#1 Asya ff-unique love part 1-17 *thread links in the index* @pg 1 - Page 6

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Posted: 10 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: shailu123

When r u going to update? Update soon



m sorry shailu but i have my exams going on so haven't got that much time to write
besides i have already made my mind i'll write on last day of my exam
so as soon as that's over i'll surprise u with a long update😉

thanks so much 4 keeping track and it seems some1's eager hmm?
okay i promise to update next week..😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: suearmaniac



m sorry shailu but i have my exams going on so haven't got that much time to write
besides i have already made my mind i'll write on last day of my exam
so as soon as that's over i'll surprise u with a long update😉

thanks so much 4 keeping track and it seems some1's eager hmm?
okay i promise to update next week..😃

ok update when u r exams r over hope u r doing well
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: shailu123

ok update when u r exams r over hope u r doing well


yeah pretty well!!!!
just 2 more papers then m free frm 18😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: -ABI-

Just read all parts on one go:
Must say: "a Interesting Story
looking forward to it
Continiue Soon


thanks so much
will continue soon😛
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hello people!!!!!!
i know you all've been waiting a long enough so lets give that waiting a halt.here's the nxt part.



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😛part-6😛

Asad reached home and was just heading towards the door when zoya's car screeched on the road.that was enough to make an already angry asad more furious.'stupid girl!can't she drive normal?oh i forgot she's abnormal that's why.'
but the next moment he was more like dumbfounded.he just stood there agape.
zoya was much of a tired today and all she wanted was a good sleep.yesterday she was too busy with the meeting preparation and also all that crying has made her a raw brinjal😆.she came out of the car not bothering to park it in the garadge.
Asad was mesmerized by her beauty.zoya in her office formals with those creamy legs adorned with the elegant heels was walking towards him.
"good evening Mr. Khan"
Asad came out of his reverie and just nodded to her.he was surprised at himself.was he checking her out?thank god she didn't paid heed to that fact.
he was yet again distracted by a squirrel [guys imagine that to be the same as in the kitkat add]
she chirped"welcome visitor to zoya "
asad just rolled his eyes.he didn't notice it the other day.'haan agar ese hi Ms new york ko checkout karte reh gaya to aas pass ka dhyan kese rakhoonga?'
zoya walked inside to the hall and slumped on the sofa.
asad followed and now begins the irritation!he heard the parrot chant 'zoya baby' and attended the call.
"asad are u home beta."
"ji ammi,lekin tamatar aur aap kaha he?"
"beta hum eric ke saath dinner ke liye bahar gaye he.zoya aur tum khana kha lena.i've set the table."
asad's anger built in."ammi aap aur tamatar ese bina bataye kisi bhi anjaane ladke ke saath kese bahar jaa sakte he"
dishaad shook her head on the other side and said sternly"asad eric zoya ka dost he aur nzma ka bhi.he's family.aur me tumhari ammi hu.kya me tumhari behan ko leke bahar bhi ni ja sakti?me aakar baat karungi.khuda hafiz.
asad stood there."its unbeleivable.eric aur family?"
\he was admanant to put both words togather in the same sentence even.anjaan shahr anjaan logon ke bich his family was not secure and how could he sit there?he glanced towards zoya whose back was facing him.and the lion in him roared watching her calmly sitting over there carefree."Ms Farooqi, didn't i warned u ki eric ko nzma se dur rakhiye?aap samajhti kya he apne aap ko haan?pehle aaj savere ammi ko pareshan kar diya bina bataye ja kar.then i had to go in that yellow coloured teen car for my office.fir vo call jisper aapne password laga rakha tha.i was late only coz of u.ye aapka ghar he ya zoo?aur mera naam password kyu rakha?why?aur vo eric,"he flared his nostrils wide,his anger growing,his voice louder"aapko andaza bhi he usne kya kiya?mujhse bina pooche vo unhe dinner ke liye legaya?m sure ye bhi aapka hi reckless idea hoga.kal bhi aapne ..."
he took a long breath.if he knew her her reply.more like retort wud have come by then.but y was she quite?
he came forward only to find her sleeping?here he was practically roaring at her and she dozed off?he stumped his foot in anger,his veins visible on his forehead and headed towards his room muttering"incredibly foolish".

