Asad-Zoya FF: The Sun Has Set Chapter 12 Page 102 - Page 67

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Posted: 9 years ago
This tale is just so gripping... with every new chapter there is a different angle to it or a twist...
Flawlessly written...

Once the story is complete... I will definitely re read it... trying to analyse it in a better way...

Kinda in a hurry now...

But brilliantly planned and executed...

I guess the body was Ahsaan's then?

Or maybe not?

But then why would ayaan think he needed to make a call to Darjeeling?

I feel terrible for her...

Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
It was SUPERB yaar 👏👏👏
Perfectly written👍🏼
Mind blowing job 🤪
Really love it❤️
Oh god poor zoya 😭
Each scen of zoya makes me cry for her😭😭
Really feel bad for her
But loved that at least asad once visited her😊
And she asked one more time her same question and got the same reply😭💔
Now with ayaan's call what will she do and how will react?
Hope to read some happy moments of her in this ff
Love it so much❤️
Waiting for next update


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Posted: 9 years ago

Hello Noe.. 😊

Hope you are doing well...

Coming to the update...IT was a Very good and a well written part.. 👏

Soo their was no past thing in this update,...but their are few points in this updates that I wanted to share.. 🤓

Why First Asad and then Ayaan said this to Zoya " Darjeeling mein tumhara khayal rakhne waale bahut honge.." if they don't know about her mother its fine if not then How are they so sure of it ? 🤔

Coming to the next thing...I think somewhere that trafficking case and this whole Ahsaan missing case have some connections...don't know just a blind guess..

And one more thing...I kind of think this Sinha Man is creepy😆 but he might be the man who will bring revelations to this case..

And one more thing...Asad did all the work and gather this tip about the cases of leopard attacks and all...if the scenario is as such that he is Ahsaan then won't he be engaging Ayaan into something so that his investigation is side tracked...

And last thing...Ayaan found something in that wallet...and decided to go to Darjeeling...and as my per assumptions it may be related to Ahsaan...but still it can be misplaced or rather done smartly by someone..

So many scenarios...are their..but still their is this curiosity among these things...which is intriguing..

Continue soonish..😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
A very interesting & detailed updt Noe👏👏 but this cliffy end let us wanting 4 more
I feel so bad Zoya only in d chapter she was so heartbroken that she wasn't reacting 2 anything now what will happen after this news 🥺
Even if Ahsan & Asad were 2 I was hoping & wishing 4 Zoya 2 have an happy ending
& what feels more bad is seeing d difference btw Zoya of past & present she was so lively girl back than 😔
Iss se acha toh Ahsan uski life main na hi aya hota toh acha hota poor girl
Now will she live d same life as her mother ?
I loved ur writing Noe but this chapter made me sad
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Well can we expect an Update...in this week...
HaD just completed ZOYA PROPOSES AND ASAD DISPOSES story yesterday...plannin to read SOMEWHERE IN TIME again tonight...
U should write more and frequently too...
Take care.


Thank you for rereading my stories. I feel special. 😳

Even I want to write more, every day, but it is simply not possible. And, one more thing, I am not a prolific writer. I spend a lot of time on each chapter. So, it is slow and hopefully steady. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -whitepearl-

hey noe..

great to see you with another awesome story

read all parts in one go..

I really loved it..

what's with the mystery of Asad/Ahsaan..

I think asad may have short term memory loss or something.

and about that birth mark, I think it may have been removed during an operation as he gets injured frequently (pretty badly in case of last time)

very good

update soonish and plz pm me

Khushi


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Oh...Thanks a lot for reading the story so far and glad that you are liking it. Also, ,good to see that your thinking cap is already on. Sochte rahiye. I can't say anything. 😉

Will send you PMs.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: jas91

Hi Noe

sorry I m really late😳
but loved d detailed updt
so Zoya's past is very much covered now
Zoya really had a tough time since d start
Ahsaan did seemed distant from her she always was carving 4 his attention
Yes he cared about her & Dillu & was always respectful but there was lack of love which Zoya wanted & deserved 😔
We can say she was hopelessly in love wid him but he wasn't
this quality too gives me d idea that he can b Asad as our Asad too is very strict & proper in his conduct keeping mind in his business so this makes me wonder 😆
what so ever 4 now I will enjoy d coming part hope u won't make Zoya cry too much cuz that's really difficult thing 2 read 😳


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Hi there! No problem. Late hi sahi, aap aaye to sahi 😃

Yes, poor Zoya loved lot more than what she got in return.

About him being similar to Asad - well...personal characteristics that we think are unique are actually not so unique. Gul ke saare heros ko hi dekh lo 😆. There can be multiple people with similar characteristics. That's all I would say 😛

I know crying Zoya makes everyone sad . Will try to make things better for her.

Thanks for reading and commenting. 😃

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Posted: 9 years ago
Interesting story. Can't wait to see what happened to Ahsaan. What was he up to?
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Posted: 9 years ago
Very nice update
So Zola returns home
Accept asad may not be her ahsan
So ayan is given to find abt her hubby
He promises to do everything he could
Nice of Asad to visit her before she left and offering to help in anyway
He was antsy when he couldn't get to know anything abt the case of the missing husband
Wow so glad Asad was able to help
So Ahsan is dead eaten by and animal but he was dead before
So tht is a mystery by itself how he die and y
But it seems to be confirm maybe by his wallet or watch
Or maybe he is going to confirm from zoya now
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wonderful update
Case in Ayaan hand. Liked his care towards Zoya. Asad also helped him to solve the case without any information. Some clues & he followed the lead. Waiting for next update soon. Thanks

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