NEW ASYA STORY : Longing days and nights = part 2 (page 4) - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: aniha20

Nice. ..continue it !!!

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😊Nice start..
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Nice start dear

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WoW! Sounds Interesting

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HELLO GUYS...I AM HERE WITH NEXT CHAPTER..YES I AM LATE BECAUSE OF MY COUSINS ;P
I FELT HAPPY FOR THAT LIKES AND COMMENTS BY ALL..THANK YOU BUDDIES.


HERE YOU GO...




CHAPTER - 2




Zoya what the hell you doing, how you can be the same like always? Your friends are really becharis to handle you.



Riaaan !!! don't make me angry. Then I don't know what I will speak and I know Spanish too...are you thinking zoya farooqui cant do anything ?


Riaaan !! I am speaking to you but you eating like pig without inviting me anddd



Please zoya I don't have energy to speak to you and also I have meeting today..

(He is having important meeting today so he is sligh nervous )


Funny ..okie I am hungry too...




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-ZOYA P.O. V:-

Because of meeting rian went to office soon. I really got bored in this new place. I want to

roam around Bhopal which I missed for years. I know rian would not attend the call so without inform him, I went out with one mind which I waited for years.I don't know how to move from here. Ofcourse Bhopal changed a lot within six years. I got some idea with my i- pad.

When I moved in bus, the journey went short because by dream has no end . My mind recollected the flash backs which I was lived joys and happiness. I crossed the ground which I play cricket with next door uncle and his childrens, still I feeling fresh . I want to throw my arms with them like I always do.


Before reach home , I purchased sweets accessories and many things which they liked before. It took me more than three hours. I rushed soon to see them. I entered the gate , suddenly I got nervous - will they remember me? Can they welcome me like before? ? ,I know all would in angry with me because I went to new York without telling them . I got selected in good university unexpectedly which I had want to join in two days . At that time they went for their hometown so I could not connect phone.


I rang the bell , but no one responds, then I tried to turn a young lady open the door. My breath returns she asked me whom I ? I have come to meet Rashid uncle is he here or in office? Rashid -who ?? an unknown voice came from inside , they shifted from here a long back. My voice went down still tried to manage to ask about their current residence. But they replied No with door shut in my face. I quizzed why they behave like this for formal questions.

I felt a mild tightening in my chest as I thought about my loss of my family. It is not my own but I considering as mine. As I moved there from that place, earphones still in my ears even though I had turned my music off hours ago,the one thing keeping me physically ill was that I am alone . I already started to feel dizzy of these thoughts. Yes I am very emotional . People surrounding me seems busy with their work and I don't think they are looking me. I did not care about rian now because I already need someone to care me .


In good grace a young man noticed me asked me what's bothering me . I really don't know what I tolds . He tolds me something then I noticed he opens his car for me. I hesitated in a second but he show his identity, before I know, I ended in his back seat. I went blank.


I think in the middle of way he splashed water in my face and gave to drink. After a minute I realized the situation. He looks more weird than I and tried to get out of car but he promised me to settle home safely. I trusted him for unknown reason. I told my way to him and the rest of journey is silent with my high brain pressure. We reached soon because of less traffic in night .Ahhh my phone is off. I asked him the time. He said 9.30 . That's all.. Allah miyaa what's wrong with you ? say right time man ! he shows me angry face but I asked him again he swipes his mobile to see me a time.


I thanked him for this help . He simply smiles and told me to take care. My lips twisted small smile to him. I ran fast without using lift cause my brother going to create drama for my disobedience...


PHEEEWWW !! THATS ALL GUYS..TELL ME HOW 'S THIS STORY BY HITTING COMMENTS AND LIKES...BUDDY ME FOR PM'S OR SCRAPS 😳


LOVE YOU ALL...



























Edited by -DIYA003- - 10 years ago

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