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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: rabiamunawar

Awesome

Zoya is very strong & she is childhood friend of asad and ayaan
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Zoya was acting like Tanveer pretending to be calm n polite😆

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And even Razia's too. Razia single-handedly tied 2 girls of 22 while being 70+. Then placing a girl in a water tank 4m where another girl had to take ladder to pull her out😆.



hehe right even tanveer tied ahil so tightly who could have just given a jerk and tanvver would have died😆
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Phenomenal, splendid, remarkable and fantastic update


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fantastic update!

Loved it!

Waiting for Asad to finally know that Zoya is Anaya!


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hehe right even tanveer tied ahil so tightly who could have just given a jerk and tanvver would have died😆


After Tanveer entered, Asad lost his brain n Zoya lost her self-defense skills😆.
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A/N: Heeba(Amrapalli Gupta) is the elder daughter of GaZia as mentioned in the show. Razia is a positive character while Heeba is a bitch. In this story, Haseena's native place is in Delhi not Allahabad like the show Tanveer(Nisha Napal) will be positive chaaracter and girlfriend of Rohan(Abhishek Mallik). Rohan and Tanveer were among the friends Asad ended his friendship with. Tanveer is a modern and positive character. Abhishek and Nisha played a negative married couple in other show but they are positive here😊.


Part 4

Next morning, all were sitting for breakfast. Zoya was wearing a black floral dress dat went till her thighs. 2day, Zoya was eating normally not pretending to be childish n messy. Asad was again shocked seeing her eating normally like yesterday wen he gave her coffee n pizza. Even on d 1st night too, she ate normally n 4m d next day she started being messy. He decided to apologize to his mother, sister n Zoya for all his mistakes.

"Ammi, Tamatar, Zoya, I am sorry," apologized Asad.

"Sorry for wat, Asad?" asked Dilshad.

"I am sorry for suffocating u all wid my regressive n orthodox thinking. I did not realized how I was suffocating n causing so much pain to all of u. I disappointed ur upbringing n did not realized dat I was ruining my as well as other people's life. I had become like dis cuz of some MCP boys in college who I became friends wid. Cuz of them, I broke my friendship wid other friends who were teln me to leave them for my own good," said Asad.

"Its not just their fault but ur fault too, Asad. U were 18 not a little kid to come into someone's influence so easily," said Zoya coating her taunts wid politeness.

"I know, Zoya. It was my fault more than theirs. U r right dat I was not a little kid. But I was a fool dat I got influenced by them so easily," said Asad guiltily, "Tamatar, I am sorry for not caring n respecting ur likes n wishes. U can wear wat u want, Najma. U can take part in d fashion show. I will never interfere in anyone's matter than its needed. I am sorry for keeping 7pm deadline. I don't know why I became like dis n hurt everyone around me. Ammi, I am sorry for not listening to u weneva u told me to change myself like before."

"For ur kind information, Najma has already tuk part in fashion show widout teln anyone except me. Now, u will get angry on Najma as well as me," said Zoya staring at him.

Asad was shocked. He felt ashamed of not caring wat his sister wants.

"I am sorry, Najma. Cuz of my nature, u had to participate in d fashion show widout teln anyone. But now, I will always support u in wat u want to do," said Asad.

"Thanks bhaijaan, I am so happy dat u realized ur mistakes," said Najma wid tears.

"Don't cry, Najma," said Asad wiping her tears, "I will never repeat my mistakes."

"I hope u mean wat u say, Asad," said Dilshad sternly not convinced by him.

"I swear dat I will never repeat my mistakes," promised Asad.

"I am glad u realized ur mistakes, Asad," said Dilshad wid a smile.

"Zoya, I am very sorry for all my bad behaviours 2wards u," apologized Asad.

"Asad, I don't know if I will ever befriend u cuz I can't lose my self-respect. I hate men who don't respect girls. Its good dat u have promised never to repeat ur mistakes. But make sure u never get influenced again in dis way," said Zoya firmly.

