Ohkay...ermm..ahem..*coughs* *chokes myself as my breath was caught between my throat* eh..
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I can't really write anything, but obviously I have written and I am still writing, and still gonna write further too..
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I am being senseless I know, but really! This was something..eh else. Why didn't i read this earlier?
Okay confession. I wasn't really "following" this story, ehm, *hides my face*
But, hey hey, I was still updated about it alright? I know Aahil has been "back from the dead" and who was actually a Vampire when he was "dead". And due to some "power he had" he came back so that he could "save her"? and all those books she read and now there's something like "write your own ending"...So she is the writer here right?
And I know where its been going too. I knew it. And no I din't read the previous chapters but See? I still know okay! 😆😆
Anyways. This part. What you say "10B" I thought it was better than 50 shades. Seriously! No kidding! This is real deal, and I am NOT saying just so that you will forgive me...ehh well you can forgive me too though...😳😆 I am ranting right? I do this when I am either excited or...excited 😉🤣
But. Damn you girl! So you SO knew when you PMed me that I would LOVE this one. You know me very well 😆 And this everything I could have asked for "coming together of a Vampire and a human" 😆
The blindfold has really something so sexy about it, legit. I could have sworn I almost felt how SHE was feeling. Really!
And the way you write? You know something? I have never told you this I guess. I have NEVER wrote anything before these two happened. Never! I mean, like on some characters. Forget about writing this "hot and sensual stuff".
But, here is the real deal. Your writing has actually "motivated" me to write such stuff. You have to believe this okay? Your way of writing such stuff has really inspired me to write such stuff. That IS true. I have always felt, I don't know if I have ever told enough but, your way of writing sexy stuff is...I don't even know.
I'll still try. - if you can see passion on visual medium, you can feel the same passion, and i.e SAME by your writing. You know, that underlying passion your writing behold, is too difficult to explain, really! Because what you feel which is too profound is really hard to explain, atleast I feel its hard to explain what you go through while reading YOU.
So, I bow down to Your Highness, for almost delivering a marvel at this.
Okay now. Sorry its still not about your update, rather it was all my ranting till now. 😕😆
This whole thing has left me, well I don't know? Its NOT hot, it was sensual. You get me? It did leave me hot and bothered, but not the blood rushing kind, the sighing one. Are you getting the meaning behind it?😆
I hope you do, Because I think, I REALLY THINK, that was your second best write up. Yeah, not first. And I don't remember which was first. I guess that was "Homecoming" one. Do you realise the difference between both? I just did. And I want to marvel at the difference and varieties you bring in about in your THESE updates. Yes this is one more thing I love about reading you. You always bring differnces and there is just a subtle difference that makes one love scene different from another.
Okay so as you see I really have no words to tell how this was, I'll just quote some of the sexiest lines or moments that really just blew me away..
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Sanam reached a hand forward where she met a hard chest. She felt the expensive dress shirt across her fingers. She didn't know why she was paying so much attention to the buttons.
"You know what to do.." Aahil simply stated.
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"What do you feel?" She heard him ask, feeling his hot breath down on her lips. "Describe it for me."
She bit into her lip. "Something hard yet so soft."
Aahil placed his own hands over hers and guided them along his skin. So painfully slow. Feeling every bit of his well-trained abs, - she almost let out a satisfied moan from her lips. God, she really wanted to look.
Suddenly she felt the warmth of his touch leave her. Sanam extended both of her arms in order to reach him, but he was nowhere near.
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To his pleasant surprise, she had worn black underneath which settled very well to The Nawab. Lace' he thought smirking darkly. Not bad.. Not at bad at all, Jaan.'
Aahil ran her hand across her smooth back, as Sanam ached in response. She felt his hand on her, as he guided her forward before she was turned around, feeling the wall behind her. Not forced or abruptly but with gentle movements. Their hot breaths mingled. She knew he was teasing her openly. Testing her need of how much she craved him.
Aahil ran his thumb across her rosy colored lips. There was something so sensual about watching her expression and how she wrapped her lips around and kissed him tenderly.
Aahil studied every breath she took and how the fullness of her body raised every now and then.
"You're so beautiful, Sanam."
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His hands traveled to his pants, to unbuckle his leather belt. - All while her eyes were fixed on him. Sanam gently ached her back, but he wasn't really doing anything. He wasn't touching her, yet she still felt his soft touch on her skin.
Her husband was an art. Every gesture he did always shone through his dark colored eyes. - A hidden desire begging to be unleashed. Was it really there? Or was she begging herself?
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He raised both her arms where they came in contact with the headband of the bed. Clutching into the steel, like her life depended on it. Raising her slight curious eyes into his, Aahil caressed her cheek and smirked lightly.
"Keep your hands there."
What he did next was too much for her body to handle. Feeling his fingers touch her most delicate part was breathtaking. He gently touched her through the lace she wore and draw a silent moan.
Pleasing his wife was his main purpose. And watching her squirm in delight was only the beginning. "Tell me what you crave.."
"More... Touch me.." She shuddered in pure joy.
She almost felt her eyes roll back by the intense pleasure she was receiving. Aching her back while clutching into the white sheets, a moan escaped her parted lips. "Aahil.."
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Your touch.. Is toxic. It's making me weak." She breathed. Aahil went on to slip her straps down her shoulders to place a kiss on her neck.
"And what is yours making me?" He whispered.
"I don't know, Jaan, you tell me?"
"It's making me restless.." Aahil whispered with his hot breath tickling down her ear.
There was something so passionate about the positions they were in. Letting them grasp the comfort and love deep into their souls.
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Feeling him run a hand through her silky brown hair, she closed her eyes and enjoyed his electrifying touch. Seeing the kind of effect he had on her, was almost too much for Aahil. But still he held it in him and carefully observed her, making sure she didn't feel too conscious. - Because to him, Sanam was the most beautiful woman he had laid eyes upon.
How her lips had formed in a o-shape when the intense pleasure flowed through her body. How her hands clutched into the sheets. How her eyes shone brightly in the darkened room. How her smile was shy yet adventurous. It was a beautiful sight. - The most beautiful sight he had ever seen.
Aahil rolled them over as he hovered across her gentle body and whispered. "Mine."
Sanam smiled upon his words and closed her eyes. "Mine too.."
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Aahil watched at the corner of his eye, how his wife shut her eyes in pure desire. "Let it out, Sanam." He murmured against her skin. "Let me hear your voice echo these halls, Jaan."
"Aahil.." Sanam grabbed tightly into his broad shoulders, moving ever so slightly where his hot breath still tickling down her neck.
A love so intense and passionate. He leaned closer into her as day would meet night and ever so slowly, they began to create a moment to capture and cherish forever.
Okay, as you can see I have quote almost WHOLE of their session. But can't help, really!
And ofcourse that teasing in the morning too! 😆
I guess this would be my longest comment ever on an update. But you see, I also had to compensate 😆
Girl, this was simply breathtaking! ❤️☺️
Edited by Junoon-e-SaHil - 9 years ago
