New Asya SS: A gift from life, chap 15, 04-05-15 COMPLETED - Page 54

Originally posted by: MayurChan

I don't think so I commented their...
Because I started comenting from Bubble's thread...and Barren* ended much before...
And Yeah can read whenever you want...
And You are also right about her stories being very very loving , perfect and wonderful...best for me was " In Love & War "...

Originally posted by: radadolcevida

oh my mistake, I thought I have seen a comment of you in some of her stories. In love in war , my favorite and also "just a friend" and pinch of love, my two favorite one of her .

Yes In some of her stories I may have gone back and comented...like I did on her story The Incrideble forces of Destiny...
But not on Barren* I never read that againn...because it is that hard hitting...though it has a very desirable & beautiful end...but the plot was of top notch.
I liked Hopeless* more than Just Friends*.

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Yes In some of her stories I may have gone back and comented...like I did on her story The Incrideble forces of Destiny...
But not on Barren* I never read that againn...because it is that hard hitting...though it has a very desirable & beautiful end...but the plot was of top notch.
I liked Hopeless* more than Just Friends*.

Originally posted by: radadolcevida

you know what I know what I am going to read tonight😃, one of her stories, but not barren for the moment, it will be the cherry on the cake .

If i understand well about Barren, Asad betrayed ZOya in this story, anyway, knowing this, it gave a bit reluctance to read for the moment.

Of course, hopeless was really good too.

Go with either A Place called Home or Early Mornings at The Train Station...for FF's and if only TS then Pinch of Love is the best.
And About Barren* that is the crux their...That he did betrayed her but didn't cheated her...and the realisation and the coming parts are even more difficult.
Hey you can even try The Good Girl*..
The prequel to Barren*...that is a good one and will be helpful in knowing the plot in future when you read Barren*

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Go with either A Place called Home or Early Mornings at The Train Station...for FF's and if only TS then Pinch of Love is the best.
And About Barren* that is the crux their...That he did betrayed her but didn't cheated her...and the realisation and the coming parts are even more difficult.
Hey you can even try The Good Girl*..
The prequel to Barren*...that is a good one and will be helpful in knowing the plot in future when you read Barren*

Originally posted by: radadolcevida

Thanks a lot Mayur, I will try them. I am on holidays from tonight and I have many stories to read 😆

I will try good girl tonight or I will write the new chapter of gift from life (I didn't write a single words, my readers will kill me 😕) and crossing time too. I don't know what to do...

I am so happy to be on holidays,

I think you should try The Good Girl*..
Then from the next day or evening whatever it is try writing something with a fresh mind...
And If you go by my words...finish the epilogues of both the stories before thinking over Crossed Lines* because that is a very interesting and Intruguing and Time consuimng Story you have started...so do read something happy and good and then start with a new chappy of anyone you want.

Originally posted by: MayurChan

I think you should try The Good Girl*..
Then from the next day or evening whatever it is try writing something with a fresh mind...
And If you go by my words...finish the epilogues of both the stories before thinking over Crossed Lines* because that is a very interesting and Intruguing and Time consuimng Story you have started...so do read something happy and good and then start with a new chappy of anyone you want.

Originally posted by: radadolcevida

this is so true, you are absolutely right, "crossing time" story, it's a new way for me to write and it asked a lot of creativity to write and to mix past and present.

I will finish the gift from life, even if the chapter that I will update next, will not be the last one and the chapter of the runaway bride, it was for so long on hold. I have to finish it, I just hope , readers will like it.

Reader will love it whatever you present them Rada* 😃

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Reader will love it whatever you present them Rada* 😃

Originally posted by: radadolcevida

exactly, only about the need to have child and how couple face this. There is one writter here who talked about, Tamara27 who write about it and the story is Barren (I didn't read the story yet). Because I love psychology , I would like to treat about the feeling of women and men in this phase, But don't worry, it's always a happy ending in y stories.😉

One person in my life inspired me this story, it happened with her and now she is a happy mother.

I hope I will treat it with respect and nice way.

radha plsase dont write abt infidelity bcoz barren was so good bt asad's infidelity part was so depressing that iwas in depression for so many days...
so write abt infertility bt not infidelity
bcoz i really dont support it...if your wife is going through this the husband should be cooperative keeping aside his desires for sometime