Asad-Zoya FF: The Sun Has Set Chapter 12 Page 102 - Page 29

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Thanx for pm...
Loved it...

Loved the update. The story is getting more interesting with every update. Thanks for the pm.

read two parts in a go...

Wow what a wonderful update⭐️

I want to just say unres instead of res.

Breaking of res's will follow soon 😊

And the res's are now all broken 😉

Reading the flashback this chapter reminded me that Dilshad in no more in present. What a loss. I really like how the stranger has Zoe's umbrella and how Zoe complains about it. That line about his face in the raindrops is beautiful.😳

Ahsaan ki interview...Dilshad and Zarina grilling the botanist. 😆 Vaise I really like how Ahsaan is a tea botanist in this one. 😳 The parallel conversations in this particular part works really well, Dilshad, Zarina and Ahsaan one side, Zoe and Binu on the phone. The teasing between friends just about to graduate from college, is so reminiscent of the last college days, the world and life wide open, to all the dreams and possibilities. Friends moving on, some for jobs, others with marriage, the anticipation of the future stretches out a long way indeed. And of course Zarina trying to be a tough nut to crack, seems like crack she did, being defensive on his behalf already when Zoe was making fun of chai wala maali.🤣

And as expected he keeps to himself, and Zoe cannot help but wonder how does one do that.😆

Zarina sach main bahut smart hai, nice idea indeed to drop by without a heads up, kinda gives an idea how things really are. His room seems to have the best views indeed, loved the description, I could just imagine the rolling tea estates spreading all the way to horizon. ⭐️ I would love to see a view like that. A bit messy on personal front and yet very organized with work, and those books and journals, reader bhi hai, even if they are work related. So he likes to talk about work, and he registers that Zoe could probably help with some of his work, with all the history background that she has? 😃 And yet he is still a bit awkward when it comes to personal talk.

Very very handsome? 😉 Oh how Binu would have enjoyed pulling her leg on this one. 😆

So finally ACP Khan sees his doppelganger and his details, coffee drinker meets the tea botanist. 👍🏼

Really looking forward to the next part now.

Excellent story so far!! I am totally enjoying every bit of it.

hi...

Omg!!!! I am so in love with your writing s. It was just beautiful. I didn't get the pm. But kher the part was aaamazing. Keep writing jaldi next update. You left it at a cliffy so please update the next part soon.

Originally posted by: Noe123

Thank you very much. I am lucky to have so much love and appreciation from readers.😳

Many readers have this contradictory wish of Asad being Ahsaan and yet not. What shall I do? What shall I do? 😈

Super glad that you liked Shireen's intro scene. I very much liked writing it.

And, who is this little lady in the gif? Which Disney story that I can't recognize? Scratches head...

Thank you for reading and commenting.😊

Awesome + Interesting Update...👏

Just Love It...😊

Every Scene Is Mind-Blowing...👍🏼