eric parked the car and shook his head knowingly.
"hey girlfriend and tamatar y don't u go inside and i'll join u after parking the cars in the garadge?"he winked at them.the both ladies got off and headed towards the door only to meet by the squirrel.
dilshaad smiled a sly smile.the fact that asad was the password for everything was blissful to her.earlier she thought that zoya did that in order to make them comfortable,so that they feel they were living in their own house more like asad's house.but she had a feeling that zoya had this password from a long while.
eric joined them after parking the 3 cars of the zestate.yes zestate is the name of zoya's house.zoya was too careless to park the car at their right place whenever she was dead tired.also asad's car too came from the special treat she and eric has put in it for asad.they all walked in to find zoya sleeping peacefully on the couch.dilshaad caressed her cheeks lovingly.she gve a peck on her forehead and said"boyfriend it seems you've got some work"
eric dutifully picked zoya in his arms and headed to her room.asad came out and saw zoya in eric's arms.although he had cooled down but now there was no chance his veins wudn't come bursting out.
"ammi ye kya behudgi he?Ms Farooqi jo bhi karti ho yaha par unhe ye to khyal hona tha ki ab vo is ghar me akeli ni reh ri he?"
"beta tum jesa soch rahe ho vesa ni he."
"haan ammi mene jesa socha tha vesa ni he"he said in sarcast.
"bhaijaan ammi ne hi eric se kaha tha zoya ko bed par sulane ke liye...i mean uske bed par...um vo uske room me mtlb vo saath saath ni..."
"bas tamatar tum apne kare me jao.gud night"
nzma looked uncertainly at her mother who was smirking?but she nodded when dilshaad blinked at her.nzma wished them gud night and went to her room.
"ammi mujhe ye ladka theek ni lagta.itni raat gaye ise yaha ni hona chaiye.aap keh dijiyega .asad walked to his room as soon as eric came out of zoya's room.
'ooh so Mr lion is angry?cool.'he smirked to himself.
"hey girlfriend.so i guess i will have to leave right away lest your son's gonna rip my throat off."he joked.
dilshaad chuckled heartily and kissed a short peck on his forehead."gud night".

dilshaad walked in asad's room with a plate of food sighing at her son who was typing angrily on his laptop."asad khana kha lo"
"ni ammi mujhe bhook ni he"
"asad khane par gussa kyu nikal rhe ho?idhar aao"
asad kept his laptop away and came to his mother who was smiling at him.he returned a slight smile.dilshaad fed him asking his day and was surprised that he was late.after eating he kept his head in her lap.she caressed him affectionately.
"asad ek baat poochu?"
"ji ammi?"
"tumne zoya se nikaah ke baare me kya socha?"
asad sighed looking away."ammi i considered her but after meeting her i don't think so.vo badal gai he ammi.besharmi ki bhi had hoti he.unki lifestyle aur mujhme bohat fark he"
'asad lekin ye zaroori to ni he na ki hume hamesha humare jese log mile?you've always kept distance from the ones with different thinking.doosro ki soch ki respect karna seekho beta.even opposites attract you knw that right?"
"hmm"asad's short answer puzzled her.'mera beta.tum to already uske liye care karne lage ho.ni to kyo tumhe fark padta ki vo kese rehti he kya karti he?'
"to kya tum nikaah karoge"
"ammi meri abhi to nai job lagi he aur mujhe thoda waqt chaiye"
dilshaad nodded in understanding."theek hai"
he sat free and said"ammi me soch raha tha ki meri advance aane ke baad hum ek apartment lelen to?"
dilshaad was taken by surprise."asad par esa kyo keh rahe ho beta?"
"ammi hum yaha achanak Ms Farooqi ke saath rehne lage.i think se's not comfortable.unki freedom seems to be taken away"he said looking away.
"asad."dilshaad said a little angry"zoya meri beti he .aur ye ghar me chod kar kahi ni ja rahi hu aur na hi tum ya nzma.wAH asad lagta he tumhara guroor itna bada he ki tum yaha is chote ghar me ni reh pa rahe haan?"
"ammi ye ghar bada he isiliye to i was thinking of finding some decent and less luxurious house without the animals living here"he said sarcast drooling over.
dilshaad cudn't take it any longer"asad me is ghar ki badi hu aur mujhe faisle lene ka poora haq he.when i say that i meant..."
she was distracted by a small sob near the window which didn't go unnoticed by asad.dilshaad finally glared at her son and said before going to zoya"asad tumhe me 1 mahina de rahi hu.apne aur zoya ke beech ke differences sort karo aur use samajhne ki koshish karo.u better understand"
asad looked at the now closed door and sighed shutting his eyes.

