New Asya SS:Crossing time, chap 14 (LAST); 08-11-15

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kaju27

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Posted: 10 years ago

#461

it is so complicated...conflict bw asad nd leo...
i agree with zoya he needs to be in peace with his past...
he is in his ego ...bt at last came after her nd kiss was apt for situation

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Kabhibloom

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Posted: 10 years ago

#462

Awesome n Wonderful chapter.
Loved it.
Asad's interaction with leo, zoya n akram was beautifully written.
The kiss was intense.
Continue soonish.

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kobeb

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Posted: 10 years ago

#463

Loved it pls continue soon!! :)

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Sumi Roy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#464

Beautiful updt.overwhelming.till nw its the bestest part in ths story.
The way u portrayed the inner conflict b/w asad nd leo & wht leo saw during coma tht descriptn was jst amaizing.
Asya's kiss was so much passnate nd intense.
Nw finish ths rift b/w asya.
Waiting 4 nxt part.cntinu soon.

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jas91

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Posted: 10 years ago

#465

another res😆

unres

finally here I m u can scold me as much as u can but seriously I tried 2 do it sooner. I think universe was keeping me away this time. Sorry kaan pakad ke😳😳

coming 2 updt it was Birrilant, Fantastic, Superb, Mind-blowing👏⭐️👏

Super se upar that yeh updt sachi😃

I loved Asad going back in his past

if I m not wrong that's Asad's insight in his past not Leo's just confirming

That was just Excellently penned I thoroughly loved reading that

I mean that Asad & Leo's face 2 face argue which started funnily when Leo was amazed seeing his future look & those funny qstns😆 & it got serious in d 2nd half

I must say I totally agree wid Leo & I would love 2 say he was more smart than d future Asad ofcurse Zoe want d old Leo he was so smart & intelligent afterall😆😆 & so pure wid humanity, kindness all those adjectives which we use 4 Dilshaad infact now that I m saying I feel he was a replica of our Mommy dearest Dilshaad😊 but has some cuteness & naughtiness mixed of Zoe & Naj both😉

than came Zoya & that part was very sweet & painful as well Asad looked very vulnerable 😭

& than came that rascal Akram😡 messing & confusing his mind mocking him against Leo clouding his vision just like he created MUs btw Leo & Zed. And combined wid Asad's already oppressed anger against Leo d trick worked.

Than came FB I 1st thought it was d present but it was past flash😆

Leo opened his eyes after 6 weeks & Asya's scene were very light-hearted & fun filled 2 read😛

He had this vision from d future that he will hurt Zed but didn't shared it wid her that time

When he gained consciousness in present he demanded 2 see Zoya as a lion was hilarious poor Nurse😆😆 but Zoe came & put him in his place telling her reasons & moved away but I felt 4 her when she broke down on d terrace.😭

But it was so sad that even after Zoya tried 2 show & bring him back from darkness he was not ready 2 give in & is being stubborn. Ego is Evil's eye 4 lovers ppl😆

He left hospital in anger & ego & Zoe came 2 see & talk/scold him. But instead he hurt her making her leave in tears.😭 But he couldn't see it & went after her. D kiss in d elevator was like welcome healer 😊4 both of them as both r hurt bcuz of each other.

This fighting is so unique Zoe is fighting 2 bring him back from darkness & making peace wid his past which he doesn't want thinking Leo was weak & he doesn't want 2 b weak.😵

But 1 point will Asad now see he also hurt & made Zoe cry so he's also no better than d Leo he dislike so much😆. I think Zoe should take this idea & use it against him 2 prove her point & make him see truth.😉

War of egos but here Zoe is right & I m in her team 2 sudharo Asad😆 Go my feisty girl🥳

Edited by jas91 - 10 years ago

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Asif

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Posted: 10 years ago

#466

Awesome update
Like asad & Leo talk. Hope he will understand Leo PoV as well. Asad wanted to meet zoya & their talks was intense. He told her all his fear. Zoya wanted him to live peacefully but he ignored. Surrender at the end was nice. Waiting for next update soon. Thanks for pm

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anopama

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Posted: 10 years ago

#467

Dwow quiet an intense update

So asad is faced with his demon

He is fighting and facing Leo,Akram ,Zoya

He fuse to be be Leo he wants to be this strong arrogant man

But Leo has the heart and Leo feels and asad can't claim to love Zoya if he don't want to have this tender feelings

So he has to possess Leo still in him to have Zoya

Akram is the person he hates the person who made him turn to this hard human being

So in his pass as he slept he saw his future he saw him losing Zoya but he ignored it

But now he wants to correct his past and fix his future

He wNts to keep her by his side but she walked away and he walked away too

But she showed up by his house knowing he can harm himself

And him unable to see her in tears and pain just hold her and kiss her senseless

And Zoya just decides to give in who ever it was Leo or asad

It was the man she loves

Continue soon

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Kanwal4salman

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Posted: 10 years ago

#468

Awesome update...
Loved inner voice of Asad..
But he did not ready to change..
Waiting for next update..
Thanx for pm

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sweet_tehs

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Posted: 10 years ago

#469

A very very high on emotions part..

I can see they both r ignoring and ruining things because of their egos..

NiceLy written part.

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Nav

@kabhi_asya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#470

M speechless...

It was so beautiful and amazing...

Just loved it... Loved it totally...

Its getting deep and intense...

Their emotional states are the best part in this story...

Plzzz update soon...

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