"I did a big mistake n I will not repeat it. I will not get influenced again," said Asad.

"I wish u mean wat u say," said Zoya in a strong voice.

Asad did not know wat to say.

After breakfast, Dilshad got ready to go to her NGO which is for troubled women. After her divorced, she did various jobs like taking tuitions, stitching clothes n working at a NGO. She raised Asad n Najma single-handedly. Later, she opened her own NGO. Najma got ready for her college. All went in d hall after breakfast.

Scene shifts to d house where Ayaan lives which is Siddiqui Mansion(SM). In a room, a man was shouting on his wife. D man was Gaffur Ahmed Siddiqui of S&K Constructions dat is Siddiqui & Khan Constructions. He was d elder brother of Shirin who is Rashid's 2nd wife. His wife's name is Razia. Razia is a nice, caring n kid-hearted woman. They have 2 daughters- Heeba n Humeira. Heeba is 22 while Humeira is 20. Heeba is a rich spoilt brat. She dresses up in a conservative way in salwar-suit wid her head covered wid her dupatta. He is bitchy wid Ayaan, Nikhat, Nuzhat n even her own younger sister Humeira but in front of elders she pretends to be nice n polite. Humeira on d other hand is sweet n caring. She also wears traditional clothes but does not cover her head like Heeba. She hates her older sister cuz she gets her, Ayaan, Nikhat n Nuzhat into trouble a lot of times wid her father, phupha n phuphi for d mistakes she do. They easily believe her due to her innocent acts. 2day only, Humeira shouted at Heeba for insulting her. Wen Gaffur entered Humeira's room, Heeba started pretending to be hurt n began crying. Gaffur got angry n started shouting at her n Razia. All dis while, Heeba was enjoying wid a smirk on her face.

"U never teach dis girl some manners on how to talk to her elder sister," shouted Gaffur.

"Abbu, baaji insulted me," said Humeira.

"Stop lying, Humeira," shouted Gaffur, "Cuz of u, Heeba is very hurt & u r accusing her."

"Abbu, let it be. It was my fault," said Heeba pretending to be polite.

"Learn sumthn 4m her. She is takn d blame of ur mistake," said Gaffur angrily.

Humeira got angry.

"Abbu, she is pretending. He is a lier," said Humeira raising her voice.

Gaffur got enraged n slapped her hard across d face.

"Stop accusing ur elder sister," said Gaffur angrily.

Razia is hurt while Heeba smirks.

Scene to KV. Zoya gasps n keeps her hand on her cheek.

"I feel as if sumthn bad has happened as if someone has been slapped," said Zoya.

"Zoya, drink water. U will feel better," said Dilshad in a comforting voice.

Asad n Najma too got concerned.

"Thanks aunty," said Zoya wid a smile as she drank water.

"Wat has happened to u, Zoya?" asked Najma.

"I don't know. I felt someone's pain. I feel dis several times," said Zoya emotionally.

Asad lukd at Zoya. For d 1st time, he was seeing her being emotional.

After some time, Dilshad went to her NGO n Najma went to her college. Asad n Zoya went to their respective rooms.

Ayaan entered Asad's room thru his window.

"Hi bhai," said Ayaan wid a smile.

"Ayaan, did u told abt Haseena to ur family?" asked Asad.

"I told them but as usual abbu, ammi n mamu r not believing me. I hate them. Mumaani tried to support me but no one listens to her as usual," replied Ayaan.

"We can't let dis marriage happen," said Asad.

"Bhai, how is dat lady don Zoya?" asked Ayaan.

"She may be in her room," replied Asad.

"Lets go to d kitchen n have sumthn," said Ayaan.

"Yaa," said Asad.

Wen they went to d kitchen, they were shocked to see Zoya near d bridge.

"Zoya, wat r u doing here?" asked Asad.

