AsYa SS: ROTB Part 4 Updated and NOTE 2/5 PG.16 - Page 8

Originally posted by: -silentbang-

Poor Zoya.. Feeling bad for her

I know 😭

Originally posted by: Sanjhari

vvery nice
pls pm me next part

Thanks
Will do 😊

Originally posted by: AllAboutThatBas

hello

im new to the forum so im still figuring out how this works lol

i love to read Fan fictions

i was a big fan of qubool hai when ksg was asad but now i dont watch it, so i read what people write

this seems interesting

can you message me this ss so i can read the next update thanks

heey!
Welcome to the forum 😊
I know I miss the old days of qubool hai
KSG was amazing as Asad
Surbhi and Karan chemistry was mindblowing
Hope they come in a new drama
Thanks
Sure ill PM you next update 😃

Part 3

"I don't remember you?" Ayaan said "Really, we only had bio twice and I asked you to the prom." Humeria said "What?" "No I am just kidding, I was two years older" Humiera sighed in relief "And I spent most of high school tripping over my ears" Ayaan looked at Najma and nodded her head in a yes. Humeria spoke "So you still live here." Ayaan said, "Yeah I still live here, is that a problem." Humeria spoke "Oh no I didn't mean it like that." Ayaan spoke "Yeah you did." Najma also spoke "Yeah you did, now lets go find Zoya." She took Humeria and started to go when Ayaan said, "Bye, see you around." Humeria smiled at him and said, "Yes sure." They started to walk and Najma said, "Isn't he cute." "Yes he is." When they were leaving Tanveer spotted them again and came to them "Now you two just have to stay for the Wedding." Humeria spoke "ohh we would love to but I have this big audition and I have to think of ideas for my next book." They were trying to not go to the wedding. Tanveer laughs and said "Listen to you, you know you want to come to my wedding, and mother an I will adore you guys if you do." She turned back and said "Right mother." Razia smiled a fake smile and said, "Have a safe trip back." And left and then Tanveer spoke "Well we would, please think about it, okay bye." Humeria looked at Najma and rolled their eyes at her and then said, "Lets go find Zoya."

Zoya was crying in the bathroom, Humeria and Najma came in and heard her. Humeria knocked on the bathroom door and said "Zoya open the door please, don't cry." Zoya spoke from the bathroom "It okay, I'm fine." Blowing her nose in the tissue. "You have been dating Asad for like ever, you said he was the one what happened." Najma spoke "Why the hell didn't you call us?" Zoya spoke "Because you would have been mad at me and yelled at me." Najma bust open the door and said, "You are damn right we would have." Zoya came out of the bathroom sniffling and Humeria spoke "She stole him from you, didn't she." Zoya sat down on the stool and tried to cover up her puffy eyes with makeup and said, "No, no Tanveer is a good friend, After all she asked me to be her bridesmaid." Najma spoke "And why did you say yes." Zoya cried, "Because I was brought up well." Humeria spoke "Aww honey what are you going to do." Zoya said "Im going to be her bridesmaid and wear the pink anarkali she has designed and show the world that I am completely over Asad Ahmed Khan." She was lying she broke down and started crying. Humeria hugged her, Just then Sanaam and Sanam came in and saw Zoya crying Sanam said, "What wrong." Najma came forward and said "Um you know what? Zoya just find out that she signed up for a phone plan that doesn't have texting." Both the sanams gasped "Three years, no refund." Sanam said, "You should have asked me" and Sanaam said, "Uh huh Sanam knows all the phone plans." Sanam said, "I do but Sanaam knows where to find the best frozen yogurt anywhere." They both smiled at each other Najma spoke "So, wait let me get this straight, one of you guys fills in what the other doesn't know." They nodded their heads and said "Mmm-hmm" Najma said, "That is pretty awesome." The girls chuckled.

