it was essential for the story. I think that the story is actually progressing to the transformation of asad to leo all over again. A phase where he will actually see the difference between the two and hopefully will make one right choice

The end as i said was unexpected and also cliffy at the same time

Eagerly waiting for the next part

Please continue soon

Will be waiting impatiently 😊

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KeyaHira2

@KeyaHira2

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Posted: 10 years ago

#493

This chapter let everything out

Akram

No way

And Zoya gave the keys to Akram

No way

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asyakabhidreamy

@asyakabhidreamy

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#494

Oh god !
Rada that was so heart touching update
I'm so sorry for not coming online and I didn't commented too
But trust me I haven't missed bit of your any update
Finally I'm happy to be able to comment now
It was so emotional one
U know I was at first by Asad side but now I'm feeling Zoya is true
I hope akram will be the reason behind their union now
I'm eagerly awaiting for update now !
U r my most favourite writer here sweetheart keep it up !

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Abi

@-ABI-

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#495

Edited by -ABI- - 10 years ago

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sj_qh_kabhi

@sj_qh_kabhi

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#496

That was a emotional roller coaster. .
so much has happened. .
Asad is in a turmoil. .
awesome update. .
very well written.. update soon the next one..

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Mitamad

@Mitamad

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#497

Wow, the twists in just one chapter, totally amazing.
Love the way u write it.

And as always can wait to read on.

Update as soon as u can, can't wait to read on the last twist

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Ramya

@jazz2010

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#498

Amazing update loved it
Continue soon

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Sumi Roy

@LoveSonu2408

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#499

In ths stry wht i lv most is hw beautifuly u merge the past & present.
Its bcm crystal clear nw.
In the past zed was in dark,leo bro8 smile on her face.nw asad go in2 the dark & zoya wanna bring bk him.
Asya's convo was intense whr leo-zed's was cute.
Club part is awwful!zoya realize smthng bad happn with asad.i hope asad undrstnd wht is he doing & go bk 2 zoya & fc the truth,tell her evrythng.
Asad meet with akram!nw wht will happn?
Interesting.cntinu soon.thnks 4 pm.

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kaju27

@kaju27

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Posted: 10 years ago

#500

that whole club scene reminded me of barren nd i didnt like that...
they kissed in the past bt then he was leo...
now he is changed...
i think now he will understand leo was not weak as akram is changed now...
how wil zoya react when she will come to know abt what he did in the club