SaHil FF : Remember me ...? *Part 5 and 6 page 15*

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Anisa

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Posted: 10 years ago

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flora212

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Posted: 10 years ago

This is too much😡😭 serial me polygamy track se chutkara nahi milta and you wrote this! 😭 Better it be a fake SR btw chidiya chudail and my ahil😭😡 warna I swear I will kill you sage 😡 and yes better no divorce drama between Sahil 🤢 all should be well in the end 😡😭 ok enough of my anger🤣 now you wrote it brilliantly! Its awsome but I hope cvs don't go in this way cause they don't have no brains! They won't be able to handle such track 😆 update soon

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Anisa

@AnnzSageflower7

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Posted: 10 years ago

Here goes my broken Hindi. ..

Story pe dhamakedaar drama zaroori hai, varna bore ho jayegi...

Hahaa... *pats self on the back. *😆

I won't divorce them i promise. ..

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royalsgirl93

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Posted: 10 years ago

omgomgomgomg that was so sad I was shocked

thank god that didn't happen in the show lol

but plz don't separate them for too long; want to see where this story goes; n how you write it

plz continue :) xoxox great start though love it but sad

contine soon like soon xoxoxo

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flora212

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sageflower7
Here goes my broken Hindi. ..
Story pe dhamakedaar drama zaroori hai, varna bore ho jayegi...

Hahaa... *pats self on the back. *😆

I won't divorce them i promise. ..

I guess show me kuch zada hi drama dekh liya isliya darr gayi 😆 ah love ya for that 😲

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darkice7_12

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Posted: 10 years ago

sounds interesting. At least Sanam has made a decision, after being pushed to the limit. I fear that won't happen in the drama, she will continue to let others make her decisions for her. I hope to see her to stay strong in this story.

I'm glad you said no divorce. I wonder if these CVs know or care that with a true halala nikah, there has to be a full on consummation between the newly married couple before them being able to divorce and the wife going back to validly marry the first husband?

Once again, great start. Can't wait to see Aahil finally feeling Sanam loss and becoming a bit more clearheaded and smart again. I just want him to tell Tanveer to just shut up for once. I loved how you showed Tanveer going at him, as she does so often, and how he takes it in but has these conflicting thoughts of love, etc.

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Aashka

@Chillichick

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Posted: 10 years ago

This should happen on the show!

Because I know you wouldn't come up stupid tracks which are highly illogical!

Update soon and P.M me!

Can't wait to see how the story unfolds!

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Tannu

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Posted: 10 years ago

YESSS!! This is exactly what I need! It's so sad to see Sanam grovelling when she didn't do anything wrong. I mean understandably, Aahil's POV is justified but he should at least give her a chance to explain why she "ran away".

I'm glad that Sanam has taken this step in your FF. I think it's the push Aahil needs to properly realise Sanam's innocence. I think he knows secretly that she is without fault, but he's blinded by bloody Billo Rani.

I LOVE the fact that when Sanam walked in to see the other two in bed, Aahil didn't do that act of loving Sanam Number 2. I love that he immediately tried to explain his position like he had betrayed her. I love that when Sanam was having a rant about coming back because she loved him but now she wanted to leave, he went all panicky. I love the fact that you made her say "loved" instead of "love". Because it just pushes Aahil's real (undying) love for Sanam to the surface. And THAT is what needs to prevail with all the bullshit that's going on in the show.

I really like the direction of your FF so far (granted it's only the first chapter lol) but still, I think it's got A LOT of potential.

Fantastic Sagey!

Tannu

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evedallas1

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Posted: 10 years ago

Oh nooo 😭 This is so sad but I'm so happy at the same time 😆 so strange... Thank you ! In your story Sanam came back in her warrior mode quite fast ... enough is enough ! Damn it I really hate Tanveer. She get on my nerves on the show , she gets on my nerves in fanfics...

Go Away ! 🤢

Aahil deserves a good slap for what he did 😡 not for the fake cheating part but for the way he misbehaved with his first love, his legal wife ! God the nerves of him to sleep with the mistress in their bed... even he didn't do anything at the end of the night.

I'm glad to see him realizes he goes to far and push her in her limits. Mmmh I can't wait to see what's gonna happen and the way Aahil is going to realize his mistakes slowly and beg for an another chance. I hope Sanam won't accept him at the first attempt.

Than you so much ! I really loves the way you write and the suspense in your story 😉 I'm never disappointed. Great job 👏 Please update soon.

Edited by evedallas1 - 10 years ago