"I came to drink water. Don't worry, I did not came to put slow poison in ur food," replied Zoya wid a sinister smile.

Asad was shocked. Ayaan removed some biscuits n started eating wid Asad. Zoya turned to go but Asad stopped her.

"Zoya," called Asad.

Zoya turned around.

"Wat?" asked Zoya.

"Do u know sumthn abt Feroz?" asked Asad.

"Not sumthn but many things," replied Zoya confidently, "But I will not tell u."

"Why r u saying like dis?" asked Asad shockingly.

"Cuz I don't want to talk between ur home matters," replied Zoya staring at him.

Asad realized why she said dat. Several times, she tried to tell him to think before getn his sister married n also think wid whom she is getn married.

"Zoya, plz forget abt wat I said," said Asad.

"As if its easy," said Zoya in a strong tone, "Ayaan is d only one who tried to stand for Nikhat while others were either excited for ur sister's alliance or (staring at him in his eyes)busy being thinking dat they sud do some sacrifices for Nikhat's long life happiness. Being a topper in ur class d entire life n being a successful businessman u never use ur brain in right places. Can't u see how bad Imraan's family is? U chose to ignore too many signals. Haseena always taunts ur sister on ur skin colour. She made such a big fuss of dat price tag issue. She keeps asking for several things now n then. Atleast, Ayaan has tried a lot to stop all dis. But u made Ayaan believe dat these things r normal n its for Nikhat's happiness. U r clearly promoting dowry, Asad. Aunty is really disappointed wid u cuz of dis. But she hardly says anything to u thinking dat u will change. 2day, u promised to never repeat ur mistakes. I hope u do wat u promised. U better do qki agar duniya k saare ladke tere jaise ho gaye to duniya ki saari ladkiyan suicide kar legi."

AsYaan were shocked wat she said.

"Zoya, why u said like dat?" asked Asad hurtfully.

"I said d truth, Asad," said Zoya firmly, "Dat day in d mall, I saw wat u were saying to ur sisters dat u will meet d type of men according to wat u wear(d person who was watching d scene mentioned in Part 1 was Zoya only). I was really disgusted by u. U said as if men has license to misbehave wid girls wearing modern clothes. Wen those goons misbehaved wid Najma d 1st time, she was wearing salwar-suit not weatern clothes. Yaa, she wore skirt n top d 2nd time as it was d selection round of d fashion show. Muje kabhi kabhi lagta hai ki tuje Ayaan k ghar pe rehna chahiye aur Ayaan ko yaha rehna chahiye cuz u suit there only not wid a woman like aunty. In Saudi Arabia n other gulf countries, d rape cases r high. And in those countries, women only wear burqa not modern clothes. Asad, u really don't have worldly knowledge. Even 4-5 year old girls r raped n they definitely have not done anything to attract to men. Even 70-80 year old women r raped n they also don't attract men."

Asad was very ashamed of himself.

"I can't believe dat I can be so stupid," said Asad.

"U don't like working women ha. Ur mother too is working woman. Ur mother used to be a teacher in a college but ur great father stopped her 4m working. After turning adult, u also became like him. After all, u r his blood. But ur mother started working again & u can't say to her anything cuz she is ur mother," said Zoya widout any mercy.

AsYaan were wondering how she got to know of all these things.

"Zoya, I am sorry. I was really wrong," said Asad.

"Sirf muje sorry bolne se kya hoga, Asad? Tune to na jaane kitni ladkiyon se aise hi behave kiya hai be it ur ex-friends, relatives or even office employees. I am sure during interviews, u may be paying more attention to their clothes instead of their qualification. U may have even insulted them for being modern," said Zoya in a serious tone.

Asad was again ashamed as he knew she was saying truth. She may have heard wen he wud say those things n complain abt them to his mother.

"I know dat u r disgusted by me," said Asad.

"Not me but many girls will love to be disgusted by u," said Zoya rolling her eyes.

