New Asya SS:Crossing time, chap 14 (LAST); 08-11-15

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miss.namrata96

@miss.namrata96

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#181

Thanks for the pm...

Thanks for updating...

Awsome chapter too good... ❤️

Very beautifully written and executed... 👍🏼

Will be waiting for the next update...

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Mayur Chan

@MayurChan

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#182

Hey Rada..
Thanks for the PM...
Well this was surely a light hearted , lovely , well written and a wonderful part...
I also liked the way you contradicted both past and present...in a way that the Characters and people were swapped..
I really liked this part...well Asad has more reasons to be concerned not just with jealousy...but with his chance to love and getting Zoya back also...isiliye he might have reacted the way he did..in the same way Zed reacted the way she did in her time...but the diff is here Asad loves Zoya ...but their Zed was confused about her feelings towards Leo.
Soo...it is not also tit for a tat kind of feeling ...but a great remainder of the past in present...but i wonder...did both even realised that or not..
This really was a Hearty Update..
Continue soonish..

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muskaan17rocks

@muskaan17rocks

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#183

Aww this was seriously such a cute update with a jealous asad and loved their moments a lot

god i am actually getting really attached to this story

please continue soon

will be waiting impatiently 😊

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Binzzz

@Binzzz

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#184

read till chapter 4.
nice story..
waiting to see what happened between zed and Leo..

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sanarujub

@SanKsgian

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#185

I love the techique of flashback you are using
In contrast to what is happening. ..it seems the present is in parallel with their past
Now we have an asya moment
It was different but I love it

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sanarujub

@SanKsgian

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#186

Thanks for the pm babe
Continue soon

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-PizzyLuvAsya-

@-PizzyLuvAsya-

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#187

Omg dear that was best part over now
Really loved it yar
I mean Al the time reading it my mouth was all wide
My cheeks r aching due to smiling like idiot
Lol
I just loved the update
Full of awesomeness
Update soonish yar