NEW ASYA STORY : Longing days and nights = part 2 (page 4)

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-------------------LONGING DAYS AND NIGHTS----------------


HEY GUYS...


I AM VERY NEW TO WRITING FICTIONS AND ALL (NOT TO ASYA :P ) NOW I AM IN VACATION SO GOT BORED TO DO SAME STUFFS AGAIN AND AGAIN AND THO WOULD HAVE SOME MISTAKES ;) I CONSIDERING ASAD AS KSG MISSING HIM A LOT :'(




CHAPTER - I





When I was a kid I'd whisper my dreams and wishes to my next-door mate. So I don't feel like my brother who is a private boy and still he though. We were grown without parents and my guardian saying they died in accident' and I did not believes that and waiting to meet them one day or atleast to see once.

After my schooling, I moved to Newyork for my studies and my brother, Rian who is now managing office. In Newyork I living with friends but hate to manage In weekend because they would went to pamper their boyfriends. At that time I manage to talk with Rian through skype and playing games. Rian tolds me to come soon to india but I want to complete my studies in next six months.


My kid world had everything except parents - blue skies, starry nights lit up like a a pirate's treasure , and wide open meadows I'd run through while Taking in vats of fresh Bhopal air. Now , the sun went dark, the star faded to nothing and I lacked the oxygen I needed to breath and I also badly wanted to pour my feelings to my childhood friend which I did like before-I badly want to talk with them why cant I connect my call' - is they changed their numbers. They are as a family which I considers as mine.



My days passed with boring studies and lots of expection to meet my neighbhor family . Yes My masters degree going to complete in next month. Now-a days I always jumping and grinning even in my final project. My friends thinking I gone crazy.

The day I waiting for to come India is finally arrived and I have a mixed emotion whether to cry or not. I landed in Bhopal at right 9.00 a.m . Rian waiting for me with wide smile still he looks the same but his toned body changed well now. I reached to him. He hugged me which I missed like a hell . before we reach to car we start to fight for our ego's. Because of that high ego we did not came to meet each other in the last six years. In the middle of many blessed talks he tolds me,to his house came. I looked through car window. It's a huge apartment . We had a days lived in small house with some random members still I don't know who they are . I want to clear my doubts to rian soon - very soon !!! I am proud of my brother for his hardwork.

RIAN'S P.O.V ;

Her eyes scanned my apartment and her enthusiasm is the best thing I love her for more. I placed the luggage in room and it was decorated like her childhood wish. She squealed even more loud after saw the pink wall , barbies and some her favorite toys which I kept for her.she still same as kid mind. I closed the door with big content of smile to leave her for refresh.



I got some office call when I preparing food and then went to attend the call so I totally forgot about her. After s 20minutes I rushed to see her. What I saw in kitchen makes to think something is never change !!!


wohooo !!! how many liked my bakwaas?? but don't hate me because of this story lol...okie show me love by hitting comments and love..I dont how this story going to progress.And i will clear soon its a TS or SS...

love and hugs :*



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BUDDY ME FOR PM'S. .AS A NEWBIE I COULD NOT SENT IMMEDIATELY. .


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cute it is...❤️
continue soon n a long update plz...😳
thanks for scrap dear 😊

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Nice start! Please update soon.
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Originally posted by: shailu123

Its good continuce soon


Thanks dear 😊
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Originally posted by: asyaarshilover

cute it is...❤️

continue soon n a long update plz...😳
thanks for scrap dear 😊

aroo ❤️


Thanks so much aroo 😳
will try to update long and soon !!
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thanks shreya 😊
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Originally posted by: Mvinfff

Nice start! Please update soon.


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