"I will never repeat my mistakes," said Asad.

"Subah se yahi sun rahi hu tujse. I hope u really mean wat u say," said Zoya wid attitude.

Asad did not know wat to say.

"I thought u as immature n childish but u r mature beyond limit. Now, I wonder how u own several dance academies n is a part of ur family business," said Asad.

"It was really hard to act like dat to hide my real self," said Zoya wid a smirk.

"U sud even start acting academy along wid dancing academy," said Ayaan.

"I wish I cud do dat but I am fine wid wat I am doing," said Zoya wid a smile.

"U r so angry dat u will not tell us abt Feroz," said Asad.

"Well, since I heard both of ur talks dat day near d mazhar, I came to know dat Imraan's family will come to see Nikhat, I got to know abt d guy Imraan who I hate 4m 11 years(Zoya had their talks on d stairs). Also, due to ur beating dat Feroz very badly my job became easy to kidnap him. So, I tell u both 2 things to help u since u both helped me twice indirectly. Itni bhi kameeni nahi hu main," said Zoya wid a smile.

AsYaaan were astonished as she said d last statement of Itni bhi kameeni nahi hu main.

"Wat u will tell us? And why u hate Imraan 4m 11 years?" asked Ayaan.

"I am not both of ur friends to tell abt my issues wid Imraan. But as I said I will tell u both 2 things. I helped u both in exposing Haseena so dat u both r distracted to her & I can take away Feroz by dat time. I had seen Haseena hiding there while I was hiding to kidnap Feroz. She was smiling seeing both of urs condition n her smile became wide wen Asad told in anger dat Ayaan is his brother. She played such a game on both of u. In dat ways, it was my 1st revenge against her by exposing her. I hate her too. D 1st thing I want to tell dat Feroz is Haseena's younger brother. D 2nd thing is dat Imraan is not 21 but 24 years old dat is of my n Asad's age. He is 6 months younger than me n 3 months younger than Asad. U both even did not bothered to do his background check-up," said Zoya.

AsYaan r shocked wid her info.

"Feroz is Haseena's younger brother n Imraan is 24. They always fooled us," said Ayaan.

"I think I have told u both enough. Now, its up to both of u wat to do next," said Zoya, "I am now going to rest. I have to go shopping wid Najma n aunty to buy clothes for Najma."

Zoya left d kitchen.

"Wat she was teln dat u told dat u will never repeat ur mistakes?" asked Ayaan.

Asad tells him abt d breakfast incident.

"Its good dat u decided to change, bhaijaan. I also hated ur attitude but did not said anything fearing dat u will break ur relation 4m me in anger," said Ayaan.

"Ayaan, I am sorry if I have hurt u ," apologized Asad.

"Its okay, bhai. Now, u r changing," said Ayaan wid a smile.

"Zoya even told dat she hates Imraan 4m 11 years. Last night, she told dat she had old enmity wid Feroz. She also told dat she hates Haseena. Dunno wat is her connection wid Qureshi family? She also blurted abt her step-father," said Asad.

"She is becoming mysterious day by day, bhaijaan," said Ayaan.

"Yaa," said Asad.

In d afternoon, Najma comes back 4m college. Zoya was watching TV in d hall. Asad also comes in d hall.

"Zoya, there is a bad news for u," said Najma.

"Wat bad news for me?" asked Zoya.

"D Prinicipal has banned u 4m college. If u r seen anywhere near d college, he will call d police again," replied Najma.

"What d hell is wrong wid him?" asked Zoya angrily, "He got me in jail just cuz his window broke. And now, he banned me 4m d college. Dis is too much now."

Zoya turned off d TV n stormed in her room while Najma n Asad lukd on shockingly.

"She is so angry, bhaijaan. Now, u understood na how hurt she felt wen she went to jail n on top of dat u said her awful things to hurt her," said Najma.

"I apologized to her too but she is not ready to forgive me," said Asad.

