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Part 3

Flashback(Duke reading)

Asad and Ayaan were at one of their sites, Zoya came running towards Asad screaming and jumped on him and kissed him on the lips, Asad kissed her back, they were lost in the kiss and didn't care where they were and who was watching

Duke reading: after that night, Asad and Zoya spent every waking hour together, and soon they were inseparable, they spent time riding bikes with Ayaan and Humeria and doing other things

Asad and Zoya were walking on the sidewalk; Zoya was eating an ice-cream cone

Zoya: "Try it, its really good."

Zoya put the ice-cream up to his mouth and when he was about to lick, Zoya shoved the whole ice-cream cone on his face, Zoya was giggling, she pushed Asad to the wall and kissed the ice-cream off his face and kissed him on the lips, Asad kissed her back, she was giggling in between kissing because he was tickling her with his kisses.

Asad: "That's really nice."

Zoya: "Mm, Mmh, Mhm"

That night, Zoya came to Asad house and saw him sitting on the porch reading a poem with his father, While he was reading poems, Zoya was listening to him

Romace, who loves to nod and sing with drowsy head and folded wings among the green leaves as they shake Far down within some shadowy lake, to me a painted paroquet hath been-most familiar bird- Taught me my alphabet to say, to lisp my earliest word while in the wild wood I did lie, A child- with a most knowing eye

When he was done, Asad's dad saw Zoya

Rashid: "Hey, looks like we got a visitor."

Zoya walked up the stairs

Zoya: "Im sorry, I didn't mean to interrupt."

Rashid: "Well, don't apologize, come on up here, darling"

Asad stood next to his Dad and looked at Zoya

Rashid: "We could use a little something here beside the smell of lumber."

Zoya laughed

Asad: "Dad this Zoya farooqui"

Rashid held out his hand for a shake

Rashid: "Nice to meet you Zoya."

Zoya smiled at him and shook his hand

Zoya: "Nice to meet you Mr. Khan."

Rashid: "Mr.Khan? What am I old or something, you can call me Dost."

Zoya laughed

Rashid: "Here, come and have a seat."

Zoya: "Okay."

Rashid: So Zoya, Well, she is pretty, son"

Asad: "Yes"

Rashid: "She's a lot prettier than you let on"

Zoya sat down on sofa swing

Zoya: "Oh, is that right"

She looked towards Asad

Asad: "No it is not right, don't believe what he says."

Zoya had something in her hands

Rashid: "What is this you got."

Zoya: "Um, I just, I brought you something."

Rashid took the thing from her hands

Rashid: "Let me see, lets have a look."

He took it out from the bag and saw that it was painting

Rashid: "Did you do this."

Zoya: "Mm-hm"

Rashid: "Well, that's beautiful, look at that."

Rashid showed it to Asad and Zoya looked up at him and smiled

Rashid: "Well that is a damn picture right there."

Asad and Zoya laughed

Rashid: "Well, I know just where we can put that, thank you."

He put the painting beside him on the ledge of the porch

Zoya: "Oh, that was lovely poem, what was it."

Asad: "well"

He was about to tell her when Rashid spoke

Rashid: "Edgar, well see, when he was a little kid he used to stutter real bad."

Asad: "Dad stop."

Rahsid: "Sooo well, you did."

Zoya: "I didn't know that."

Asad: "God I stammered."

Rashid: "Stammered, stutter, what's the difference? Couldn't understand a damn thing he said, so I got him to read me poetry out loud."

Zoya laughed, Asad turned the other way embarrassed

Rashid: "It wasn't very pretty at first, but then his stutter went away."

Zoya: "well, it's a good idea, that poetry."

Rashid: "Yeah, I thought so."

Zoya: "huh?"

Asad: "Unbelievable, unbelievable"

Rashid: "I'm a Tennyson man myself, but he likes Edgar, for some reason, I don't know."

Zoya was still laughing she was finding this funny, Asad was just looking at her laughing

Rashid: "How would you like some breakfast? Would you like some breakfast?"

Zoya: "Breakfast?"

Rashid: "yeah"

Asad: "Dad, its 10:00 at night."

Rashid: "What that got to do with it."

Zoya laughed

Rashid: "You can have pancakes and cereal any damn time of night you want."

Rashid opened the door

Rashid: "Come lets go."

Zoya: "Sure."

The 3 of them were sitting down on the table and enjoying their night time breakfast, Rashid was serving more pancakes to Zoya, they were having the time of their life, laughing, eating and talking.

Duke: "it was and improbable romance, he was a country boy, she was from the city, she had the world at her feet, while he didn't have two dimes to rub together.

Zoya screamed she was wearing a baiting suit and ran into cold the water, while the seagulls flew away, Asad was looking at her from a distance

Zoya: "Asad, come on."

She held her hand out in the air and screamed when the wave hit her, Asad came running to her

Zoya: "Look at us"

Asad: "What are we doing."

Zoya: "do you think in another life, I could have been a bird?"

Asad: "What do you mean?"

Zoya: "Like reincarnation."

Asad: "I don't know."

Zoya: "I think I could."

Zoya was chirping like a bird and flapping her hands up and down and looking at Asad

Zoya: "Say im a bird."

Asad nodded his head in a no

Asad: "No"

Zoya was about to run him over

Asad: "don't do it."

Zoya: "Say, I am a bird."

She was about to make a run for him

Asad: "Stop it, stop it now."

Asad: "You are not."

Zoya ran up to him and jumped in his arm and wrapped her hands around his neck

Zoya: "Say it."

Asad: "You're a bird."

Asad smiled at her

Zoya: "Yeah"

Zoya kissed him on the lips

Zoya: "Now say you're a bird too"

Asad: "If you're a bird, I'm a bird."

Asad kissed her and they were lost in the kiss that they didn't even notice a wave pushed them to the sand and they fell, Asad on top of Zoya and they didn't stop kissing.

Here you go guys! Another update! Hope you guys liked it! I put the gifs in so, you can visualize better, Please press the like button and will be looking forward to your comments!

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Edited by -hotsauce- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome
Update👍🏼
Edited by -ABI- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

unress soon!😛
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The gifs are so awesome
I wish Ryan and Rachel were together again, ugh
i so loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update continue pls!! :)
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Hey it was a lovely one n the kiss also so lovely asya r sooo cute n i loved gifs which u put continue soon 😃
Edited by shailu143 - 10 years ago
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Unress soon! 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice & A Well Written part... 👏
Continue soon.. 😳
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all 3 are just amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
continue soon!!!!!😉

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