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Posted: 10 years ago
resyyy...
me 1st again for 2nd time 😳
unres...

amazing update...
loved it...
sanam unknowlingly coming towards iman...
but aahil...
i want sahil that tooo super soon...
plzzz sanam ko samjhao 😆
thanks for pm dear 😊
love u 🤗
update soon...
Edited by ashiii333 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
u didn't reply to my previous comment 😔
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Posted: 10 years ago
amazing part..
sanam caring nature towards imman..
Hope sahil will togethr soon..
waitng for anther update
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ohhh love how you give us little glimpses from the past. We know what happened but you give the little details which is nice cus it closes everything up together

Ahil feel sad for him. Poor guy has everything but still missing his begun and he's so broken :(

I'm so glad that seher burst. It feels like Sanam is all "only we went through pain. No one understands" common woman people go through pain you gotta move on!

So well written. Loving the way this is heading
Thanks tons
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Posted: 10 years ago
thank you for the pm ...awesome and very sad update...I really love it ...we have cute relation between sanam and imman like mother and her daughter
poor ahil he was so broken like when he discovered the truth ...very sad part ...
I can't wait to read more from you ...pls update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Res 😉

Unres!

Omg another awesome update I am so glad this came pretty quick! I am always waiting for these updates!! 😆😆


She bit her lip. "I like it when you have light stubble on. It suits you well. You look..."
"Handsome? Hot? Edgy??" Aahil smirked.
Sanam smiled cupping his face into her hands. "Like a true Nawab."
...
I guess some things never change. Perhaps they shouldn't.'

My favorite part! This made me laugh, knowing how much we love his stubble 😆 and I also teared cuz of the fact that for Aahil, this is a memory, the past. The separation in your story is even more painful with whats going on in the show. 😭 But yes our Nawab needs thats stubble to look extra sexy, classy and like Sanam said, a true Nawab! Reminded me of many of our discussions ☺️ Now about his hair on the show... If only Sanam was around to do something about that too 😆

A special mention to the bond between Imaan and Aahil! I have said it before too but in the scene of her nightmare, it was even more beautiful! ❤️ You did such an awesome job writing the father daughter bond! 👏 If only we got to see such mature yet exciting stories on screen! Its so heartwarming! 😳

"You wanted power and money, right? Well I'll show you just how powerful this Nawab can be. You haven't manipulated the son! But the Nawab of Bhopal. And I'll see how anyone walks away from it."

This made me shiver! Although Aahil's reaction on the show made sense and I am glad he remained a loyal and good son till the end, his fury is also understandable! I can expect him to go crazy, lose control and become engraged upon finding out about the deception that basically took a hold over his entire life! Brilliantly described ⭐️

He couldn't control the burning anger, sadness or devotion and without thinking he reached out and smashed the mirror with one fierce punch which caused a huge sound in the house.

Aahil ignored the pain in his hand that was now bleeding heavily. He kept punching and throwing everything around - Ignoring the red liquor floating on his injured hand.

"Why? I can't live with this pain anymore. I can't!" Tears flowed down from his brown eyes which he couldn't hide anymore.

Aahil's pain 🥺 The way you have wrote it! Omg it was powerful! I could see it happen before me! Its heartbreaking to see him like that 😭😭 The last bit was just so powerful! The imagery, the words, the pain! Aahil as a broken man touched me so much! His pain can be felt by each and every reader and that is why you should be so proud of your work! You make us feel the emotions so strongly! 👏 I reread that part because it was so strong! Gorgeous piece of writing my love 🤗❤️

Now the teaser is quite teasing 😉 Especially the first and last line! So excited for the next part, esp Aahil wanting his Begum back! My poor baby suffers each time! 😭 I feel like wrapping my arms around our sexy yet adorable Nawab! But only Sanam reserves that right 😉😆 Lovely update! Probably one of my most favorites, but then they all are, lets just say the entire story is one of my favorites 😉 Hope u do update by this weekend! Waiting impatiently 😉
Edited by Raingoddess - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Awesome chapter Mahu! 👍🏼

I love the relationships and convo's between the siblings...father and daughter...uncle and niece...
Caring Aahil and his love for his daughter is so endearing...
The love everybody has for little Imaan...she has truly captured every ones heart...loved it
Aahil's FB is so painful to read...
Love "the thing" between Sanam and Imaan...these 2 already love each other 😊
Aahil and Sanam...still a long way to go ...sigh! 😔
When Aahil snapped at Imaan I was a little 😲...poor innocent baby...how could he...he better make it up to her, but knowing Aahil he will do it for sure..
And what a thriller teaser for the next update...
Aahil seems mad at Rehaan?
What's going on there! 😲
I just can't wait for the next part...
Thx for the pm 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful update Mahu!
I can almost touch Aahil's pain. Beautifully written.
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Posted: 10 years ago
wonderful part loved it
imaan is so sweet
saahil both are again in their memories of past
sehaan trying for saahil to patch up
ahil past and feelings are emotional
i hope saahil clear their problems soon
thanx for pm
plz pm me for next part
continue soon
sorry for late commenting
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Posted: 10 years ago
Great chapter. I loved how Seher/Rehan reminded their siblings they are not the only ones suffering. And how great was it that Sanam made an effort for Imaan? Update soon. Can't wait to read the next chapter.

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