'RING OF FIRE!'A SAHIL FOUR SHOT- PARTS 1 TO 4 -COMPLETED - Page 8

Originally posted by: mahwash22

OMG! Mandy!

You have done it yet again. You have managed to capture our hearts with this beautiful piece of writing. You are seriously so awesome! 🤗

I don't even know what do pinpoint because ALL of it was so well thought out and well written.

Oh, I loved the confrontation between Sanam and Aahil. I absolutely LOVED how you used their very first meeting dialogues. ⭐️ Damn, it was awesome! I had chills running down my spine by just reading it.

You did a fantastic job at describing the emotional battle Aahil was going through. I really felt bad for him. - And how I wish something like this would actually happen on the show - I swear, that would be the BEST THING EVER !! 👍🏼

I loved the touch of action and suspense toward the ending.!

"Ready Miss Dhabevali?"

"Ready Mr. Jallad Jinn!"

👏👏👏

Wow! You have no idea how much I enjoyed reading this from you, Mandy! ❤️ It was such a perfect read and I just know I would never get tired of reading this no matter how many times I've read it before.

Now, this is called True Writing !! 😳👍🏼

Originally posted by: sahil333

Awesome ending for such a brilliant story. 👏

Loved the way you took us down memory lane.

SaHil are together, how much I miss them both more than ever now.

Thank you for this beautiful read.

🤗

Mandy,

Originally posted by: minnie2308

Mandy,

this one was cool too. And it does project Sanam as little more fiery than what she is after marriage.(I refuse to comment on he recent docile avatar)

I loved the story... on;ly one peeve😆- It's told in a fast forward mode.

Specially the last part is like a gist of I presume QH1 and later QH2,

Or perhaps its just me wanting to read some more parts from you.

What I like with your story telling is the dominating stance. You dominate how we feel .

I may get exasperated with how the character is behaving but I am never able to fault the story flow and moreover, I never have the time to dwell on how better this character should have behaved.