|AsYa(KaBhi)|Vivah: Part 9 Updated! 3/26 PG.70 - Page 15

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: kayathre_sahill

It was seriously awesome !!

Thanks for the pm...
Do pm me the next update !!
Waiting for Asad to see Zoya



Thanks
Your welcome
Will doo
Next update is their meeting
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Devanshivaish

Nice one pls continue soon its really interesting

Pls continue pming me😳


Thanks!
will do
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Posted: 10 years ago
hey nice story sweety!
Please update soon!
And also do pm me😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Finally asad ahmad khan ki entry hue
Lovely update
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
NiceAsad finally made his entry
Love the update after all it is one of my fav movie
Sorry to hear u r not getting much likes
But I guess the readers aren't anxious to read as they know what will be happening next
So vivah was a full Hindu traditional movie with the family love and relation
But ur characters u have kept them as Muslims so like certain things don't flow for me
Like maa and babuji should be ammi abbu
Jiju should be bhaji it is nice to see tanveer and zoya has a nice relation for a change
Razia a witch as always
Like Asad being a loving adorable son especially to hi father but I don't see him as a guy saying papa he is more of a dad guy if he is modern or an abbu if traditional
And not bhaiya he should say bhaijaan and him putting his lap in his bhabi lap is not Asad
They could have still have tht convo and tht closeness he could just hold his Bhabhi hands and talk to her
Anyway waiting for more hope u get the ideas u r looking for from ur readers
Make some changes but not too much to change the whole story
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

Part 4

Nai Umaang Nai Khushi

Mehak Utha Hai Aangan

Haaye Re Ghar

Aaye Man Bhaawan

Mil Kar Kya Bole

Kya Bole Kyaa Bole

Re Milkar Kya Bole

Tanveer was fixing the fall of the saari, Zoya was telling her what to do. She was shy; Tanveer was looking at her and smiling. She draped the rest of the sari on her shoulder. She sat her down on the stool and kissed her head from the back, and she was about to leave but Zoya caught her hand, she was feeling nervous and shy. She started to laugh a little looking at Tanveer.

Downstairs, Munim was giving everyone a snack to eat, When he got to Razia, Razia hand signaled him that she doesn't want it, her face seemed like she wasn't interested in all of this, Munim smile faded he politely went away from her. While having their tea and snack Bagat ji spoke to Rashid more about Zoya's family "Gafoor basically belongs to Som Sarovar." "Achaa, Som Sarovar, where grapes grow? Gafoor replied "Ji Ji." "And our Bhabhi Ji is from Bhopal" Rashid poke "My in-laws are also from near Bhopal." Gafoor handed a plate of biscuit to Asad, But Rashid took his hand and made him sit next to Asad "You talk to Asad now, get to now him."

Bechiani Betaaabi


Aaj Mujhe Yeh Kaise

Gaffoor agreed and switched spots with Rashid

Aaj Hai Jo

Pehele Na Thi

Yeh Dil Ki Halat Aise

Zoya was putting on her bangles, and trying to look nice to go downstairs, and Tanveer was laughing behind and Zoya saw her in the mirror she glared at her for stop laughing and couple of seconds later she starting laughing with her.

Hooo

Ankhon Ko Usi Ka Intezaar Hai

Unhi Ke Liye Yeh Roop Yeh Shringar Hai

Asad was drinking water but his eyes were searching for Zoya, he kept looking up at the staircase. Zoya was doing her final touch on herself.

Dehki Hai Tasveeer Hi

Hooo

Aaj Milenehe Darshaan

Haye Re Dil Mein Hai Yeh Uljhan

Mil Kar Kya Bole ,

Kya Bole Kyaa Bole

Re Milkar Kya Bole

Tanveer was walking Zoya out of the room when Asad spotted someone upstairs and he was sure it was Zoya, he was anxious to see her. He was in his own world; he wasn't even listing to conversation that the adults were talking. He put the glass down and made himself present. Zoya walked down with Tanveer, Everyone saw her coming towards them and Gafoor stood up and made Zoya sit in front of Asad and Humeria. Humiera saw Asad face and he was shy, he couldn't even look up at her face, Humeria giggled at his shyness. Rashid was taking to Zoya, When Humiera gave Asad a plate of hot pepper, he wasn't even looking at the plate and was about to eat but he saw what he was eating and put it back down.

Roop ki raani aayi hai jaise

gaganse utarake Mere liye kyaa

mere liye aise sajake savarake

Humeria went to Zoya, and talked to her. While she was talking Asad was staring at her, She could feel a gaze on her and she felt shy. Asad smiled at her.

Sabse chupaake idhar udhar se

mujhako hi dekhe chor najarase

Asad called Ahsan over, and he started fixing his shirt making himself look busy, but he was busy admiring Zoya.

Baat labon par hai ruki

tejh dilon ki dhadakan

Haay re kal ke sajani saajan

Milkar kyaa bole kyaa bole kyaa

bole re milkar kyaa bole

Asad was in his own world, When Bagat Ji tapped his hand and asked what he was doing, he got out of his thoughts, and just pointed at Ahsan shirt, and patted Ahsan face. While he was doing this, Zoya had the opportunity to look at him, She lifted her eyes and saw him, her heart was beating faster. She looked away and continued talking. Humeria told Ayaan to talk to Zoya and introduce himself, he fixed his coat and talked to her. Rashid took Ahsan hands and said "Did you meet Zoya yet." He took him to Zoya and Ahsan held his hand out for Zoya to shake "Hello" Zoya shook his hand and said "hello" and pinched his cheek, while she was doing that Asad was looking at her talking to Ahsan , and he was smiling at this. Ahsan went to Bagat ji, and he kissed Ahsan on the cheek and fed him a ladoo. Asad's view of Zoya was blocked so he couldn't see her, so he leaned to the side, but the flower vase fell, he picked it up and luckily no one saw, he put the flower back in the vase, and sat on the chair like nothing happened.

