'RING OF FIRE!'A SAHIL FOUR SHOT- PARTS 1 TO 4 -COMPLETED - Page 7

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Posted: 10 years ago
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beautiful ending. in your story, we had smart characters who actually took the trouble to gather all of their evidence, which is so easily available(!), and have it ready to present to Aahil.In your story we got people actually trusting Aahil with the truth. And this is what I want from Aahil, if he ever gets to know the truth, rational processing not outright rejection. Great story! I hope we see some of this in the show before it gets cancelled for being so silly/irrational.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: darkice7_12

beautiful ending. in your story, we had smart characters who actually took the trouble to gather all of their evidence, which is so easily available(!), and have it ready to present to Aahil.In your story we got people actually trusting Aahil with the truth. And this is what I want from Aahil, if he ever gets to know the truth, rational processing not outright rejection. Great story! I hope we see some of this in the show before it gets cancelled for being so silly/irrational.



Thank you! Yes, lets hope the show starts to show something logical and not black magic and hypnotism etc. Just stupid. How long are they going to keep this hypnotism BS up? Seriously! Lol


Yes the people in the story went on a limb and trusted Aahil with the truth. They had to do it! There really was no other choice available! Lets hope at least from now on, we get to see something meaningful in QH with Aahil finding out he didnt kill his Abbu!


Especially that Sanam 2 needs to be put in her place, and I want to see both Sanam and Aahil do it!


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Mandy Excellent👏 This is the ending we are all waiting for, sach mai I want to see the old sanam caring at the same time keeping her stand. Only the old sanam can tackle aahil. I wish someone will post this story on KVz twitter account or somewhere the CVs can see this. At least they should know this is the way the story should go not like the way they are planning and not making the story move forward.
Mandy I tell you are the best !!!!! what a superb ending, as long as sahil are together nothing can hurt them. Why is it necessary to seperate the couples in the name of twists? Well thanks so much for such a superb ending
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Posted: 10 years ago
#64

👏 fabulous ending Mandy !!

Loved the way you incorporated all the truths and revelations in one drama filled scene. . Really exciting!

Very satisfying end. I can relate when you say you can't stomach writing the confrontation ... I'm in the same conundrum!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Suku_SwaRon

Mandy Excellent👏 This is the ending we are all waiting for, sach mai I want to see the old sanam caring at the same time keeping her stand. Only the old sanam can tackle aahil. I wish someone will post this story on KVz twitter account or somewhere the CVs can see this. At least they should know this is the way the story should go not like the way they are planning and not making the story move forward.

Mandy I tell you are the best !!!!! what a superb ending, as long as sahil are together nothing can hurt them. Why is it necessary to seperate the couples in the name of twists? Well thanks so much for such a superb ending



Can someone get me a job writing the scripts for QH? I promise to do a much better job than the Black magic crowd! Lol


As for SAHIL, they need to unite and that is the only way things will work out for them in the future. Hopefully Sanam telling Aahil he is not a killer will get them on the first step towards togetherness!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sageflower7


👏 fabulous ending Mandy !!

Loved the way you incorporated all the truths and revelations in one drama filled scene. . Really exciting!

Very satisfying end. I can relate when you say you can't stomach writing the confrontation ... I'm in the same conundrum!



Thanks. Yes all the truths came out. As for the confrontation with Begum Sahiba...well who really want to write it? I bet that is why the CV's are avoiding it too! Imagine the high drama? The denials from her, the crocodile tears, the fake drama etc etc. I cringe just thinking about it!


But when that day does come, I hope it is good, and everyone gets to have a go at her. Sanam / Seher, Aahil, Rehan and then I want Dilshaad to make a special appearance and slap her hard a few times! LOL
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Posted: 10 years ago
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LOVED THE END!!!!!!!!!!!!! Just awesome! Love you Mandy!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Mandy great ending, wish something like this happen in the show too, but yes we all know will never happen, beautiful story, loved your take, you should send this story to Gul khan, woman has completely lost it, as always you wrote it so beautifully.. Great job, now I am waiting for my fav "aashiq" story😳 please do update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I have no words! What an AMAZING update!

Thank you for sharing your brilliant ideas with us 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow great ending! Loved it! Esp the references to the dhaba burning scene! Also the Jallad Jin and Miss Dhabewaali in end! It was wonderful! The ending and the revealing was very well done. I hope we get to see something logical like this on the show! Great job once again!

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