zoya woke up and was surprised to find herself in her bed.did Mr.Khan?no he cudn't.it must have been eric who put her to bed.didn't he always?whenever she sleeps in study or didn't care to park the cars he always took care of everything.he even put her to bed.then why she was hoping it to be asad?she sighed in exhaustion.she freshened up and changed to something comfortable for the night.

feeling hungry she walked towards kitchen making less noise keeping in mind that she no longer lived alone and thus giving away her messy being.she saw from asad's window him lying in his mother's lap and an involuntary smile broke on her lips.she was taking that sight when asad sat up and she heard him.her eyes pricked with tears on hearing what he plan to do.she ran to her room and cried.its been only 2 days she's got her family and all he is gonna do is snatch them away?no this is certainly not happening.she was scared to be left alone.though he was only talking about living away but how cud they?didn't she is a family.don't they think she was worthy of being any help to them?she felt rejected that is she too bad that they can't stay with her.she felt a comforting hand on her shoulder and immidiately knew whose it was.she turned around and burried her face in dilshaad's waist sobbing."phupi...phupi please aap sab mujhe chod kar kahi aur rehne mat jaiye...please.
dilshaad comforted her and caressed her back taking her into a hug.
"zoya shh... baccha ni hum kahi ni ja rahe beta.dekho me yahi hu na hmm?"
after sometime she calmed down and parted "phupi vo Mr. Khan ne jo kaha vo.."
"are tumhare Mr Khan ki ammi hu me.mene kaha na meri zoya ko chodkar hum kahi ni jayenge.aur asad ki baaton par tumhe dhyan dene ki zaroorat ni he fir tumhe to pat he na vo to he hi akdu"she said raising zoya's chin with her finger.zoya smiled slightly and hugged her again."apko ni pata phupi uun akdu ahmed khan ki baaton ne mujhe kitna dara diya tha...main .."
dilshaad sensed zoya again crying and cut her off"zoya don't worry me asad se kahungi ki meri beti se kaan pakad kar maafi mange"
zoya felt the lump in her throat and said"aapko pata he phupi jab bhi me aapko dekhti hu mujhe meri ammi yad aati he."
dilshaad smiled at the memory of zoya's innocent face when she was infant and zainub cuddled her in her arms.she patted her back and said"ab chalo kahana kha lo beta.u must be hungry?ya sarri bhook rone se hi mita li?"
zoya smiled at her and nodded.on their way to kitchen zoya joked"waise phupi imagine Mr.Khan bending on his knees and his hands holding ears saying sorry"
they both giggled.dilshaad fed zoya in the same way she fed asad.zoya felt loved and teared up.she hugged her phupi and kissed her gud night on her cheeks.