"Gafoor now we have all met Zoya, with your permission let Asad and Zoya talk to each other, so they can get to know each other minds." "Humeria please take Asad and Zoya upstairs." Humeria and Zoya walked upstairs talking and Asad were behind him, Ahsan ran to the swing "Have we come to sit on the swing?" Humeria ran towards Ahsan and said "No, We've come to talk." Ahsan spoke in his kid voice "We couldn't talk downstairs." She took him by his hand and walked towards the sitting area. "Your chacha and aunt want to talk here." "Then what are we doing here?" "Ahsan no more question, now be quite" Asad was coming behind them and Tanveer was carrying a tray of cups and kettle. She jogged near Asad and he spoke "Hi, I am Asad." "My name is Tanveer, you can call me chotti, If the two of you get married, then I'm going to be your sister-in-law." Tanveer chuckled and past him to go put the tray on table.

"Zoya sit" Humeria said, Zoya didn't want to talk alone she was feeling nervous so she said "Please you sit too." And then Asad spoke "Yes, Bhabhi please sit." Everyone was standing and Ahsan was sitting down, he was getting irritated so he stood up and said "Why is no one sitting." Everyone chuckled at his comment. Humeria than spoke "Chotti, we're being formal and crowding over the ones who want privacy, so put down the tea tray and lets go." While taking Ahsan downstairs she said "okay Asad, Zoya all the best." Ahsan spoke "They got exam." "hmm" Tanveer put the tea tray down and went away. Asad and Zoya were still standing Asad motioned his hands telling Zoya to sit. They both sat down and they were silent for couple of mins, they both didn't know what to talk about. Asad spoke up "I'm not too sure that I know what we should be talking right now, we're meant to take a decision about our future together." Asad was playing with his hands, he was nervous. Asad had never felt like this, He always talk with girls and he had girlfriend in the past but talking to Zoya and that too about their future made him nervous. " But before we talk about our future, we have to talk about our past." Zoya was listing to him

"I went to school in Delhi, than for I went abroad to study, I studied Journalism, literature, basically trying to discover myself"

Asad kept on smiling and looking at Zoya

"My brother says, I'm too emotional in business matters."

Zoya smiled at him

"In college I liked this girl, she was my classmate, she use to sit on the desk in front of me."

"Several times, I felt like making conversation, but never had the guts to do so, and it was just as well because later I found out that she had two boyfriends already"

"I even tried smoking with friends, but since Humeria bhabhi caught me smoking I promised I would never smoke or drink." "I have never spoken of these things even with my abbu. But, I don't know why, I felt like I had to tell you." He was looking at Zoya, and when he said that she lifted her head and looked at him, "Im told you like reading and painting, which book are your favorites?" Zoya looked at up to him and said "I like to read a little bit of everything, mostly books in Urdu and Hindi, and I like to paint what I think is good to paint, I love to do portraits of people." Asad looked at her and smiled "Would you like to paint me someday." Zoya felt shy, she just looked down at her lap.

Asad asked her "Do you read spiritual books?" She nodded her head in a yes. "Do you believe in prayers? I mean, your trust, That Allah will give you what you ask." She looked up to his face and said "Somethings one has total faith in." Asad was wondering why is she not asking me any questions about my interest or past so he asked "You can ask me whatever you wish" "The tea is probably cold, do you want another cup." "No thanks." He grabbed the tea cup and started drinking, he looked at her and said "You have no questions to ask at all? Zoya nodded her head in a no "about that girl, maybe?" "I've all the answers." They look at each other and Asad said "If you wish we can meet again, once or twice." "Well then, shall we." They both stood and Asad let Zoya go first and Humeria and Tanveer came upstairs and giggled at the two, Tanveer took Zoya hands and ran to her room, Asad leaned and saw Zoya run off to her room and Humeria spoke "Sooo." He turned towards her and "Ohh... soo." and smiled looking down "Is that a yes." He started to speak "I think..." but Humeria said "It's on your face, Asad, it's a yes." Humeria started to run downstairs to tell everyone the good news but Asad stopped her and said "Bhabhi, one second! Listen to me I think we should meet again once or twice, for her sake." Humeria didn't listen to what he said and walked downstairs.

Rashid and Bagat Ji were looking at a painting, and Ayaan and Ahsan were sitting on the chair when Humeria spoke from the stairs "abbu it's a yes." Rashid said "Really" Ayaan got off his chair and said, "Where is Asad." Humeria pointed upstairs, He ran upstairs and Asad was looking down to see what was going on, and when he saw Ayaan coming up he looked away and started playing with the flowerpot that was on the ledge. Ayaan forward his hand for him to shake "Congratulations." "Thanks." After a minute they both smiled at each other and started to run.

Thank you guys for all the comments!!! Please press the like button and comment it actually encourages to me write better and it will help me update faster!

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Edited by -hotsauce- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely...really like the shy zoya...
cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

It was a nice update

Smiling all through

Asad lost in Zoya mirchi kha bhi leta

This ladka ladki first meeting is always so sharma shami wala

I liked it

Asad sach mein accha hai told her about so many things

Marriage ke liye meeting mein koi bolta hai i liked a girl but kabhi bolne ki himmat nahi hui ho jati toh she would have been your first GF kya

Liked it but would want to see some changes was trying to picture AsYa but Shahid and Amrita kept on blocking my imagination


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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely part
Thanks for pm
Plz pm me for next part
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey!
Awesome update!
Aww.. AsYa too cute
Update soon
And Thnx for d pm!

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