AsYa SS: ROTB Part 4 Updated and NOTE 2/5 PG.16

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Hafsa

@hafsaraza

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Posted: 10 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: sasir
nice
poor zoya
sry iam still confused
razia n tanveer planned to marry off asad n tanveer for money
but y asad agreed for it
i still dont like what he is doing to zoya
she is so innocent
loved nazma n humeira's plan
hope it works
plz update soon

Thanks!!

i know i feel bad for her😭

You will find that out in couple of updates😉

Tanveer has him thinking stuff

yes she is

Yes it will work!! AsYa are going to be reunited

Will do soon!😊

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Hafsa

@hafsaraza

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#92

Originally posted by: najma123
Great update! Loved it. I am confused. Asad is marrying Tanveer for sex and paying her? W*F? Anyhow, I have a request.. Towards the last paragraph, Humeira, Najma(not me 😆), talk, I couldnt quite understand who was speaking what. And its difficult to keep track of double inverted commas. Can you probably say something like, Humeira continued, or something? Once in a while, so we get a hang of it? Thanks!

Thanks!!

Your confusion should be solved in couple of updates😊

Haha when i was rereading this for check and error i got confused also 😆

So next update ill make it into a script type so it easier for you guys to understand 😊

Your very welcome😉

Edited by -hotsauce- - 10 years ago

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Hafsa

@hafsaraza

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#93

Originally posted by: -silentbang-
Both the sanams gasped "Three years, no refund." Sanam said, "You should have asked me" and Sanaam said, "Uh huh Sanam knows all the phone plans.".
... This was hilarious 😆😆... Najma is so entertaining...
So humeria also liked Ayaan
Poor Zoya... I m feeling so bad for her...!
Hope Najma and humeria will soon find about this tanveer 😡
Update soon

hahah😆

yes she does

yeah feel bad for her too😭

they will dont worry

will do soon!😊

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Hafsa

@hafsaraza

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: Chahanya
Thank you for the pm
A really good part
Me likey

your welcomeee😊

thanks!!!

glad that you like it😃

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Hafsa

@hafsaraza

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#95

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs
Different story.liked it.
Plz pm me if u can.

Thanks!!!

sureee😊

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Hafsa

@hafsaraza

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#96

Originally posted by: asadzoyaqubool
Good update
najma n humeira knw d reason asad is marrying tanveer for
zoya is heartbroken
continue soon thnks fr d pm

Thanks!!

yes they do, now they just have to tell zoya

i know she is, Humeria and Najma will take tanveer down and Zoya will get her prince😊

will do soon! and your welcome!😊

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#97

Nice update
Zoya told her friends what she wants to do. Najma & humeira was sad after getting know abt asad .& tanveer marriage as business deal. Wow najma made a action plan to unite asad & zoya. Waiting for asad pov as well to know why he agreed. Continue soon plz. Thanks for pm

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aseela sha

@aseelashah

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#98

Nice update

Waiting to read Asad's POV too

I am eagerly waiting for the next update

Thanks for pm

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Nav

@kabhi_asya

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#99

Nice update...

Razia and tanveer are evil..

Najma has lost her mind...haahaa..

Well written...

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Heena

@aarzoo50

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#100

hw did asad land up with the witches...
i still cudnt get the deal there... it was razia who was going all bankrupt n kangaal ... thn y did asad agree fr the alliance...
plz reveal.soon