New Asya SS: A gift from life, chap 15, 04-05-15 COMPLETED - Page 53

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Posted: 10 years ago
C'est encore moi ! 😛

Laise moi te dire que j'ai A-DO-RE la conversation entre Sarah et son papa, en fait ca m'a fait pleurer... Du haut de ses 6 ans elle a su lui faire retrouver la raison avec ses mots d'enfants sans chichis, comme tu l'ecris si bien les enfants n'ont pas de filtres, ils disent ce qu'ils pensent comme ils le pensent et c'etait tout simplement superbe BRAVO 👏, la j'ai aime Sufian... La declaration de Zoya a Asad dans le cafe etait genialissime et elle le demande en marige trop mignon. Et leur mariage emouvant et amusant avec un Asad completement presse de faire Zoya sa femme... Bravo de savoir transmettre autant d'emotion dans ton ecrit.

J'ai cru comprendre que c'etait l'avant-dernier chapitre, j'ai hate de voir comment tu vas cloturer cette magnifique aventure, je suppose, comme dirait Sarah, comme un feux d'artifice !
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Posted: 10 years ago
So sorry 4 d very late comnt Rada😳
but was busy in something
updt was lovely
btw after a long gap whn I read last part wid fresh mind & keeping in mind ur reply 2 my comnt I think I was unable 2 understand this Human psychology what they think or do in a certain situation is unpredictable & can always confuse u but I think widout going much deep into that lets just leave it 4 now cuz d story had proceeded ahead wid just 1 chapter left.
So those kids were superstars of last updt⭐️⭐️⭐️
Salim encouraged Asad 2 fight hard 4 his love & Sarah has magically made Sufian understand the truth he was not wishing 2 accept but gald all ends well😊
Wid little little clues here & there in previous parts when he used 2 feel he did something wrong & d guilt I knew he was not very very bad guy or Villian & he proved it actually now 2 think of it I m happy Zoya's 1st choice was not very bad(I mean better 2 know he is not Villain😉)
So Asad went 2 airport was disappointed than ASya's meeting in d caf Zoya's proposal wid refreshing all her past was lovely😊
They didn't want 2 delay so they got married
Asad was hilarious after that asking 2 close d doors, not letting Quzi 2 ask his consent that was actually 1 of a kind I m sure uski jagah agar Zoya hoti of QH1 who bhi aisa na karti, then kissing in front of d family & give shagun ki pappi 2 every1 like DAdi in CNWK🤣
& their Suhagrat was also very very hilarious😆
another good story coming 2 end
but I m happy cuz b4 d end u always come up wid anoter new story😉
PS- If I m not wrong Epilogue of Runaway bride is long due na😕
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: jas91

So sorry 4 d very late comnt Rada😳

but was busy in something
updt was lovely
btw after a long gap whn I read last part wid fresh mind & keeping in mind ur reply 2 my comnt I think I was unable 2 understand this Human psychology what they think or do in a certain situation is unpredictable & can always confuse u but I think widout going much deep into that lets just leave it 4 now cuz d story had proceeded ahead wid just 1 chapter left.
So those kids were superstars of last updt⭐️⭐️⭐️
Salim encouraged Asad 2 fight hard 4 his love & Sarah has magically made Sufian understand the truth he was not wishing 2 accept but gald all ends well😊
Wid little little clues here & there in previous parts when he used 2 feel he did something wrong & d guilt I knew he was not very very bad guy or Villian & he proved it actually now 2 think of it I m happy Zoya's 1st choice was not very bad(I mean better 2 know he is not Villain😉)
So Asad went 2 airport was disappointed than ASya's meeting in d caf Zoya's proposal wid refreshing all her past was lovely😊
They didn't want 2 delay so they got married
Asad was hilarious after that asking 2 close d doors, not letting Quzi 2 ask his consent that was actually 1 of a kind I m sure uski jagah agar Zoya hoti of QH1 who bhi aisa na karti, then kissing in front of d family & give shagun ki pappi 2 every1 like DAdi in CNWK🤣
& their Suhagrat was also very very hilarious😆
another good story coming 2 end
but I m happy cuz b4 d end u always come up wid anoter new story😉
PS- If I m not wrong Epilogue of Runaway bride is long due na😕


Hello beautiful 😃

you know, I agree with you, the psycology was really complicated. I had an alternative story for the chap12, i could have let Zoya just lay down next to him all the night, to be in his arm for the last time. I thought about and it wouldn't be illogical, at all, because Zoya would have feel that she only deserve his arms but not him but I decided this way. I could also let her meet with an accident and Sufian would have realize his mistake. Anyway i am happy that it doesn't hurt you the way I write, i know i disapointed you but I am glad that in my last chapter, I gain you back 😆
you know when asad yelled qubool hai, it happen in my real life, when the mayor asked my uncle if he was agree, he yelled YEESS, it was so hilarious so i thought about it.

and for the runaway bride, maybe i will extand to two or three more chapter. i started writting it, but some part are confusing me, because i will treat about a delicate subject, i hope it won't be too much to bear for my readers.

