New Asya SS:Crossing time, chap 14 (LAST); 08-11-15 - Page 48

Originally posted by: jas91

another res😆

unres

finally here I m u can scold me as much as u can but seriously I tried 2 do it sooner. I think universe was keeping me away this time. Sorry kaan pakad ke😳😳

I understand how universe can act a perverse, I won't scold you for this, someday, I want to meet this universe, I have something to tell him too 😡

coming 2 updt it was Birrilant, Fantastic, Superb, Mind-blowing👏⭐️👏

Super se upar that yeh updt sachi😃

I loved Asad going back in his past

if I m not wrong that's Asad's insight in his past not Leo's just confirming

That was just Excellently penned I thoroughly loved reading that

I mean that Asad & Leo's face 2 face argue which started funnily when Leo was amazed seeing his future look & those funny qstns😆 & it got serious in d 2nd half
Leo was a funny guy while Asad a bit too strict 😆. i agree it started light and it finished in fight. Personally, I would love to see myself younger, I have something to tell her too 😆

I must say I totally agree wid Leo & I would love 2 say he was more smart than d future Asad ofcurse Zoe want d old Leo he was so smart & intelligent afterall😆😆 & so pure wid humanity, kindness all those adjectives which we use 4 Dilshaad infact now that I m saying I feel he was a replica of our Mommy dearest Dilshaad😊 but has some cuteness & naughtiness mixed of Zoe & Naj both😉

Actually, I didn't notice this, yes you are right, Leo was a mix of every cute and funny character from QH, maybe because they are not in my story that unconsciously, I've put them inside Leo.

than came Zoya & that part was very sweet & painful as well Asad looked very vulnerable 😭

& than came that rascal Akram😡 messing & confusing his mind mocking him against Leo clouding his vision just like he created MUs btw Leo & Zed. And combined wid Asad's already oppressed anger against Leo d trick worked.

Actually Akram in his dream represent his fears, that why at the end, he has his face and Akram's voice. Leo was his best part (brain/humanity), Zoya reprensented his love (heart/love) and akram represented his pain (dark side/fears). We all have demons and Asad was between all of this.

Than came FB I 1st thought it was d present but it was past flash😆

Leo opened his eyes after 6 weeks & Asya's scene were very light-hearted & fun filled 2 read😛

He had this vision from d future that he will hurt Zed but didn't shared it wid her that time

When he gained consciousness in present he demanded 2 see Zoya as a lion was hilarious poor Nurse😆😆 but Zoe came & put him in his place telling her reasons & moved away but I felt 4 her when she broke down on d terrace.😭

Thanks you for this last line, we can say that she might be wrong by doing this but I feel that sometimes you need to hurt to heal pain, it's contradictive but in life, you will always mix opposite power to find the balance. (Guruji mode 😆)

But it was so sad that even after Zoya tried 2 show & bring him back from darkness he was not ready 2 give in & is being stubborn. Ego is Evil's eye 4 lovers ppl😆 So true 😆

He left hospital in anger & ego & Zoe came 2 see & talk/scold him. But instead he hurt her making her leave in tears.😭 But he couldn't see it & went after her. D kiss in d elevator was like welcome healer 😊4 both of them as both r hurt bcuz of each other.

This fighting is so unique Zoe is fighting 2 bring him back from darkness & making peace wid his past which he doesn't want thinking Leo was weak & he doesn't want 2 b weak.😵

But 1 point will Asad now see he also hurt & made Zoe cry so he's also no better than d Leo he dislike so much😆. I think Zoe should take this idea & use it against him 2 prove her point & make him see truth.😉

nice point 😉

War of egos but here Zoe is right & I m in her team 2 sudharo Asad😆 Go my feisty girl🥳

Originally posted by: kabhi_asya

M speechless...

It was so beautiful and amazing...

Just loved it... Loved it totally...

Its getting deep and intense...

Their emotional states are the best part in this story...

Plzzz update soon...

Originally posted by: muskaan17rocks

Beautiful chapter

Loved reading it

The conflict between leo and asad, the asad who never wants to be leo again and the zoya wanting asad back as leo

The kiss was definitely very intense and passionate

In short a beautifully written chapter

Eagerly waiting for the next part

Please continue soon😊

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Intense and intriguing part...

Asad and Leo's part was very good...till halfway through this update I felt like I was reading a Hollywood movie scene.

Liked the Update..

Continue soon.

Originally posted by: radadolcevida

thanks Mayur, it was one of the best compliment ever 😳
Nothing to add more about 😃

Originally posted by: MayurChan

But i don't think so Rada...
Because You potray so soo many emotions...that i fail to verbalise them and then i jst have to help my self with these 3 yaa 4 lines only.

Originally posted by: radadolcevida

but I love those 4 lines 😉

Originally posted by: MayurChan

I don't know what to say..
Its like commenting on The Runnaway Bride.. was easy because their was one wrong and one right..
But I don't really know how to justify CONTRADICTING emotions...like one is wrong as well as right in his own way...and same goes with the other.
But its fine i guess , i will try and comment with much more words from next time.