Asad-Zoya FF: The Sun Has Set Chapter 12 Page 102 - Page 28

I was waiting for the update!!!! Loved the chappy!!!! mere dimaag ke ghode full speed doud rahe hai!!! can't wait for the story to move forward!!!

Loved the update, as always 😳.

awsm update
luvd it
cont asap.
thnx for the pm
t.c

story is bit clear nw
well written !!!!

Awesome stry. Read it 1 go. Pls update soon nd pls pm me.

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs

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Wow!!! Brilliantly written Noe.

I always loved all ur stories. They had everything different than the other.

Here you have touched a very different perspective of tea gardens.

Who thinks of them? How people spend their lives in such remote areas.

How do u think so different n where do u get such ideas from.

It's amazing⭐️👏

Loved the interrogations session with dilshad n zarina.

Zoya n Binu conversation was also funny.

So much mystery is involved that can't think straight.

Ahsaan having all history details n old maps gives me a feeling as if he is on a mission or something.

He is not wat he is showing.

Maybe he is on his mission but gets attracted to Zoya n loses focus for some time n therefore goes missing coz he can't continue the relationship.

I so wish Asad is not Ahsaan if he has cheated Zoya.

I think Asad must have seen Ahsan's pic on the file n he froze.

Waiting for the next part eagerly.

The thing with these mysteries is that it doesn't let u in peace till u know the suspense lol.

I don't know how long it will take to reach there .

It's a very different genre that u have tried n all the best for it.

Wonderful update
Like the way u told abt tea botanist. It's a new subject for me. Dilshad & zarina enquired br Ahsan. Zoya & binnu talks were nice. She was surprised to see that stranger become their tenant. On the other side, asad started his day but that was not nice. Ayaan handed file of Zoya to asad. Waiting to see whether he saw Ahsan picture or not. Continue soon plz. Thanks for pm

and it started with a bang...😊
Tea-botanist ...how I am imagining the handsome as a tea botanist...
I am mad ...more than ACP...tea botanist intrigues me...mysterious and interesting character...! Surely this guy is not what he is showing to others and his study area reminds me again about a mission and an ACP 😆 (back to square again..huh!!)
I am making a story in my mind and it is going almost according to my way only and I am waiting for the surprise..!
Oh! Noe I have always loved your subtle description of everything..! Like Zoya's imagination of Ahsaan's face on the window pane...! I love rain and after BNHH segment rain and AsYa became my obsession. I did not like the song much but I love it now...SIGH!!
Anyways back to Darjeeling...and AahYa...
Zoya is already liking him and he will come around her just for the sake of history I guess...and time will make a way to change their feelings!
ACP khan needs to work out his brain too...not only glare at inspector Khan...!
Ayaan' character has interesting punch which I will love to read more about..!

The dish is becoming my obsession day by day..and I am becoming greedy...want a sooner update...
Thanks for PM 🤗

Gud update so asya met