It was nighttime, Humeria and Najma were at Humeria's parents home. They were drinking juice when Najma spoke "Can you believe what Tanveer did?" Humeria said, "Yes I know, poor Zoya." Najma said, "I know its crazy, tell me about it." They sat on the couch when Humeria mom spoke to her husband "I still in the big suitcase." When he spoke "I know im getting it." Humeria spoke to Najma "What could Asad possibly see in Tanveer." Najma said, "Boobs. He is a guy." Humeria's Dad was behind them and he was hearing everything and he spoke "It's a business transaction" Najma said "business transaction?" Humeria's Dad came in front of them and said, "I shouldn't really say anything." Najma bribed him making him say more. Humeria spoke "Dad did you hear something down at the bank." He started at her and she spoke "Daddy?" and he finally said something "Well three months ago, Razia put Malkvilla up for sale." Humeria spoke "What?But they owned it forever" "Razia ran through a thirds husband's money." Was having trouble finding number four." (She would marry men for money) Najma spoke "Gold-diggin is a young person's game." Humeria's dad spoke "And Asad's family is loaded, A day after the engagement Razia took the house off of sale." Humeria's Dad left and Najma said "Sex for money?" and shook her head "It's good to see traditional marriage is alive and well."Humeria spoke "Poor Zoya, we should tell her." Najma spoke "Tell her that a she-witch stole the love of her life, I think she knows that Humeria." Humeria spoke "Okay, but its wrong, it is evil, we just cant drop it like.." She was about to continue when her cell rang "Oh its my agent I've got to take it." "Hello" she spoke into the Phone, "Oh! The audition I totally forgot about it, when do they want to see me." "Oh okay I see." "Not...okay Love you too bye." She hanged up the call and Najma spoke "Good news?" Humeria spoke "Not even a reading nothing, you know what the play was flawed, the female character were completely under written, it really wasn't worth my time." Najma spoke "you wanted it real bad didn't you." "So much." Najma patted her back and said "Yeah I know, lets go watch tv get your mind off."

They were in Humeria's room sitting on the bed watching a romantic movie, Humeria spoke "How could Asad and Zoya have mucked this up, they were perfect for each other" Najma spoke "You never met him." "I am highly Intuitive, they were meant for each other and now Asad is going to marry that B****, and Zoya is going to be heart broken forever" She switched off the tv mad at seeing romantic movies and said "Three thousand years of watching romantic comedies, and its just one big stinking lie, I mean the couple stumbles around for two hours and then miraculously, five minutes before the credit roll they realize that they are meant to be together." She laughs and sat on the other side of Najma "That is not how life works my friend." She grabbed the juice bottle but it was empty so she walked towards kitchen with Najma coming behind her "Actions movies have it right." Najma spoke "You hate action movies." They started walking downstairs "I hate them because they are right." "In actions movies some psycho path takes 25 sweet people hostage and he is going to kill them all, and then Bruce Willis come in." Najma spoke "Or Channing Tatum" "Also good, he puts together an elite SWAT team of Navy seals, and they go behind enemy lines, and they do what has to be done, they wipe out the henchmen, the psychopath dies a spectacular death, and the sweet people go free." They reached the kitchen she was getting the juice out fridge "That's what you need to make love work, a ruthless SWAT team with guns." Najma spoke "Haider didn't call you yet?" "No, he went to LA for pilot season with his scene partner that he swears he is not sleeping with." "You should not date actors." "Who else should I meet. "Oh you met that really cute guy today, Ayaan." "He liked you, the way he was looking at you and talking." "No, he did not like me." A minute later she spoke "Oh okay yeah he did like me but he is a trap, there is like 300 of them in every hometown, Nice regular guy, You go on one date and all of a sudden you wake up 10 years later with six kids, a fat ass, and ugly pink sweatpants." Najma spoke "Just admit it you like him, you really really like him don't you." She stammered, " I do not." Najma spoke "What are you going to do when he calls." "He is not going to call because nice guys don't call me, just selfish actors who screw their scene partner, now what are we going to do about Zoya?." Najma spoke "I say we go full bore SWAT team, and break up Tanveer and Asad." Humeria looked at her stunned "Are you crazy" Najma spoke " No I am serious, Right? That's what Will Smith or Mat Damon or any of those hot action guys would have done."

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Originally posted by: Sanjhari

Pls continue soon

This razia n tanveer will never mend their ways...

My poor zoya...but why did asad kiss that tanveer...?
Can't wait to read on

Hi lovely update tnaveer n raziya 😡 zoya is really innocent hope najma n humiera help her soon 😃 next update a long one 😳

nice

Great update! Loved it. I am confused. Asad is marrying Tanveer for sex and paying her? W*F? Anyhow, I have a request.. Towards the last paragraph, Humeira, Najma(not me 😆), talk, I couldnt quite understand who was speaking what. And its difficult to keep track of double inverted commas. Can you probably say something like, Humeira continued, or something? Once in a while, so we get a hang of it? Thanks!