*sigh* This chapter was heavy and bursting with emotions! Sheer brilliance 👏 Really I needed some time to reread and take it all in, enjoying each part before actually commenting! Trust me, I loved it!
Awww.. You're making me blush, Esha!! I love you so much and the way you always give feedback is the best thing ever! I swear! ❤️
Even I needed a LONG moment before I could reply properly.
I love the fact that you pin point the things you liked the most! It really touched me deeply. 😳
"You felt exactly what you're trying to cover up. Sanam I know you. I gave myself to you," he spoke with so many emotions attached to his shaking voice."
That was so touching! I love when he said, "I gave myself to you" That was beautiful! For a guy like Aahil who has been with numerous women, this means so much. They have all been with him at the physical level, but no one has touched him emotionally other than Sanam! She is the only one he has surrendered his heart and soul too! He belongs to her! He is safe only in her arms! The only woman he as ever made love to was Sanam! Beautiful 😭 The emotional feeling behind the physical act It means so much to him! Poor baby 😭
Exactly!
That is the exact thing I wanted to convey! For a guy like Aahil, being with the woman he loves and actually made love to her, means a lot to him. You've actually said it better than I have. 👏
Oh, how I love reading your comment. I actually slept with a smile on my face when I read it last night. That's the effect you have on me, my beautiful darling. ❤️
Aahil felt himself lean in as his mind began to get clouded. They were so close. So dangerously close.
"You want this as well, don't you?" Aahil spoke huskily.
Hawt ☺️ Its always dangerous when they get close 😉 The temperature gets very high 😆
Yes! That's what our SaHil is all about. ☺️
"But I won't lose hope, because loosing hope would mean the end of us. I pray that love will remind you of what we had. I still hold on to that feeling. I won't let go, Sanam. I won't. I will prove myself to you that I am worthy of your love."
He stumbled back as his eyes glistered of unshed tears. "I only loved you, Sanam. And it shall remain that way."
I love Aahil ❤️ This part made me tear up so much 😭 No Aahil you can never lose hope! You can never let go 😭 This reminds me of whats coming on the show... His love is so pure ❤️ Yes Aahil prove it to her! Make her realize how deep your love is! Damn this was so so good!!! He only loved her and always will 😭 My SaHil feels!!! Love u so much for writing parts like this <3
Gaaah... Words are really failing me right now.. I don't even know what to say or write. You've made me speechless! Thank you so much for all the love. The feedback I get is so overwhelming. I'm really touched by how much the story is being appreciated.
I also loved the way u described how he reacted to the truth! Thats exactly how I expected him too! Very descriptive and well written! ⭐️ It was painful to read about the pain he went thru!!!
I wanted to write him as angry and aggressive! Even though I would agree that he would never hate his mother, but I wanted to see some parts of anger and pain Aahil went through. But I'm glad it was well received!
"I've seen him cry, Sanam. I always thought that no one could match my Bhai. But I was wrong. He met you, and fell in love. I've seen him stare at the moon every single night in the hope of you coming back to him. I've seen him cry in front of Allah. He has changed. Perhaps for the better, I don't know. All I do know is that he's in pain and he still misses his Begum."
Beautiful Yes Sanam, he needs you! He needs his Begum! Please go to him, heal all those wounds! Girl, notice all the signs! Even God wants you guys to be together! The dargah part was also beautiful I hope they get to talk!
This was so gorgeously written! You made me tear up in while reading this! So many emotions! Passion, pain, the need for each other!!! It was awesome!!! I cant praise u enuf! Cant wait for the next update, esp knowing what I know 😉 Ur too awesome girl 🤗 Plz update soon and thank u so much for this lovely update and the pm ❤️
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