"Bhaijaan, Zoya wanted to see d fashion show but she can't come now," said Najma.

Scene shifts to Zoya's room. Zoya is talking on Skype wid Zain n Aaliya.

"Bhaiyu, he is too much. He banned me 4m d college. He is treating me like a criminal," said Zoya in a furious tone.

"Pizza Monster, plz calm down," said Zain calmly.

"How can I calm down?" asked Zoya, "He is such a jerk."

"Anan...," said Aaliya but Zoya stopped her.

"Zoya," said Zoya.

"Zoya, u ignore him na. He is an idiot," said Aaliya.

"I can't ignore him, bhabhi. He insulted me n got me in jail. Now, he has banned me n if I am seeing anywhere near d college, he will call d police again," replied Zoya.

"Right now, u sud think whether u cud do anything on dat otherwise u sud only think abt ur mission," said Aaliya.

"Aaliya bhabhi, u r right," said Zoya wid a smile.

"We will come before ur birthday which is on 24th January," said Zain wid a smile.

"Wat abt Raghav?" asked Zoya, "He is still in his 3rd year of graduation."

"He will take leave for few days n go back while I, Zain n Zara will stay," replied Aaliya.

"Dats so nice," said Zoya wid a smile.

"Well, we will talk later," said Zain.

"Okay," said Zoya.

She logged out of her Skype. She was unaware dat Asad was near her door n was watching her chatting wid her bhaiyu n bhabhi. Asad went to his room.

"Zoya is really very upset due to dat Principal," said Asad.

His mind then clicks to Zain's wife's name as Aaliya. He had heard dat Zain married his cousin n childhood friend. He came to know abt her name just now. He got lost in thoughts.

"Even Ananya's cousin brother's name was Zain n he had a cousin named Aaliya," said Asad.

He then remembered Aaliya's words abt Zoya's birthday.

"Even Ananya was born on 24th January n even she wud be 24 running," said Asad.

"Well, it might be coincidence but still I need to find more abt Zoya," said Asad.

Dilshad, Najma n Zoya went to d shopping in d evening. Asad called Ayaan home.

"Ayaan, I want to find more abt Zoya," said Asad.

"Why?" asked Ayaan.

H e tells her abt her chat wid ZaYa n his doubts abt her.

"So, u have doubt dat she is Ananya. Ananya was an entirely Hindu girl wid both Hindu parents n she is Zoya Farooqui wid an entirely Muslim name," said Ayaan.

"Still, I need to know more abt her," said Asad.

"Well, lets see her room," said Ayaan.

"Ayaan, its wrong. If she finds out then she will not leave us," said Asad.

"Bhai, she is out for shopping now. Don't worry, we will keep everything as it is," said Ayaan.

"Fine," said Asad.

They went to Zoya's room.

"Bhai, u told dat her room is always a mess but it luks alright," said Ayaan.

"4m yesterday, her room is normal. She may be acting wid dis too," said Asad.

They lukd around her room. Ayaan's eyes went to d book's rack.

"There r several comics here. Let me see her collection," said Ayaan.

He tuk some books. Asad was shocked cuz wen Ayaan tuk some comic books to see, he saw saw dat only 1 or 2 books were in front in each row while other books behind d comics were novels n several books on business, dance, food recipes n other things.

"She made us believe dat she only reads comics but she has a collection of several books," said Asad shockingly.

"Bhai, she is really mysterious as I said," said Ayaan, "Lets see her cupboard."

They went to d cupboard but found it locked wid number password.

"She even set number password for her cupboard," said Ayaan.

They then went to her dressing table n checked d drawers.

"Yaha to sirf make-up aur khaane ka samaan hai. Ek chips packet main le leta," said Ayaan.

"Agar Zoya ne dekha ki ek chips packet gaayab hai to use doubt ho jaayega ki koi uske room me aaya tha," said Asad.