Edited by radadolcevida - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Really really really ... Really loved it..
Amazing update...
The flashbacks of zoya waking in his arms, her feelings, going to saleem's room... Everything was so intense, full of love and full of pain at the same time.
Flashback of asad being awake whole time was just heart wrenching and painful.when he saw zoya talking to Saleem,that broke him down...loved every single part of these scenes...
Coming to sufian, after talking to zoya he felt restless and unwanted... He should exactly feel that only...
Zoya was alive and dead at same time...
Then, a mature salim talking/ convincing a lost asad was a treat for viewers/readers 😊
And what can I say about Sarah... This angel is so adorable... The way she talked to her father about happiness, love and care was commendable and no one...I mean NO ONE could have made sufian realize his crimes or mistakes...
These kids play the hero in this update...
So, sufian realize his own mistakes and try to correct them...nice scene. Then talking to zoya asking if she loved asad enough was brilliant scene ...
At last... Asya finding each other... The cafe scene...best...truly emotional...
Their marriage on the same day..just wow.. Like perfect ending of the sorrowful day...
Omg... I was shocked at asad's antics...he had lost it...completely. Man..he is in love and then kissing everyone.. Even anwar was hilarious...
Uff... Their fight on their first wedding night...they are idiots but irresistible at the same time...
Loved it...

P.s. sorry for the late reply/comment.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Loved d whole journey.. I read whole of dis FF today.. Its so amazing
M loving Salim n Sarah so much
N fr a change asad is d naughty, carefree n fun loving guy. Totally loved dis part
N not to forget my darling zo.
Finally finally!! Dey got married m so relieved.. Looking forward for more of dis beautiful ride of d 4 super cute ppl
Update soon n plz pm me d next parts
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: radadolcevida



Hello beautiful😃

you know, I agree with you, the psycology was really complicated. I had an alternative story for the chap12, i could have let Zoya just lay down next to him all the night, to be in his arm for the last time. I thought about and it wouldn't be illogical, at all, because Zoya would have feel that she only deserve his arms but not him but I decided this way. I could also let her meet with an accident and Sufian would have realize his mistake. Anyway i am happy that it doesn't hurt you the way I write, i know i disapointed you but I am glad that in my last chapter, I gain you back 😆
you know when asad yelled qubool hai, it happen in my real life, when the mayor asked my uncle if he was agree, he yelled YEESS, it was so hilarious so i thought about it.

and for the runaway bride, maybe i will extand to two or three more chapter. i started writting it, but some part are confusing me, because i will treat about a delicate subject, i hope it won't be too much to bear for my readers.




well i will be eagerly waiting for runaway bride...bt what delicate subject are you going to write...
is it infertility or something else
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: kaju27



well i will be eagerly waiting for runaway bride...bt what delicate subject are you going to write...
is it infertility or something else


exactly, only about the need to have child and how couple face this. There is one writter here who talked about, Tamara27 who write about it and the story is Barren (I didn't read the story yet). Because I love psychology , I would like to treat about the feeling of women and men in this phase, But don't worry, it's always a happy ending in y stories. 😉
One person in my life inspired me this story, it happened with her and now she is a happy mother.
I hope I will treat it with respect and nice way.

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Posted: 10 years ago
You should definetly try ' Barren ' Rada...
It likes hit you in the core of your heart and shatter your soul..
A perfect choice for such issue.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: MayurChan

You should definetly try ' Barren ' Rada...
It likes hit you in the core of your heart and shatter your soul..
A perfect choice for such issue.


I know, but I want to write mine first. I only read the first chapter and some comments (including yours and Jas and Tamara note's) and I know that I will like it. I like Tamara27 stories, she is really a talented writer here. But I keep it for later.
But for sure, I will read it 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: radadolcevida


I know, but I want to write mine first. I only read the first chapter and some comments (including yours and Jas and Tamara note's) and I know that I will like it. I like Tamara27 stories, she is really a talented writer here. But I keep it for later.
But for sure, I will read it😃


I don't think so I commented their...
Because I started comenting from Bubble's thread...and Barren* ended much before...
And Yeah can read whenever you want...
And You are also right about her stories being very very loving , perfect and wonderful...best for me was " In Love & War "...

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