AsYa FF : Hopeless end (completed) -Chapter 17 - last part on page 111 - Page 59

Originally posted by: --Arpita--

it was beautiful work..
Asad savEd Zoya from fire..
Keep Writing...
Will love to read more...

thanks arpita
yes he did like a hero that he is😃
sure
will update soon

Originally posted by: -ABI-

thanks abi😛

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Awesome update
Zoya was in danger & asad felt it. She prayed for help to almighty & remember asad. Only Asya have taunting fight in the difficult time. Those light moments was wonderful. That showed the strength of their love. Zoya felt exhausted & slept. Asad took her to her hotel. After first aid, he left her with note. Hope he will prove himself soon. As for the note, I m ok whether u want to give long update or short. It's upto u. If u get a chance, give us long update otherwise short. Thanks for pm

thanks dear😛
glad you liked it... Yes our unique AsYa can only do it. Their love is strengthening from time time. He will prove himself in 2 to 3 chapters!
For now next update will be short but it will have second part that will be posted after promo

Originally posted by: --Arpita--

it was beautiful work..
Asad savEd Zoya from fire..
Keep Writing...
Will love to read more...

thanks arpita
yes he did like a hero that he is😃
sure
will update soon

Originally posted by: heemasomani

Amazing update

thanks heema😛

Originally posted by: kritz4ever

Loved it

Just completed reading all updates

Can u please send me pm when you next update

thanks kritz😛
glad you liked it
sure I will dear it's honour to have you as a new reader

Originally posted by: ankiecool

awesome yarmy asya baby

thanks ankie am glad you like it😃

Originally posted by: jas91

I m glad everything is fine now😃...& DOn't worry Ashi aise logon ki baton o seriously nahi lena chahiye😊

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Absolutely just like Asad learnt d hard way same way Zoya did too...That was my point exactly when u know a dog is on d street that can bite u, u can get cautious of d consequences but Asad was like a unaware passer-by so he got into trouble.

<em>I m gald u understood my point & just like u this story is very dear 2 me too I got u as frnd & d Story too was based on concept which was not widely explored by many writers.

you are so right jassy!😛 oh I love you soo much😉

absolutely right! But glad they got the lesson😉

you can always tell me what you are thinking jas it feels awesome to read honest reviews! I too got you as a friend and I really enjoy talking with you! Really? I thought many write on it

Originally posted by: jas91

Yippee so finally an updt & that too so long...I like it😃

1stly Love u 4 d dedication that was so sweet of u🤗

I loved d start with Zoya & Asad's monologues😛

Agree Zoe should forgive him but wid her self respect intact

Asad side was very touching as he's going though emotional phase & he do realise its his fault

Ek taraf Zoe se judaai dusri taraf this guilt of not trusting her & than having 2 see Billi infront of his eyes must b too much

Billi is happy dreaming 4 her wedding hope nxt part pe use uski kaminepan ka inaam mile😈

So Zoya decided 2 go in d factory 2 know truth about her nightmares & its connection wid her Abbu

Raziya OMG she cae & burnt d factory again evil women😡

Thank god Asad reached their 2 save her...Loved d Dil se dil ka connection 1 musibat main tha dusre ko khabar ho gayi

Their bickering was also entertaining 2 read felt so good 2 read it after sad phase😊

them calling names was so funny...Burnt kabab was epic🤣

Loved d end scene's when they were in garden & Asad taking sleeping Zoya 2 hotel😳

He himself was shaken & knew Zoya will also b that's why he took her 2 garden otherwise he has 2 leave her in hotel where she will b alone & think about d mishap again...that was realy touching😛

Asad seemed too casual wid her I guess that's 4 removing thoughts of d incident & indulge her in those nonsense bickering😉

Btw I expected Zoya 2 hear when Raziya was confessing her crimes cuz that way Both Raziya & Billi will b revealed removing all problems from Asya's life in 1 go

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<em>Anyways I m really happy wid this MAha updt Ashi😃

& as now u r gonna get busy I think we have 2 b ok wid short weekly updts that's my view

Good luck 4 new year in college

Take care dear

we'll miss u 🤗 keep coming when u get some free time😊

yes only for you😉...glad you did
love you too girl and dedication was needed your comment inspire to update fast

am happy you liked them
and Zoya will do same
yes asad is going through a lot but it is all his fault he is getting what he did with everyone

not really next part but coming two to three part as updates will be short and that's the prob!

Razia is evil but she will get punished.
They love each other and now their love has turn more strong so they feel each other pain

haha those took me lot of time oh I wrote whole update thinking so much as all this update was not planned but I write on everyone insistence!

Asad has changed and it was proof

yes Asad behaves casual for this only

that's not possible as razia's truth will be revealed but not here though she did a mistake here

i'l give a short update and promo soon this week only

miss me? Don't worry I will still haunt you all😉

Originally posted by: Kabhibloom

Awesome chapter

LOved it

Loved asya bickering

Hope asya unite soon

thanks dear
glad you liked it
yes your wish is going to fulfil soon they are going to unite soon