|AsYa(KaBhi)|Vivah: Part 9 Updated! 3/26 PG.70

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Posted: 10 years ago

#151

Awesome Update..Asya r supercute.

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Update Soonish..😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#152

Wow great!
Awesome update but pleach little long😊
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Edited by Starry-sky - 10 years ago

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ayat

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Posted: 10 years ago

#153

Waiting for next part

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Mayur Chan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#154

Loved the update...
It is getting better and better...
Now that terrace scene next i guess..?
Coninue soonn...

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Asif

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Posted: 10 years ago

#155

Lovely & cute update dear
U wrote all the scenes beautifully
Felt like watching a movie again
Liked the shy zoya.
Waiting for next update soon
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suni_104

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Posted: 10 years ago

#156

Superb update
Asad and zoya talking was cute
Asad said everything about him even he like girl
Continue soon
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shreya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#157

Nice update

While reading it looks like that I'm watching vivah moving

Make some changes or add another scenes too so that readers don't get bored

Like I also seen vivah movie many times n too remembered each n every lines so while reading i don't get excited like what's now have to come because I already knew so please make some changes or add some extra lovely scenes

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asadzoyaqubool

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Posted: 10 years ago

#158

Hi another good update

finallyyy asad zoya met😃

zoya ws shy so ws asad

waitin for another update already😆

thnks for d pm cntinue soon

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anopama

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Posted: 10 years ago

#159

Nice update

Happy Wala joyful family

Asad anxiousness

Seeing her staring her

He is not shy to talk no woh actually 😆

So a yes yay

Continue soon

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Hafsa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#160

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