Wen Asad opened d bottom drawer n found a wooden chest-like box. AAK in bold letters were written on d box.

"Why she wrote AAK?" asked Asad, "Also AAK is name of her dance academy."

He n Ayaan were tempted to open it but it also had a number lock.

"Yaha bhi number lock," said Ayaan.

They then then searched a little more around her room but did not found anything. They arranged all d things as it was n left her room.

"We did not got any clue," said Asad.

"Thanks to her number locks," said Ayaan.

At night, Zoya was talking to Raghav in d garden.

"I want my gift on my birthday," said Zoya.

"Yaa sure di," said Raghav.

"Love u bro," said Zoya happily n then said annoyingly, "Tere last year hai fir bhi tu college bunk karke movie dekhne jaata hai. Tu apni harkaton se eagle nahi aayega."

Raghav laughed n said, "Baaz."

"Yaa, I know. Bachpan se hi main baaz word bhulkar eagle bol deti hu," said Zoya.

Asad who was came in d garden just now was shocked at Zoya's statement. He only heard 4m Love u bro. He did not knew dat Zoya had more cousin Raghav. Zoya n Raghav talked for some more time. Zoya then went to her room while Asad hid. Asad recalls an old incident.

-----Flashback-----

Asad n Ananya were in their class. They were 11 dat is in 6th grade. English lecture was going on. Asad was sitting behind Ananya's bench. Ananya was sitting wid a girl while Asad was sitting wid a boy. Asad started patting Ananya's back lightly. Ananya turned around.

"Ananya," whispered Asad.

"Asad, lecture chaalu hai," said Ananya n turned front but dfemale teacher saw them.

"Luks like u both r interested in talking. U both can go out n talk as much as u both want," said d teacher sternly.

Asad n Ananya went n stood out of d class.

"Tu apni harkaton se eagle nahi aayega. Teri vajah se tu kitni baahar class k baahar gaya hai aur muje bhi saath lekar nikalta," said Ananya annoyingly.

"Baaz," said Asad wid a laugh.

"Muje pata hai, Ashu. Tu bhale hi humesha top karta hai par maths aur hindu me humesha main his highest rehti hu aur main bhi Top 5 student hu," said Ananya.

They never said Anu n Ashu to each other in school as it will be weird.

"Anu, muje tujse ye bataana tha ki humaare science project me hum dono partners rahenge. Tanveer ne kaha ki iss baar main uski jagah main tera partner rahu aur vo Rohan k saath partner rahegi," said Asad.

"Ashu, ye tu muje baad me bata sakta than a. Main kaha bhaagi jaa rahi thi," said Ananya.

"Sorry Anu," said Asad wid a smile.

"Its okay," said Ananya wid a smile.

-----Flashback Ends-----

Asad smiled at d memory. He went back to his room thinking he will find more abt Zoya.

Precap:

#Humeira has also taken part in fashion show which only Ayaan, Nikhat n Nuzhat knows. She is practicing d catwalk in her room wid Ayaan, Nikhat n Nuzhat sitting on d bed. She stops walking wen Heeba enters her room. If Heeba comes to know dat she has taken part in a fashion show then she wud take dis opportunity complain to their father.

#Zoya n burqa Ayaan meets again wen they wear to enter college.

#It has been a week since dat night wen Zoya showed her grey side. Asad tried several times to befriend Zoya but she rejected his friendship rudely every time.


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res for part 4 😆
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liked every bit of it
heeba is really a bitch and manipulating
so i think humaira and zoya are sisters and gaffur is zoya step father hmm?
So finally Asad realized his mistake and apologised
ayaan is soo sweet
i hate gafur how can he slap humi?😡
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Nice update
Asad apilogised for his behaviour to his mother, sister & Zoya. Zoya/ananya gave clues to asad & ayaan regarding imran. Asad was doubtful abt Zoya as Ananya. He wanted to find out abt her. Waiting for next update soon. Thanks for pm

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