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nilusoni

@nilusoni

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Posted: 9 years ago

#161

Superb part

Romance is hot

Thanks for pm

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darkice7_12

@darkice7_12

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#162

Beautiful update, Mahwash! 👍🏼

Loved the beautiful banners. ❤️

Loved the interactions between Sanam and Aahil.

The angsty one, where she is trying so hard to hold onto her sanity. Where he is hurt by the fact that she won't believe in him and them.

And the passionate one, where we have a little of the naughty, a little of the love and a little of the teasing when he calls her out on blushing after they thoroughly love each other. Great job on that scene. 😳

I love how you're weaving in their past memories along with the present. I want to know that Sanam/Aahil too. They were so innocent. So in love. So happy! 😭

But I like this new, hurting SaHil as well, as they find their way back to each other and we uncover the mystery that is Aahil.

Update soon!

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NanduVijay

@NanduVijay

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#163

Thank you for the pm and a big hug for the long update.
Part 2:
It was very emotional particularly, the encounter between Sansm and Aahil. Sanam's disbelief and Aahil's pain due to that are heart breaking. Felt bad for both of them. Has Aahil become a vampire post accident and what is cooking up in the Vampire world? Looks like a lot of drama is waiting for us.
Part 2:
It is hot hot hot. Loved it. Sure Sanam will accept her Aahil whatever he may be.
Continue soon.

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For me to know and you to guess :)

@-Awaari-

Voyager

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Posted: 9 years ago

#164

The Update was as beautiful as the song

As passionate as the soothing notes..

and deeper is the powerful faith Sanam holds..despite she having lost it!

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Kanwal4salman

@Kanwal4salman

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#165

Amazingly written mahwash..
Loved it continue soon

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flora212

@flora212

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#166

OMG! that was one of the awsome chapters of the story. Really Brilliant! I loved the last part the most...Hawwwt! Cant wait for next part😉 Besides i have read the previous update too just didnt comment😆 anyways i am kind of busy these days so not able to login oftenly but i do read your updates😉 will try to comment whenever i will get time. I am just in love with this story😳 update soon.

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sahil333

@sahil333

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#167

First off...Awesome banners 👏.

Man, you surely are playing tricks with our minds also...

Somehow you story reminds me of the show "Once Upon a Time"? The fairy tale story legends blending with the present life in Storybrook. I don't watch it, just saw a couple of epi's here and there.

Here you are telling the story of SaHil in the vampire world, Sanam and Aahil in the past and also in the present time.

I love how he addressed her for the first time by her name. That was so romantic...

(Aahil got a hold of her arms and held her in place as his eyes flashed. "I kept watch over you. I made sure you were safe all along! You hear me, I made sure nothing happened to you!"

"You did what!?" Hamza demanded watching his cousin sit with slumped shoulders. "The power you have is very rare, Ibrahim. You were told only to use it when it really mattered. You need to remember whatever decision you've taken there will be consequences too.")

So now I want to know what special powers Aahil has that he can keep her safe. The powers that only he has !!! That is a huge thing and that comes also with great responsibilities right? And he has to use it carefully and I'm now I'm afraid of the consequences for his actions.

"I had to use it." Aahil said feeling the light breeze caress his hard skin. "I do not care about any consequence. Come what may, I'll embrace it as it was another part to conquer my destiny."
Just like the white Lighter in "Charm" where he lost his powers. Will Aahil lost his powers too or will his great leadership help him through it?

Hamza is such a good friend for Aahil. He stands by his side every step of the way. What will Aahil do with that Zain...

"I miss you Aahil. I miss you so much." Sanam closed her eyes as a heavy sleep overtook her tired mind.

Wonderful FB's of Sanam...Is Aahil dead?😕

Love the hot and passionate romance of SaHil ☺️

Awesome update!

Thx for the pm!