this was witnessed by asad.he smiled on watching his ammi laugh carefree and her love for zoya.'ammi theek keh rahi thi agar mai Ms Farooqi ko thoda waqt du to shayad ...maybe...'
but he cudn't complete the sentence.this was certain that for him love was crap.but lately he had been affected by zoya.he cudn't lie to himself.'lets give it a try but allah mujhe raasta dikhaiye.mai unhe mohabat ni kar paunga par agar meri ammi aur tamatar zoya ke saath khush rahe to unki khushi me meri khushi he'
he breathed and was about to go in his room when he heard her behind him.
"m sorry Mr. Khan."
he turned around and looking in her honest eyes instantly felt guilty.her eyes were puffy from crying but she looked better frm eating than she'd looked when she came home.
"m sorry kal raat ke liye bhi.aainda please aap ghar chod kar jane ki baat mat kijiyega"
asad pursed his lips "its ok Ms Farooqi,m sorry too for not behaving properly"
she just nodded and failed to hold back her tears again she turned around and whispered crackingly"gud night" without waiting for any reply she rushed to her room and shut the door.for her it was another night to cry herself to sleep.
asad kept twitching in bed but in vain.he just cudn't sleep.from last 1 hr he was mulling over her.how she forgot and forgave so easily?her eyes were so deep that he cud just drown in the depths tearing the last layer if that was possible.finally sleep took over him and he dreamt of the same eyes.

days passed.life was wonderful for nzma.she was enjoying her new colledge.eric and her friendship grew over a period.of course asad didn't like that.but he can't keep 24 hr track on his babysister can he?
its more like he had to keep an eye on dilshaad too.coz though jokingly but she involved herself with eric playing his girlfriend?like seriously?asad was good at his work and that impressed his boss.zoya continued to irritate asad by her non stop banter at breakfast.but she always came late at home about which asad wondered but then let it go.zoya's work was sooo gud.her sleep began getting better.she no more cried but slept peacefully.ye not to forget her passwords were still irritating for asad.

asad came out ready for the office when a lion roared.he glanced everywhere to find the source but cudn't find it.
"Mr. Khan c'mon have a look at your new car."
asad turned around and find an astonishing car.it was a sedan in black and he cudn't help but smile.now he was sure that lion must have been from here.
"i must say Ms. Farooqi you do have a nice taste for cars"
"i do for lot of things mr. khan"she winked at him smiling secretly.
asad just rolled his eyes and checked out his car.
"ok so wats the password?"
"you know"
"yeah but its not my name surely?see incorrect"
zoya bit her lips nervously and said"um.. vo password 'jahapanah' he"
"wat?jahapanah?seriously Ms.farooqi aap ye titles lati kaha se he ?"
"aur ni to kya Mr. Khan.aap jis tarah se breakfast table par behave karte he usse to ese hi lagta he ki aap jahapanah hi he.always giving orders ni to "she inacted animatedly"deewar me chunva diye jaoge"
asad looked at her slightly amused and rolled his eyes"use table manners kehte he jo m sure aap me ni he"
"haw!!!how mean.thik he agar mujhme ni he ni to me is ghar ki raani sahiba se kam ni lagti"she amusedly chuckled over her joke.
"hmm to aap jungle ka raja bhi le hi ayi"
"haan aapke so called given title jutify kese hota agar zoo me sher na ho to?"she joked.
he shook his head and got in.
she smiled to finally have a normal talk with him.
"Ms. Farooqi itna khush hone ki koi zaroorat ni he.i'll find a way to break thru your passwords and change it soon"he smirked.
"don't worry Mr.Khan aap chahe pure new york me kya puri duniya me bhi khoje na tab bhi aap password change ni kar payenge"she challenged.
"some1' being modest Ms. farooqi.enjoy till i burst ur bubble"
"oh we'll see"
he put on his glares and drove off.she was left dreaming'man!!was he hanedsome!!!!!'
she went in to spend her holiday with phupi and nzma.



i know i said to post on 18 but m doing right away since i can't help it.please comment,ask questions and appreciate or critisize.
now i want comments!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😆
Edited by suearmaniac - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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it was too good..
loved it...
Loved bf-gf bond...
Zoya started to settle down..
❤️
password??

Edited by --Arpita-- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Absolutely Awesome👍🏼
l❤️ved it
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome update asad always make zoya cry poor zoya but they r also becoming friends eric is sweety he took good care of zoya anyway continue soon 😃
Edited by shailu123 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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A wonderful & very good part... 👏 👏
ASYA are so different here...but i like their Jungle induced banter... 😆
Continue soon...& Thanx for the P.M.. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: --Arpita--

it was too good..
loved it...
Loved bf-gf bond...
Zoya started to settle down..
❤️
password??


thanks so much arpita😛
wat abt password?

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